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Kalsapher
KalsapherLv48mth
2024-07-29 09:40

I liked the story quite a bit then *spoiler* mc does Mito Uzamaki at 13yrs old I mean come on. I have lost all interest in continuing as this is a trend i see quite abit probably by the time this ends the mc would have every female character from before the third war including his own mom. Yea thats also heavily implied as well.

Red Nara

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Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

really i got the opposit impresison author seems to be super coward towards chaning things that can affect the cannon " main cast" have you not notice that all the females he is even looking at are either singel in cannon or have died or are an oc from some off branch off a clan , i mean mito have absolutley no power or relation to the main cast so she is a prime target for author .. he/she is really predictable

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Kalsapher
KalsapherLv4

your not wrong. Although Kushina is a bit suspect. But theres also not alot of women that would affect cannon in the current timeline. Unless he goes for one of the nines moms, shizune (good chance) or Tsunade (which I am almost certain) Theres not a whole lot in village that would upset the timeline too much. Its just like I said I've seen this trend quite a bit and typically it almost always goes the same route with mc ending up with far too many women just outta nowhere and then youve got 7/10 chapters of no story with a focus on one or of the harem. No problem with a harem i actually enjoy quite a few stories that way. But With his mom being hinted her friend already being done and mito and others (later) being added. The harem setup already has issues imop. Now I could be wrong and my prediction is entirely off but my guts telling me Im not.

Na1gel:really i got the opposit impresison author seems to be super coward towards chaning things that can affect the cannon " main cast" have you not notice that all the females he is even looking at are either singel in cannon or have died or are an oc from some off branch off a clan , i mean mito have absolutley no power or relation to the main cast so she is a prime target for author .. he/she is really predictable
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Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

true true, welp ive already stopped reading the story it feels to monotone for me feels like the story is on repeat but just with different things and all the chapters are super short xD

Kalsapher:your not wrong. Although Kushina is a bit suspect. But theres also not alot of women that would affect cannon in the current timeline. Unless he goes for one of the nines moms, shizune (good chance) or Tsunade (which I am almost certain) Theres not a whole lot in village that would upset the timeline too much. Its just like I said I've seen this trend quite a bit and typically it almost always goes the same route with mc ending up with far too many women just outta nowhere and then youve got 7/10 chapters of no story with a focus on one or of the harem. No problem with a harem i actually enjoy quite a few stories that way. But With his mom being hinted her friend already being done and mito and others (later) being added. The harem setup already has issues imop. Now I could be wrong and my prediction is entirely off but my guts telling me Im not.
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GOMEDRA
GOMEDRALv3

Mito Uzumaki, no es la abuela de Tsunade?

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Kalsapher
KalsapherLv4

yea they find a way to safely transfer the kyuubi and she reverts to her younger self instead of a grandma shes once again a beautiful young woman. So of course she sleeps with a teenager.

GOMEDRA:Mito Uzumaki, no es la abuela de Tsunade?
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monke6
monke6Lv4

the story's probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read on this app but the problem is that the constant amount of grammar mistakes make it worse and ruin the immersion like they call the nine tails kurama, call root "ne", calling the MCs mum the wrong name and just swapping words around. author please proof read your chapters before you post them

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the world building is interesting and the scenario is quite entertaining but, there are a lot of grammatical errors. They become bad enough that the meaning of sentences are reversed. The best example is the description, that says that the story happens after the manga even though it actually happens during the second great ninja war. If you can ignore those errors, then go ahead and read, it's an entertaining story

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