Dear readers, Hello! I'm Homeless Traveler, a newcomer in creative writing!
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But the teacher said to exclude rune, incantation and magic circle?
Bro, did you just experience a flood? Hope you're save
This dialogue is a bit confusing...
Do you mean the former? The latter would be Cio
The author did an excellent job of narrating the story. The writing quality is also great, though some punctuation problems can be seen in some parts. Other than that, there's nothing else to nitpick. Keep going! (fire)
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Thank you so much for your reviews!
The first conflict was introduced quite slowly, and honestly, I thought this work would be boring. But I was wrong; the story is actually very good! Moreover, the writing was very neat. Looking forward to this story's completion!
The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!