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when i first started reading the story I was intrigued because of his personality and suddenly he turns selfish and ambitious to complete selfless person who helps the person who kisses his would be in his engagement and loving the girl who betrays him.The story took a turn for worse after the betrayal of amulya.It just became difficult to read after that.i am just giving my honest opinion about the flow of the story.

let take this comment and let me try to break it down.

1 selfish to selfless.

first he consider himself to be a outsider who has been put in place of raj and he have to secure himself a future because bantu is coming take all of (here i make a mistake will explain in bantu part). so he had to secure his future and as every human try to secure themself a future he will become selfish and will not hesitate to become coldl and heartless person .

then he start getting affeccted by raj emotion which consider himself to be part of family distant(he become beacuse of self-pity) his previous life able to watch his life through lens was abkle to see how much yashu love and care about and he started to influence by emotion . as all human are social being (science) . he start to feel yashu love and start to consider her as his mother(VERY IMPORTANT) . which open the close door and he was able to see himself as the part of world and not a transmigrate person which change everything.

2 bantu

he was scared of him first as he was the MAIN CHARACTER OF WORLD . which is pretty scary thing . so raj goes defensive and see him a threat , later as raj start gaining confidence , he start to not feel threaten by bantu .( my mistake whatever would have happen raj would still have 50 % property that i forget in first few chapter hence excesse rxn anything related to bantu).then as he start to see yashu as his OWN mother he start to consider her happiness , and he knew he would suffocate if he didn't tell her that secret . and at last he don't feel threathen by bantu . so he think of divulge it. i could have write about in more death , but i see plot not progress faster so skip on some material as i am writing a FAN-FIC not anovel that will earn me something. and at first i pick up the thought of writing as a spure of moment. i can write more point but i think,it is more than enough

3 amulya

he first start to see her a trophy to win .as we all have watch movie and saw how beautifull,intelligent and also sexy she was . so he desire her. but after he start to think himself as a part of world . he decided to pursue a genuine connection with her and also formed that but as they were on stage of feeling thing for each other . grandpa urge/force raj to marry they were not able to truly love each other but they had a connection which they can work on . then paris happen(my mistake i didn't clarify till what stage thing happen) , i consider that as them sharing few moment of connection as bantu would have been relentless in her pursuit. so at weeding bantu frustrated kiss her . she did not take part in it so she did not outright betray they were caught and misunderstood she feel shame in not able to push bantu beacuse those paris moment surface in her mind. she did not betray him , i created scenario where she was misunderstood she betray raj and she was not able to defend as she was in self-guilt . which keep spiraling. all this happen as timeline got fast forward and bantu was not able to win her love and raj was not able to solidify her affection due to urgency by grandfather.

now on FLOW 

that beacuse i keep changing story telling style

1 monoluge oriented 

2 dialouge oriented 

3 scenario oriented (currently using)

why you dont like it Daoist184799

beacuse you enter in via reading 1st story telling and now i am using 3rd regularly .

and why this mistake happen

beacuse i am righting for first time and they will continue to happen as see with what speed i am writing , you SHITface

or this is what i think , you can correct me where i am wrong .

if you want to read a masterpiece , go and read REBORN IN MOVIEVERSE

NO CHAPTER FOR SOME TIME NOW BYE-BYE!!