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Magic Hitman

Tác giả: FunniestGuy
Martial Arts
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What is Magic Hitman

Đọc tiểu thuyết Magic Hitman của tác giả FunniestGuy được xuất bản trên WebNovel.In the magical world of Lockintum, there are Dragons, Humans, Demons, and everything in between! Come explore this new world and new power system...

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In the magical world of Lockintum, there are Dragons, Humans, Demons, and everything in between! Come explore this new world and new power system

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Warning: Mature content ahead. Writing for Web Novel Spirity Awards 2024 ============ "All your dreams will come true." A hope, or whatever it was, was something else for me. A way to escape from this miserable life. To experience the frailty of humanity that even just a shimmer of hope, whether it was true or not, was enough for me to make a decision that broke all laws of morality. But in the end I was human, so I did it. For my happiness, I sacrificed the only person nice to me in this cruel world. =============== Where is this? What is this place? Why is everything so old? Young So Won, or in this world known as Jack, was transported in a world of olden days where laws and morality change according to who hold power. Light and Evil, both exist in this world. the question is, who will jack side with? Will he side with light and discover many evils hidden within light or will he succumb to evil where he will discover many different emotions? Or will he take control of everything with his own power and stand above all? Will he repeat all the mistakes of his previous life or turn out to be a person who would torment people just how they had tormented him? Only time will tell. So come and follow Jack as he carves his own destiny after he was given power in this new world. ================== This is my fourth novel and I have high hopes for it as I have practiced quite a lot to improve my writing and relay proper scenes to the audience. This novel will consist of many tags but you will have to discover them as time go by. There is also adultery and other adult scenes in it and I will mark them accordingly. for the rest, you will have to read them on their own. If you have suggestions, then don't hesitate to state your opinion. The cover isn't mine and if the owner wants, I can take it down. I hope you enjoy it and visit my main work while you read it, "The adventures of Sex Demon". That's it, happy readings. ======= Bonus chapters: Not available until twenty chapters

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Homeless_Traveler
Homeless_TravelerLv1Homeless_Traveler

I must say your writing style deviated from the common practice (using Author's Note a bit too much, and the dialogues are done differently). It takes a tremendous amount of time for people to shift their preferences, so be warned. overall, the story is good.

Envy_Sin
Envy_SinLv1Envy_Sin

just finished reading all the chapters, pretty cool book. I do recommend reading this with some cool music in the background, it makes the experience like 10x better.

PRO_GAMER_2345
PRO_GAMER_2345Lv3PRO_GAMER_2345

A good novel, writing quality is excellent. But I would say a bit more world background would make the novel a very good choice. Over all, a new novel that would catch your attention very fast.

Itsurbff_who_reads
Itsurbff_who_readsLv2Itsurbff_who_reads

This book is good. It has a good plot yet lacks many things. There needs to be less author notes in the middle of the story, it is rather annoying. Maybe also fix some grammatical mistakes. I’d advice grammerly. Try adding more of the setting so we can imagine where it is taking place. The character design is interesting keep it up. Overall it’s good, just needs polishing.

JoeyMama
JoeyMamaLv1JoeyMama

Very cool, I only don't like a few things, like you use authors notes a bit to much, the power system was explained in 1 chapter instead of throughout the story, but other than that it's good, I highly recommend.

An_Average_Author
An_Average_AuthorLv3An_Average_Author

Lots of POV switches and A/N. But, besides that, it is a good story so far. I really like the world and how you incorporate the power system.

VegetaEgo
VegetaEgoLv1VegetaEgo

I saw your book on Ashy's discord though I don't talk much, love the book and I hope you continue writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CryingSilence
CryingSilenceLv1CryingSilence

Okay, so kinda a weird story. 1. Writing style is weird, but unique. Only downfall to it is that there are so much POV changes that you sometimes forget who is talking as the author introduces a lot of characters, but we don't have time to figure out who is who yet. 2. Can't really rate this as it is a new novel. 3. Story development seems really forced, and the Asomethingsomething for some reason explained everything to the MC instead of just forcing him to become a hitman which just felt really forced and not real. 4. Character design is okay, there hasn't been anything unique yet, so a solid 4. 5. World background is the best part, as the power system is something I've never seen before. Really awesome. Overall, a good novel.

McWms99
McWms99Lv2McWms99

Sigh look I know I gave it a 3 star review, don't let that number stop you from reading please. This power system I love it too pieces the writing style of the author just needs some polishing on the mechanics. There's not huge grammar issues or anything it's readable just needs work. I'll follow this series closely hopefully one day I can give it the 5 stars I know this story should be able to get.

Esakome_Mariam
Esakome_MariamLv3Esakome_Mariam

Nice story with a nice book cover [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] don’t stop writing [img=update][img=update]

FunniestGuy
FunniestGuyTác giảFunniestGuy

I'm the author, of course i'd rate my own book 5 stars ........................................................................................................

FunniestGuy
FunniestGuyTác giảFunniestGuy

I'm the author, of course i'd rate my own book 5 stars ........................................................................................................

FunniestGuy
FunniestGuyTác giảFunniestGuy

.............................................................................................................................................................................of course i'd rate my own book 5 stars

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