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The Ultimate Support Character

Author: Dyrem
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Synopsis Kuramoto Daisuke, a freshman in High School was suddenly exposed to someone vanishing in front of him. Turns out he was admitted to a Special Class full of Isekai Heroes that were regularly summoned to Otherworlds since the start of their Middle School. He was told that he was to become their Support to prevent each of the Heroes' fate of dying in the world they were summoned into. Though mediocre, he realized that his ability has a great potential but it needs a lot of hard work on his part. Unconvinced of being just the Support Character, he vowed to excavate his mediocre ability, all the while supporting the Heroes using it. And maybe more. Join my Discord Server: https://discord.gg/BWBWUrU

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Chapter 1I'm not a Hero, But a Support

The second week of April. This is the day when I will finally become a high school student.

Being admitted to one of the most prestigious schools in the nation, my parents were too happy that they sent me to live in the school's dorm. Well, it's not really about that. The class I was admitted to requires me to live here on top of the school's generous offer to waive my tuition and living expenses.

As it was my first time living alone, I was somewhat depressed and couldn't think well during the opening ceremony. I only stood still, thinking how to live independently from now on.

Because of that, the opening ceremony passed without me noticing.

On our way back to the classroom, I simply followed the instruction as well as the person in front of me.

However, something unexpected happened and never in my life would I think something like this could possibly happen!

The person I was following suddenly stopped and from in front of my eyes, a magic circle that I could only see on anime or movies appeared beneath his feet and shined brilliantly that I had to close my eyes to avoid being blinded by it.

When I opened my eyes again, the person or a student vanished on that spot!

That freaking instance majestically woke me up out of my trance!

What the hell?

What has just happened?

I looked around to see the other's reaction, to check whether I was dreaming or not. However, the look in my classmates' eyes was all normal, no one found it strange or suspicious! They even looked amused and not panicked as if it's a normal occurrence. What's wrong with these people?

"Oh, Hiroda got summoned back."

One of the guys from behind me said.

"What kind of world summoned him again? He's the first this year. And it's a forced summoning on top of that."

One of the girls asked.

"I think it was a total magic world. With wizards and witches. Is it called World of Magic?"

Hearing this conversation, I stood dumbstruck. What the hell are they talking about?

Summoned?

Magic world?

What kind of class have I gotten in?

What kind of school did I just got admitted to?

"Hey, hurry up. Why did you stop? We're all gonna be late" Since I was standing dumbstruck as I watched their reactions, the guy from behind pushed me to make me move.

"Huh? Who's he? Is there someone new in our class?"

While I kept rooted there, one of the girls suddenly put up a question as she pointed at me.

"Really? I thought there are only 30 of us."

The girl behind her added.

"It's true. He's a new face. Can someone explain, please? Class president... Are you there?"

One student at the back shouted as he called out to the front of the line. Because of that, everyone's attention was now focused on me.

"Shut up. There's no class president yet."

As an answer to that, other students started chiming in.

Upon observing their interactions, one thing clicked in my head.

They all knew each other. I am the only stranger here.

At this point, I'm starting to think I'm still at my house, dreaming sweetly about this kind of fantasy school.

Seriously... What's wrong with this class?!

"Aren't we all from the same class since middle school? The class president will be the same. Sugawara-san please, can you explain this to us?"

As their discussion gets deeper, one of them finally mentioned someone.

Class President.

A few seconds later, the girl they called Sugawara appeared from the front.

One look at her, I was instantly surprised at her appearance. Even from afar, she has this kind of aura. Aura that of an unrivaled beauty; with her straight black hair only adorned by a white hairband. She looks stern and serious, a proper elegant lady.

Now that I took a look again, everyone around me is good-looking. Well, not to boast but even me is still somewhat handsome, however, not as overwhelming as the guys here. Furthermore, all boys and girls can be considered as top class in appearance with each one having their own league.

"My apologies. I was informed that someone got in through an exam. But looking at him, he seemed to have not been informed about the nature of our class yet. Let me take you to someone uh…" Although she was informed, she appeared to have no idea about my name. Well, I also don't know any of them and it's not this President's job to know that, right?

"Kuramoto Daisuke." To save her the trouble and to finally be informed about what the hell's happening here, I didn't hesitate to tell her my name.

"I see. Kuramoto-san, please come with me."

Nodding her head, she said my name while having a bit of difficulty before leading me to the Principal's Office. However, that kind of act, it looks like she faked it. Huh? How did I notice that?

As we went through the school buildings, it didn't take long for us to arrive in front of a somewhat archaic door. After looking from left and right, Sugawara knocked on the door three times before it opened from the inside.

Although I'm confused, I thoroughly observed the place I was brought into.

This Principal's Office is located far away from the populated areas such as the classrooms or the faculty. If I could describe it, it's located on a seemingly old Building with none of the other rooms being used except this one.

"Ah. Yuko-chan, what brings you here?"

When the door opened, the elderly voice of the Principal rang out. Following that, I saw a suit-clad elderly who had just stood up from his seat.

Wait. Who opened the door? Is it automatic? Ah, let's think about it later.

Although he looks old, this Principal's hair was still the same black as Sugawara's hair. It looked natural at least. He also had sharp eyes which would make you think of a cunning or a sly character. However, the expression I could see from his face was that of a welcoming one.

Sugawara pointed at me as an answer before explaining the situation.

"You forgot about him, Principal. You didn't brief him about the class he was admitted to."

What kind of class needs its students to be briefed first? Well, I know it's a Special Class but not to the point of out-of-this-world 'Special'.

"Oh? Right right. I got too occupied about something, my apologies."

This principal How could you forget? Are you actually an old senile man. Is that hair dyed? I'm utterly confused now. What kind of school have I gotten into?

The Principal acted as if he's wiping an imaginary sweat on his forehead before he collected himself and urged me to sit on the sofa that was probably used for visitors like me.

I continued my observation and adding the act of Sugawara that I picked up earlier, is this visit something deliberate?

Let's see...

As I sat on the sofa he pointed at, instead of the Principal, Sugawara sat in front of me. And as if it's a natural thing to do, she started explaining the things I wanted to know about the class I was admitted into. The Principal only stood behind her.

Well, let's hear about it for now.

Apparently, the Special Class originally has 30 students and all of them are currently being summoned to what they call the Otherworlds. With my admission, I became the 31st student to that class. However, unlike them, I have neither the experience nor clue on what she's talking about.

Summoned. Otherworlds. What the hell is that?

I only heard about Otherworlds or being summoned from fantasy novels, anime, and movies. What are they getting at here? Although seeing that thing happening to that Hiroda in front of me. That guy disappearing out of nowhere, I was somewhat convinced. However, with this information, I'm starting to get a headache.

As Sugawara continued to explain, only around 10 minutes later did she stop.

To clarify it, I started my own questions.

"You're saying... Basically, each one of you is an Otherworld Hero?"

"Yes."

"And it started since middle school?"

"Yes."

"Does that mean you're all going to and from an 'Otherworld' for three years already?"

"Yes."

"And to top it off, you're not being summoned to the same world, instead, each of you have different worlds you are currently being summoned to?"

"Yes."

After that consecutive yeses, I gulped the gathered saliva in my mouth.

This is real. They're not joking. I continued observing her facial expression. Perhaps she's a great actress but everything I asked, she confirmed it without any deliberation.

"Well then, why am I here?"

With all these explanations, I was expecting some sort of surprise that will explain why I was admitted. But no. I still had to ask for it.

"Yes. Ah. No. Because we need a support."

Sugawara almost answered 'Yes' reflexively. And that made her somewhat flustered.

But upon analyzing her answer...

"Huh? Support?"

What kind of support is she talking about here?

"That's you."

She pointed at me as if stating the obvious.

"Wait? I can't understand. Explain it in clearer terms"

"Ah. I mean you will become the support for each of us."

"You're losing me, Sugawara. What does support mean?"

"Support is support. You'll be a sidekick or rather someone who will move in the shadows for us. It's a broad word. You will be supporting us to the best of your ability. Think about anything that can support heroes like me."

Supporting them? What can a weak high school freshman do? I get it, they're heroes or something. Why do they even need a support of someone like me? If any of this is true, am I going to be thrown as bait or cannon fodder?

"And how will I do that?"

Support, eh? Just because my first name means great helper didn't mean I had to be a support, right? Are they joking? Is there a camera nearby ready to say, 'You got pranked!'?

"With the use of your ability."

Now she lost me. I have no recollection of any ability I have. If not having a girlfriend throughout my short life is an ability then it's not that useful, is it?

"Ability? I don't recall having one."

For now, let's listen to what they will say. I can just oof-ed myself away after all this. There are other high schools out there.

"Well, because abilities won't work here on Earth."

Won't work here on Earth? Then it only works on the Otherworlds they're talking about?

"Then how did you determine I have an ability?"

"Do you remember the exam you've taken?"

That exam? What's special about that? Ah?!

"Yes. I remember. I even lost consciousness in the middle of it. Luckily I answered everything and passed."

To pass it even with that thing happening, aren't I lucky or just a genius? Wait. Something's wrong with that.

"The written exam is just a cover. The real exam happened when you lost consciousness."

"Huh?"

What the hell? From all points of view, losing consciousness in the middle of an exam and continuing it without finding it strange was even stranger. Why didn't I doubt that occurrence at all?

"You were brought into the Pocket Dimension where we determined what your ability is."

Otherworlds and now Pocket Dimension. Is there something wrong with their heads? Haa... Let's go along for now.

"Uh. Okay. Then what is it?"

"You're surprisingly calm."

Sugawara smiled after hearing my question. That smile of hers can possibly topple kingdoms if she's brought to that kind of novel where jade beauties are treasures.

"What can I do? You have that serious face that says you're not joking. And even if you are, I have no choice but to listen. I can't move."

Right. This is also why I need to calm down. At one point, I couldn't move my hands or legs anymore. Whatever it is that they did to me, I have no way of fighting it. If this is an ability then her earlier claim about it not being able to be used on Earth is false. What's this then?

Upon hearing my answer, Sugawara suddenly flashed a worried face before turning to the Principal to ask him to release whatever it is he did to me.

Forget that flash of worry, so it's the Principal himself who fixed me in this seat?

"My apologies, Kuramoto-kun. I did that for a reason."

What kind of reason? Will you babble your way out of this?

After saying that, the Principal bowed his head apologetically as he waved his hand in front of me. And magically, I could truly feel that my hands and feet were freed by whatever's preventing them earlier.

"Err. I don't really get it but with that binding, I'm now starting to think, this is real... And... I think I have to go now."

With that experience, saying it's a hallucination is something one who's running from reality would definitely say.

I tried standing up but Sugawara's answer came abruptly and in a louder voice than usual.

"Well, it IS real. Please sit first, Kuramoto-kun, let me continue explaining before you decide."

Helpless and wary about the Principal, I could only do so. I still like to live. If I force my way out here, the chance of leaving is close to zero, considering that the Principal can just disable my hands and feet again.

"Alright. Then what's my ability that you determined for me to become a support for all of you."

I rubbed my wrist which I felt was bound earlier to check if there's something wrong with it.

"Adaptability."

One word. This time, it's the Principal who answered my inquiry.

"And?"

I was expecting more but they both just stared calmly as if I have to accept that there's nothing more to it.

"Only that." Sugawara shook her head.

"Then What does my ability mean?"

Adaptability? It's not a superpower like Superspeed or Superstrength, huh. Is Adaptability even connected to being a support?

"It meant you can adapt easily to Otherworlds."

I see. Adapting to Otherworlds, does it have extreme weather conditions or something? But if it's only that... wait let's hear more.

"And?"

"Say, if you were sent to the same world as Hiroda, the guy that was summoned earlier. Your body will immediately adapt to that world. Meaning, you will be able to sense and understand the inherent energy existing and rampant in that world."

Sugawara explained to me patiently. Now that I think about it, the worried face she had earlier. What was that about? Did she feel bad that they had to resort to force? Now I'm thoroughly suspicious of them.

Anyway, that kind of adaptability, huh? Wait. Why am I taking this calmly? Did something change within me?

"Ah. Then? What kind of energy was it?"

"For that Magic World. It should be Magic Energy, right?"

Magic Energy. Well, that's a basic naming sense, huh? As if I could say the same. I have a terrible naming sense. I once named a pet bird as Bird. In any case, this energy she's talking about, is that also what allowed the Principal to bind my hands and feet? Possible.

However...

"Then isn't that a given to every summoned hero? You all can adapt to it. Don't say no then what's the point of being summoned there if not."

For them to be summoned, don't they need to adapt as well? Then this ability of mine is useless, right?

"Yes. But you, Kuramoto-kun. You're not a hero."

Ah. I see. This is the crux of why I am called a Support. I am never meant to be a hero. Adaptability sounds good but every hero can adapt to the world they are summoned in. Then what's unique with my adaptability?

Haa. Admitting me to be a sidekick for everyone? But if I could only adapt. What can I do with it? Learn magic by myself?

"Alright, I'm no hero, correct. Then why am I needed to support the hero?"

This one of the things I don't understand. They're heroes, why do they even need someone to support them?

"Because everyone is doomed to die in their Otherworld."

Dropping that bomb, Sugawara's face turned serious as if lamenting the fate that also awaited her.

"Huh?"

"We are set to lose our lives in there. It could be a Demon King or a Demonic Overlord or anything that can threaten us in the Otherworld where we are summoned."

Sugawara looked up as if she's thinking about that Otherworld she was supposedly summoned into.

"And why do you know that you're all doomed to die? A Prophecy or something like that?"

Although she asked me to sit, I didn't do it just with that. Since the Principal could just bind me again, I opted to follow along with these things they're telling me for now. They sounded serious and there's possibly no joke or a punchline waiting for me at the end of it.

"That is because of my ability." The principal  who was listening to our conversation interjected.

"My ability is Clairvoyance. When I discovered the Pocket Dimension years ago, I entered it and gained knowledge about my ability. After that, I predicted the appearance of the 30 heroes and gathered them here in my school."

He started explaining. So he's some kind of a Prophet who predicted their deaths?

"Uh. There are too many info dumps."

"This is necessary. Listen well. Not only I predicted the 30 heroes, but I also predicted the worlds that needed saving."

Saving the Otherworlds? Do they all have Messiah Complex? However, they were summoned so it's also forced. Do they have not a choice?

"Why do you even need to save those worlds?"

Pointing out what I noticed, the Principal coughed once before answering.

"Because if any of them fall, the enemy responsible for its fall will then set their eyes to our world."

With the same seriousness Sugawara exuded, the Principal dropped another bomb.

"Huh? So you're saying our world will be destroyed if you failed to save these Otherworlds?"

The super countries have nukes, however, upon using that, it will lay waste to the land it hits. We live in a peaceful era so our fighting strength could be said to be minimal save for those countries who poured their budgets on their military. If those enemies they're talking about who's capable of destroying worlds arrived here, then most of us will just be pigs waiting to be slaughtered.

Ah but that's excluding them. The supposed heroes. They're probably strong enough to save their own hides.

"That's right. You have Adaptability. It was awakened inside that Pocket Dimension. Somehow that place can boost one's clarity. That's why anyone brought in there will understand or rather, can awaken their own ability. You, you awakened your Adaptability and along with it an increase in clarity. You can now think deeper about things you normally you will not."

Ah. Now that he mentioned it. I was kind of taking in everything they were saying as if it was common knowledge. This is because of my ability, huh?

"Well then. what's in it for me?"

Even if I was originally happy being admitted to this school, learning the real situation of my admission ticked off something inside me. Add to that, this Principal's binding. I was removed of a choice.

I needed compensation for all of this. Whether or not I accept this Support role. But considering I'm still an ordinary human save for my supposed Adaptability... saying no might lead to some extreme consequence. I still love my life. I'm still young to die this early.

"Huh?"

Upon hearing my words, Sugawara-san was confused at what I asked.

"I mean. Alright. I'm willing to be your support. That, I will accept. I'm not a hero material no matter how I look at myself. However, being a support is supposed to be a job, right? Anyway, what do you even guys get from being a hero?"

Since there's that possibility and I was already exposed to this, let me see first what I will be missing out on if I run away later. Perhaps in time, I will have the ability to do just that. Everything was just speculation for now but hey, there's nothing wrong to hope, right?

"Of course, it's to protect this world!"

Ah. I knew she would say that.

But really. All my life, I only wanted to satisfy my parents' wishes for me. So being admitted here was just a part of it. But now that I knew the real reason why I was admitted, I couldn't help but think how troublesome it would be to worry about the fate of this world.

I am no Messiah. I just wanted to live my life just as I wanted after satisfying the parents who gave birth to me and raised me. And honestly, being revealed that I was just a support instead of another hero like them grew a complex within me.

What was the difference between them and myself? If they can become a hero, why can't I?

Ah. Wait. What's this? I keep thinking too deeply about things.

Is this because of that clarity the Principal mentioned?

I guess I have some dark thoughts inside my mind.

Weighing the choices, I'm leaning on accepting for now. Besides, I don't know the scope of his Clairvoyance Ability.

"I'm no hero like you, Sugawara-san. What if I died? What will you say to my parents who happily sent me off here?"

Hearing that, Sugawara-san, the Class President, was stumped. Her beautiful face revealed confusion as to how she will answer.

"P-principal."

She turned to the Principal for help as she didn't know how to answer me.

"I predicted this would happen. Your adaptability. By just realizing you gained an increase in clarity, the breaks in your mind limiting your thinking process disappeared. You probably went on into a great deal of thinking about various possibilities, right?" The Principal enthusiastically answered.

Well, beats me. Is this it? The explanation?

It might or might not be that. Although there's that complex, being a support did not seem to be really bad. I don't have to be like Sugawara and risk myself because of a Messiah Complex. In fact, it also somehow excites me. To be able to travel to different worlds, who will not want that? At least, that's the content of dreams of many, even adults.

But first, I want to have some benefits for myself as well.

"I still don't know. Everything still felt unreal to me. Maybe this uneasiness will be gone if I really stepped into one of those Otherworlds."

What's in there, I wonder? And if I'm not a hero, then I won't get a cheat-like ability that Protagonists often get, right?

"You're right. That's the right attitude. Even I was skeptical when I first discovered the Pocket Dimension. So for your compensation for becoming a support for the thirty heroes... What about engaging you to my daughter?"

Eh? What the hell? What was this Principal thinking? Engage me to his daughter? He could just promise me some wealth or treasure, you know?

What's wrong with this kind of thinking?

"Are you joking with me?" I asked coldly.

Sugawara in front of me also looked at the Principal with a shocked expression. "F-father!"

Sugawara-san? Father? She's the Principal's daughter?

I see... So I was really brought here deliberately.

"Shush, Yuko-chan. Should I reveal it to him?"

Huh? What's there to reveal? Now the mystery thickens. Now that I see it, why are you blushing instead of being angry at what your father proposed?!

"N-no."

Huh? What is this mystery-like development? Even with this clarity, I could not keep up. It's the first time I ever recall seeing them. There shouldn't be any connection between us, right? Right? But looking at this girl's expression, and piecing up the things I observed, there's really something else about me and Sugawara.

"So do you accept?"

He turned to Sugawara, his daughter, and asked.

Sugawara first looked at me before she answered, albeit with difficulty. "Y-yes."

Huh? Oi. Oi. Why did you say yes? What am I to you?

And this. Did this Principal just decide our engagement? Just like this?

"Wait. I haven't accepted your suggestion, Principal!"

I stood up and voiced my objection.

"Sorry Kuramoto-kun, this is the only compensation I can give you. It's fine if you refuse. But I can't change it to anything else."

This fuc-- Ah no. I shouldn't curse.

I looked at Sugawara-san, her face was a bit red. Why was she blushing? This was the first time we met right? But their dialogue earlier sounds like there was already something between us. What is that thing she doesn't want him to tell me?

Now I'm curious.

Not only was she too beautiful, but she is also secretly a heroine in the Otherworld. With my looks, I was surely way out of her league so in normal case, I am getting the good end of the deal here. However, there's a lot of irregularity in this case. A lot of things are being kept as a mystery to me.

Is there really a hidden history between us? I just discovered something that transcended human comprehension. There's a possibility that there was something wrong with my memory if we're really an old acquaintance.

Should I just leave and forget everything they said? However, will they let me? That Principal binded me to this chair effortlessly. I bet he could do more than that. I have to be cautious about this. This concerns my life. My precious life.

For now, I can reject that engagement but it's a waste. Perhaps I can use this to know what it is they're hiding from me. And this Sugawara, that reaction she put on earlier wasn't an act. Let's see where this will take me first. There's still a lot to consider but, at this moment, the only choice presented to me is whether I will accept being engaged to her or not. If nothing becomes clear later, I will look for a way out and by then, perhaps I will have the ability to do that by going with the flow for now.

"Alright. I don't know what's happening here, but please take care of me Sugawara-san"

Whatever it is that's waiting for me and the truths that I will possibly discover, accepting right now seems to be the best choice. Compensation, huh? To think that someone can compensate someone with his own daughter, what is this?

In any case, being a Hero's Support. Let's see where this will take me. It better be worth my while.

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :Advent of the Ultimate Support: From Mortal to Transcendent
Volume 2 :The Ultimate Support's Identity: The Dark World Descends
Volume 3 :Venturing out to the Chaotic Space
Volume 4 :A Chaotic Sage's Dictum

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After around more than half a year of writing this novel, I'm still at Volume 2 of what I planned to do in this novel. That's why to ease those who are still on the fence whether to pick this up or not, I will be listing the Pros and Cons of what you should expect if you ever decide to try or pick this book up. Cons -Harem(This is a Pro and Con. Why did I list it here? Because some will surely see it as rushed since some information about the Harem Members weren't revealed until later in the story. Though you can spoil yourself at one of the auxiliary chapters.) -One Perspective. (Everything will be in the MC's perspective. Like I've written in my not-so-shameless review months ago. You might find it limited since you can only see the world as it unravels before MC's eyes and you will only be privy to his thoughts and guesses about the other characters. I never switched perspective and it will stay that way until I finish this) -Confusing First Chapters? (I don't think this as a con really. But if you start reading, you'll see numerous comments about readers who thought they already know the entire story from the decision the MC did or how the characters interacted with him. There isn't a established world yet so don't expect everything will be explained in it. If that puts you off as well, then this is in the right category. Anyways…) Pros -Harem (As I have said, this is also a pro. None of those who joined his harem will be forgotten and they are all important to the story. They will grow along the MC and the ones he will mainly support.) -Weak to Strong (You will see how he grows from the bottom up to the point that he's already stronger than most of the Heroes, not only through the stats but also for his versatility. Still he will stick to his role most of the time as the Ultimate Support but if it comes to it, he could step up and try to end the battle as soon as possible or drag it until his opponent reveals a weakness. He's not someone who will fight a losing battle when he's already strong enough. So expect that he'd only either win a fight or retreat when things will not result in a win after a dragged out battle.) -Well-structured Power Levels (I can say that I put a lot of thought to every world's Cultivation Pathway. Each of them are detailed enough to stand on their own for someone to reach the Transcendent Realm but at the same time, they're all closely related. As of the current chapter, there are five established Pathways and you will see the MC cultivate each of them from scratch or at least until the 3rd one.) -MC's Mysterious Identity (You wouldn't see him as someone who has a grand goal of becoming the strongest in the whole universe, his goals might seem unclear for now because of his identity being an ongoing mystery. And that will be slowly unraveled throughout the story. You will probably read some of the theories put out by readers if you delve deep enough in the story. And of course, it will not stay that way. His real identity will soon be revealed before the step up to the next stage of the story.) I guess this is all for now. I will add more if I see that I missed something but I still have more chapters to write so, you can be the judge of your own. Hate or Like the story and the characters, I will give you that judgement. Just don't start attacking an author personally if you don't like what you read. It's easy to drop a book and not be a prick. Constructive criticisms are welcome and I will answer to them if they're reasonable enough. When this novel reached one year old, I will create another review.

Dyrem
DyremAuthor

Another Review from the Author. This time this is not as shameless as the first one since I will address complaints the readers pointed out. I know everyone wouldn't be pleased by this work of mine, however before going in, please read this first. This novel is written in First Person Perspective and with only one perspective which is the MC's. So everything you will be reading here were all taken from the MC's own eyes. His thoughts, what he experienced, everything. He's the source. I also took it upon myself to write while keeping in mind not to self-project myself in the novel. His thinking will all stem from the 16-year old mind who because of a sudden increase in clarity or intelligence or anything you could call it, tends to overthink most of the time. And well, there's also his adaptability so he won't react as you expected on something where one should start asking questions or be surprised instead he will fall into his overthinking habit. This is where the first complaint will be addressed. 'I am weak.' You will be seeing him thinking like this at the earlier parts of the story. He's an overthinker and whenever something happened that's out of his grasp, he will immediately lean on that thought. Of course along the way he will outgrew that thought but yeah, some dropped this before that happened. He started from the bottom and I wanted to show what's going on inside his mind so his mindset at the earlier chapters will stay like that. For the second and third complaints, the Harem and the Side-characters . This is clearly tagged as a harem novel so expect the harem members will be introduced. 'They were introduced but there's no substance in them. What are they thinking? Why did they do that? Why did they fall for him? etc.' As this is a FPP novel, of course, you wouldn't be privy to what the other characters in the novel are thinking most of the time. That's unless they pointed it out or explained it themselves. Though they're introduced, the times they interact with the MC were all situational and most of the time their real thoughts were still not showing on the surface. They're all moving and thinking by themselves in the background even without the MC looking at them, so the next time they will show up in his perspective, bits of pieces of what they're thinking and their personality will be exposed. I used this kind of writing on my first novel as well, slowly unraveling the personalities of the characters introduced. But since some of the characters will be left behind on their worlds and it's still unsure when they will show up again, they will feel flat. I understand that point but that's just how it is. Characters will not immediately open up to him but as their interaction with each other increased, you'll see the sides of them that's not shown during the first time they were introduced. 'Not detailed enough. The description is too bland.' As this is something even I am not confident at. You will feel that his environment were not described properly. I suck at describing things and people but I'm trying to improve it through continuous writing and reading. I think this is everything. For the typo and grammatical errors, I can only ask you readers to point it out for me to fix. I only use Grammarly and Docs to correct the mistakes and surely they're not perfect. If I still missed a point that you feel like its a blunder of the novel, feel free to comment it below and I will answer them to the best of my understanding of my own work. Thanks for reading. :)

LollypopChainsaw
LollypopChainsawLv5

This limit thing is dumb, really makes spam be the more likely approach, anyway. The writing in itself is not bad, didn't see many mistakes if any, the rest is the problem, relationships turn from 0 to 100 real fast, a few hours change everything, didn't help to give depth to characters or make said relationships compelling. The Story is somewhat awkward, the development until the point I read didn't appeal to me and was kind of beaten down by how poorly I felt the relationships developed. The characters seem one dimensional, without depth and completely passive to the world around them, "Oh okay I accept being the support of thirty different people in a setting with real danger and with little to no real benefit besides getting a fiance that fell in love with me at first sight." c'mon, I know how plagued by such things the Isekai genre is, but generally, the typical protagonist is not given a choice he's just suddenly in another world and is screwed, this one made a choice, for me it was the wrong one. Finally, the world or worlds were simply not described, left entirely to the imagination of the reader, it'll already be a challenge in and of itself to make dozens of legitimately compelling worlds, not even bothering to describe them will not help. This story is clearly being written by a beginner author, so let me give a little advice, plan a little ahead, give time to your characters to develop themselves and their relationships, and invest in the world you are creating if you want people to like your story. You don't need to describe the texture of the pebble by the side of the road, but what I'd like to know is, how is the school, how do the characters look, do they have a uniform, does the clairvoyant old man have a huge beard, does the bro-con princess have amber eyes?

Daoist21616161
Daoist21616161Lv4

Straight to the point. The story is interesting and raises the idea of ​​an MC that will serve as support for the "heroes" to save worlds in order to save their own. Nothing more than mere survival, but it is unlikely that they would risk their necks on other worlds (maybe just the "hero complex") Here we start with the first "stumble" for me. The MC looked promising, logical and conservative asking why would he want to risk his life? That dialogue came from logic, it seemed perfect to me until the "director" gives his daughter to be his fiancée (No money, resources, skills, NOTHING) and the MC accepts ... sigh. Second "stumble" the MC is drugged (actually unconscious) to do a test of who knows what and there they discover his potential for support and kindly ask him (they force him) to accept. Not so bad, right? Well, the relationship with the first heroine has to do with this because she somehow falls in love with the MC at that time. (MC with blocked memories). The MC as a normal human feels uncomfortable with this but lets it pass because she is his "fiancee" ... Third "stumble" MC and his relationships go from 0 to 100, too fast and forced. It is also kind of simple because as long as you are a woman he will not do anything to you. (A princess is constantly insulting and denigrating him and his fiancee who is the heroine who owns the party lets it pass as if nothing happened) I'm sure that if the princess was a prince they would have already eliminated him. (This is the problem of the Harem in general and although I like the harem I have always found this annoying so it does not even serve to justify it) Conclusion: Disappointed. I couldn't get past a certain chapter and therefore the bugs that I found can be fixed later but all of the above made me quit. I consider his other novel much better than irony that it has a better romance and even more logical than this.

Casus11
Casus11Lv1

Cringe. Cringe is the word that can best describe the feelings I have after reading 18 chapters of this webnovel. This story has an interesting premise, with a lot of potential, and it's clear that author has put a lot of effort and thoughts in his novel. At first, I wanted to read all the unlocked chapters before writing a review but I could not get past the 18 chapter, seeing that at the moment there are almost 300 chapters in this story, there is a chance that this story got better, but I have no desire, nor any patience to read further, still anyone should make their own opinion by giving this story a try, what I'm writing here is just my subjective opinion and the description of my experience reading only 18 chapters, take it with a grain of salt. The novel is written in the first person, we as readers explore the world from the MC point of view, and have the same knowledge about the world as the MC. I've read a lot of SI fanfics that are written in the similar style as this novel, and never did I have this kind of experience reading a novel from the first person, I had to put a lot of effort to get to 18 chapter, and it's not like it's written in a complex style, or use some sophisticated terms, it also does not have ideas that require some intellectual effort to make a pause to think about them, no, it should be an easy story and an easy read, yet I had to put more effort into reading this story than writing my thesis. A strange experience. The world is poorly described, we see it from the MC point of view, and he does not show any interest in it, not how it looks, not it's history, not the present situation of the war, not even more details about the enemies. So we get a poorly described world and also can make a conclusion about MC personality, from his lack of interest and curiosity, he thinks a lot but does not make any action to explore what is new. I don't know what to say about story development, 2 days are described in 18 chapters, well there is a 3 day timeskip, but only 2 days are described. So in two days, he was forced to become a support for 30 hero kids, got a fiancée(also imposed), went to another world with his fiancée, fought the enemies of that world, got another lover, felt in love with the imposed fiancée and she put the idea of the harem and accepted the second girl. So in short, a lot of action and development, the problem is that I can't really call it development, it felt rushed, illogical and superficial, not a great foundation for a story. Character design, oh... all I can say about other characters is they are one dimensional. We see them from the MC's pov, so all I know about them is all the MC's knows about them, and he does not know a lot about them, I perceive them as caricatures, without any essence only a pretty form, yet MC, somehow, in two days, fell in love with a girl that was forced upon him to be his fiancée, also got romantic feelings for another girl, and also easily accepted the idea of a harem, I know that there is a harem tag and I don't have anything against it but damn is it forced. The MC has improved intelligence, is described as having a clear mind, also he is "thinking" a lot, however his actions does not corelate with his "improved" mind. At this point MC is more of a caricature than the other characters even though he is the character that should have some depth at this stage of the story. The interactions between characters, is the most cringiest element in the story. The dialogue between the protagonist and his imposed fiancée is infantile, maybe because they are teenagers but damn is it uncomfortable to read, it's like the stories and movies with second rate romance that can only make you cringe. Maybe it was author goal to make the interactions, between characters,(especially romantic ones), at the level of a fairy tale, if so than author achieved his/her purpose. The dialogue between the enemies and our protagonists can be described in one word-chuunibyou. It's really just a story about some infantile kids on a hero journey, with unreasonable development. So in conclusion, all my words are just my subjective opinion based on my experience reading 18 chapters, I will repeat take it with a grain of salt and try reading it for yourself. In no way I want to offend the author, it's clear to me that you are working hard for this novel and I wish you all the best, these words are only my feelings after reading so little, I feel that the potential is there, but I can't stay to read further when, the foundation is so superficial and shallow. Good luck to you and I wish to all the readers a enjoyable read!

TBS_23
TBS_23Lv14
Crazy_Cronie_1
Crazy_Cronie_1Lv5

heyo crazy cronie here, review on 21/03/2021 @chap230 (released chap till date: 340) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: An original plot with a bad Harem story. Okayish world building with almost zero tension. long review: pros: 1) A complete original concept! Atleast to me this was the first time I ever read something like this. Well there are novels which have similar basics but this story is different from those things. 2) The world building is okayish. The power levels are clearly explained for each and every world. Different world, different power systems, different stage names. And with the plot that author is trying to make I know this ain't gonna be easy. But author could have worked more, but then again this novel is just around 20% completed I guess so we can expect more. *SPOILER (not really)* [The same thing, aiming for immortality, though not mentioned yet, but yeah that is where the novel is heading.... But then again almost all the novels have similar goals] 3) I am a harem supporter so yeah that's a plus from me. (Though I hate to say it, without harem this novel would have been much better. Contradictory? Can't help it...) 4) The story is surprisingly addicting. You might start to get bored but you can't leave this novel midpoint and would want to read more and more... cons: 1) Almost zero character depth. Almost all the girls fall in love with MC at first sight. Well at first sight might be a little much but yeah it doesn't even take few chaps for them to fall for MC. And surprisingly no girls are against it. 2) This is a light hearted novel. There is almost no tension. At least I never felt any tension. You know everything is gonna be ok at the end. 3) You can't feel much emotions from the side characters or Harem. Except for blush of girls and sometimes little sadness if girls when mc leaves them. This is 1st POV so yeah don't expect other people views. 4) all girls are super beauties, this is a harem so you can expect it... But why all the girls blush everytime MC make some move against them. Not any bold girls out there? Would love to have more types of girls. 5) Harem: yeah i came mainly for Harem so i added it as cons but this novel would have been better without Harem, atleast that is what I felt... 6) [Not really a CONS] Plot armor, this novel is full of plot armor but again that doesn't really matter since almost all novels have plot armors. But there are really many things done for plot convenience. IMO: - A little more romance would have been better... Well I came here after reading your stealing spree... So yeah author- you can guess why I wanted more Romance. - And hey just my opinion but why don't you add someone's opinion in some bonus chaps, like others pov as a side chap, I think readers might love it. Well just my opinion so yeah you can ignore it... RATINGS: writing: 7.5/10 update: 9/10 plot: 8/10 characters: 7.5/10 pacing: 7.5/10 dialogues: 7/10 entertainment: 7/10 OVERALL: 3.8/5 Conclusion: This is a good time pass. If you can bear starting 20 or so chapters where I found MC a little annoying then yeah this is a good read. A 4 from me instead of 3.5 in the rating since i am biased xD. WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC is somewhere between hero and anti hero, consciously or subconsciously & due to various circumstances mostly leaning towards hero... Sometimes he is cold and badass tho, an inconsistent personality which I actually like it.... GIF: Chandler from Friends because he is the best

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