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The Multiverse Traveller

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What is The Multiverse Traveller

อ่านนิยาย The Multiverse Traveller โดย ผู้เขียน Dragonic_Dao ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.*WARNING* *WARNING* Firstly let me get this out of the way. I've already dropped 2 other fanfictions so please don't expect much. If people who have read my other works read this as well, I am deeply ...

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*WARNING* *WARNING* Firstly let me get this out of the way. I've already dropped 2 other fanfictions so please don't expect much. If people who have read my other works read this as well, I am deeply sorry if I drop this cause it shows I haven't learned my lesson. Apart from that, there will be no/NADA/ZERO R-18 nor Harem content in this novel there is already enough of that on this site so I don't think you need it again. Apart from that for now I am stockpiling chapters so release rate won't be regular. BE WARNED. Every 5 billion years a tournament was held, a tournament to bring rise to a Great God. The existence of such a being could bring a race to prosperity while the loss of one could bring it to its knees. Humanity had been losing for many many many years. This was already their 629th loss when they picked Jin, the man who would be their champion who they put all their hopes on. "I may die at the Grand Races Tournament but before that, I'll try my hardest, not just for myself but for all of humanity." That was his resolution that led him to the top.

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Blood Debt: the price for love

What price would you pay to save the life of one you love? Would you give a life to save a life? When the doctor spoke those bone chilling words Jon's world came crashing around him, your wife Lilly is terminal. A never-ending battle with leukemia but her type is rear and progressive. Time was short and ticking away when by chance or luck he meets Mr. William Abreo who gives him a cure to save his wife but the price is high, your unborn child. A life or a life. Cameron(Cam) is typical teenage girl who cares about only three things. Her BFF Jessica, BTS her favorite boy band and boys of course. What started out as a normal day for her turned into hell when her dad and Mr. Abreo tell her that on her eighteenth birthday that is only months away she be handed over to this stranger. William Abreo is under a lot of pressure to find his queen since he will soon be handed over all power of the vampire royal family. By some twist of fate Jon walks into his life with a sad story of his wife is dying of cancer, William takes this opportunity to help but at the cost of the unborn child that Jon and his wife Lilly will have after she is cured. All William has to do is sit back and wait to collect. Cameron wants nothing to do with the arrangement that William and her father has and begins to fight her feeling for William. William must also fight his own battles since the world he lives in their is no time for weakness but, he must fight to stay strong because he is the next King of the vampires while falling in love with Cameron. With all the twist and turns, will Cameron face the fact that she is falling in love with William and will William show weakness when it comes to his love for Cameron? Time will only tell ......

Daoisthd0MvB · แฟนตาซี
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"Lucia Ellanor is a princess who is said to be soon to marry one of the princes and become queen of a country, a petite and beautiful face with a strong royal lineage. complete makes anyone who sees you jealous but apparently not with your stupid brain no one wants your brain that contains sheer stupidity " "You easily killed my sweet sister, even because of your stupidity you took the life of someone who was loved by her family, why? what is the motive that makes you do it?! even in front of your death you never apologize " “what do you mean? I don't understand what you're saying" "Huh... I told you that you are very stupid even at the time of your death you look very stupid, maybe I give you a chance to live like it's fun to make you suffer like test mice" Lucia looked surprised and strange at what the cruel beautiful girl in front of her said when she said death she realized that she was in an abyss in the forest and right below him was a river with a swift flow of water, her body was heavy and weak and very dirty compared to the girl in front of her who was holding a knight's sword pointed at Lucia's face. "Is it better for you to die or I'll torture you first?" said the cruel girl rudely happily thinking about what she was going to do "What do you actually mean? Why am I here? Then aren't you Anthea's twin? You're Aletha Luthien aren't you?!" said Lucia in shock who had just realized about this incident, trying to ask the girl with her head still pointed at the sword “Don't move or the tip of this sword will kill you, Hahahaha finally realized it took quite a while for the magic effect from me" Lucia in this state can't do anything, the cruel girl with the knight's sword used to threaten Lucia is enough to make her whole body tremble "What kind of clothes are these?!! Why are you doing this? You're my best friend's twin, you should be the same as him!" shouted not accepting the fact seeing Lucia's current state "You're joking, spoiled princess, I became like this because of you, then you asked what kind of clothes you were wearing? It's a death suit" "So you die today, princess Lucia , your existence is very detrimental to others," said the woman softly in Lucia's ear, making Lucia frightened with the edge of the abyss behind her body. "Wait...if it's true I still don't understand all this then maybe you have the wrong person or misunderstood me?" "Never mind I know you're stalling for time issuing a magic signal to contact your family right?! You're joking with a genius student from the magic academy" How could she know? how dangerous is Anthea's twin, I can't even control my natural magic, she's gone too far! mumbled Lucia “So now die...a new world is following you Lucia...” God help me!!! "You know using your feet in everything is very exciting, even killing yourself with the push of my feet is fun, so die honorably remembering your mistakes..." Lucia fell from the abyss that she was constantly afraid of, now her body would even merge with the ground from the abyss, leaving Lucia who she had pushed with her feet, without even the slightest sadness “I know you won’t die Lucia...because this is still the beginning of my game”

YuTea · แฟนตาซี
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Apocrypha Online

Ezra was your typical failure. Burdened by unsurmountable debt and after losing his job too, he contemplated ending it all. With the remaining change in his pocket, he went out for a drink and drunkenly stumbled upon a bridge. There he gazed at the welcoming frozen waters from above. However, before he could work up the nerve, he noticed the shadow of a person, farther down the bridge, take the initiative before him. Without understanding why, he dove off the bridge after the poor soul for an attempted rescue. The weight of the other person dragged them both down into the frozen depths as he struggled to pull them both back to the surface. Soon darkness and a numb sensation ended the futile rescue as Ezra fell unconscious. Waking up in a strange room by a small child-like being in a butler costume, Ezra found himself and his attempted rescue lying on a bare white floor. As he feebly reached his hand across to the person's face, he realized there was no longer any signs of life and attempted to perform CPR. "It's no use. The acolyte is beyond saving. His life bar is now forever capped at 0." Said the strange child. "Life bar? Acolyte? Where am I?" Replied Ezra. "Welcome to Apocrypha: A paradise for killers! Riches, freedom, and all desires can be achieved by the victors of this perilous game!" Announced the small butler with tiny horns, a wink, and a sparkling smile. "But... I've never killed anyone in my life!" Gasped Ezra in disbelief. ------------- Cover art rights belong to artist. If you wish for me to take it down, pm me or leave a note in review/comment. I will see to it immediately. -------------

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AsuraMonarch
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My own personal opinion proceed with caution and an open mind. (FUCK I LOST A REALLY DETAILED REVIEW SINCE I ACCIDENTALLY CLICKED OFF.) This is the TL;DR - Good writing it is readable unlike some of the stories in the fanfiction section. It has quite the fast update rate with a decent word count for each chapter. Story development is interesting and fresh, it breaks free from unnecessary cruel characters./ indifferent cruel guys that only want girls and their bodies. or drama and angst. I'm not saying it is the best plot but it is certainly interesting. Character Design is kinda meh, it is ok but it could be better, not to mention some characters feel OOC (Out of Character) World Background A weakness in all fics and yeah since this is Multiversal it may need to invest in this for each different world, it doesn't need to be a big info dump but bits and pieces for when we need it would be nice. After all maybe Jin will go to a world where some readers aren't familiar with. These are more wordy reviews if you want to read them so go ahead if you want. Writing Quality - Good writing, you won't get headaches with this unlike other fics where it is like MTL. Format is also good and not obnoxious to read. Stability of updates - a relatively new fic with 24 chapters with decent word counts, you guess. Story Development - Interesting story, has some points where you may be a little confused over the plot or decisions but in the end it is an interesting read. And as you might see in the comment section I voice some of my thoughts. But over all a good story, technically at this point it is just about to kick into gear since BNHA is like the starter world. Character Design - Lacking in this area, yeah BNHA was supposed to be a starter world, let me list what I know about Jin and his companions (so far) Jin - a supposedly normal Otaku with somehow god-level acting or All Might is just super gullible. Is laid back and somewhat carefree but does deeply care for those he considers loved ones. Imagine Killua but not as cunning or smart. Izuku - Basically what I know via Canon. Really good friends with Jin, because of the USJ attack Jin basically killed off the League of Villains. Kai Chisaki 'Overhaul' - Asshole of a guy, think typical rival-friend, Gokudera before Tsuna saved him just not as aggressive. Criminal and ruthless killer that allowed and encourage for the torture of a child to abuse her quirk. Somehow gave up his dream to follow Jin, doesn't show why and instead acts like kind of a tsundere. Their first meeting left me scratching. Over all think of Kai as an OOC. Eri - Somehow despite still regularly seeing Kai has somehow gotten over her past and seeing him doesn't trigger panic attacks, opened up really quickly for no reason and is now a cute high and mighty princess against Jin. Yes children especially should have never have opened up or gotten rid of their trauma to what happened to them so quickly, while I don't expect PTSD attacks the change is way too quick to be natural. While I let this past before I am voicing my opinion now. So yeah, needs some more developing. World Background - the weakness numero uno of fics. Yes you made a fanfic of a world, you will think the reader has at least some basic knowledge so you don't think it is needed. But tell me straight up do you know the entire plot of a franchise by heart? and all the details accurately? Even stuff I've re-read a dozen times and I still can't confidently say yes. So while it doesn't need to be a whole lot occasional world building needs to be made. Think if I made a GoW or Worm fic, author has expressed their confusion over the franchise for GoW and doesn't seem to know of Worm. So why am I bringing this up? It is the context of the story. Multiversal Travel, I'll admit I sometimes read crossovers or multiverse stories of worlds that don't involve worlds I am familiar with, while some don't care about world building I do enjoy it when the Author does some to let me understand the world better. This also applies to Character Development, because if I don't know the personality of characters they feel one dimensional.

Dragonic_Dao
Dragonic_DaoนักเขียนDragonic_Dao

Yo author here. I clearly am doing this review a little late (I completely forgot about it) and am obviously giving myself a 5 star review as I have to be shameless for my own book. Besides that though, if you like a decently intelligent Mc, who goes to various fictional worlds, then give it a try. If you want a lone wolf then this isn't for you but if you want try it anyway and you might enjoy it. If you want op mc, I'd say give it a try in some parts he's definitely op, other parts I am not so sure but he'll probably remain quite op as he plays it safe. If you want a harem, then this is not for you, if you can look past that though, give it a try. Apart from that here is my actual review of my own book(to be fair I am probably biased): In all honesty though, I think my stability of Updates haven't been the best. This can be considered good or bad as they haven't been "stable" but I have released quite a lot more than I planned anyway, so although they may not be "stable" I think you readers prefer it. So I'd say 4ish stars for that (maybe 3 maybe 5) Apart from that Writing Quality, I don't know? Are we talking about grammar and spelling? If so I say I top most not all, but most authors on webnovel so I think that is actually a solid 4-5 star there. Story Development, I think for once my pacing was decent, I think at some parts I went at a good pace and I'd say for webnovel about a 4. Although some parts could have used more detail and some parts less I think that overall I did well as its a bit hard to manoeuvre in MHA's plot especially in the beginning. Character design is a 2.5 for sure. I only really have 1 OC, so more than that would be blasphemy on my part, but I think less than that would also be a bit harsh to me. World Background I'd say is a 3.5 as I do have my own world background apart from that ones set in the pre existing worlds, whether its good or not is up to you guys to decide. So I think overall objectively speaking for webnovel standard my novel is a solid 3-4 stars. Then again you can debate me on that.

Debojit_Debnath
Debojit_DebnathLv2Debojit_Debnath

Everything was going fine.. but then u added a parasite called eri .. and from then on he started getting emotional for everything. He even gave her the power of decay that he himself fears that he might not have good control. Wow.. then when he didn't even try to protect the little girl with bodyguards.. a little girl will always be *a little girl at heart* even if she has nuclear weapons.. and when she got kidnapped.. he lost all rationality. ... Like I didn't even read what happened between the paras. Too much drama for things that can be solved easily. He had thousands of quirks.. even one that could teleport. But he is such a dumbass he actually deactivated them and then he kept only four abilities. All for one, one for all, time and some fucking air cannon.. are u kidding me.. among hundreds of abilities and air cannon ability. He was depicted as a smart person at the first few chapters. This is not done... U should have made him dumb from the start to not mess with our heads. And yes. He gives his subordinates powers like giving hotdogs. U fucking give ur subordinate warp ability instead of keeping it or using it on ur friends. Wow.. I am so done.. this makes me so frustrated.. I am raging now and u deserve whatever harsh words I am using.. I was having so much expectations from this but u really had to destroy it for me.. I fucking can't get a single book which has rational characters or proper character development.

Carefree_Sensei
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eccentricbeing18
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I really liked this novel. Mha arc is great even though he's a bit stupid for saying important facts that he shouldn't know and keeping secrets that causes more problems. I could tolerate that but bringing a child in one of the most dangerous world there is and giving her decay quirk, that's just stupid and cruel. You have any other abilities to give her and you chose to give the ability to kill and have the crippling ability that disables her to touch another human being ever again!! I don't even know why the **** does that arc even needed to happen! It's basically a useless and full of plotholes arc that can be considered as filler episode! And now you suddenly introduce a God who can suddenly interfere with other god's champion, even though there's a tournament that is supposed to happen?! I call bull**** and **** you!!

Sh1tGod
Sh1tGodLv13Sh1tGod

i dont know what to write here but, no one told you life was gonna be this way, Your job's a joke, you're broke, your love life's D O A... It's like you're always stuck in second gear, When it hasn't been your day, your week Your month or even your year but ill be there for you *cough *cough sorry

Overwrit
OverwritLv3Overwrit

This is my opinion, and as my opinion I do not recommend reading it. The author presents us a MC who at the beginning is super excited about everything, which is good, understandable to a certain extent, and you can see that you can calm down how to think things through in a short time, which shows that he is smart and cunning, also a good actor to fool All Might and keep his composure. Then he begins to decline because he relates too much to Izuku without reason, even he doesn't think about it himself, he treats him like a brother after knowing him for a few weeks and wants to help him improve (The author makes an obviously forced move to give him a lot of strength and in much less time than the original), we are never told why, he just does it. Let's go now to when they do the Kosei tests, the author makes again his forced movement to make Aizawa very dumb and leave the MC as if he was super good and all that shit, which is already a little bit meaningless and unnecessary, but he does it, creating a lot of very cliché scenes that have no sense for the story, but it's only to make the MC look as if he was so smart and super good at choosing words. Then we have the thing of the attack to UA by Shigaraki, all that feels very forced in general in those parts, but I don't have much to comment about that because it's not relevant and I don't dislike it so much, except the part where the previous owners of the OFA know everything about the MC, that was really shitty. We have the part where he regrets everything about the fucking nothing literally, he tries to return the OFA to Izuku and does so much shit for it for no reason too, it's all so fucking forced and stupid that slowly the image of the smart, crafty MC, etc, will be forgotten, but he recovers a little bit by having that idea of rewinding his coals and having 2 OFA, still he falls back because out of nowhere he has to take care of a girl for no reason, probably because the author is one of those who likes Eri or feels sad for her. I think it would have been much better to have inherited the OFA from Izuku, then take it back, and make those Izuku embers become the OFA, that way they both have it but the MC has an even more powerful version, now Izuku has the more powerful version. Anyway, then the story starts to get filled with unnecessary fillers, and the reading became not only irritating, but boring, especially with the shit that everything changed in the tournament and now it will have to have a lot of allies. And to finish, I don't recommend reading it personally, although I quite like the way the author writes, but only that, as he does the story is of my total displeasure.

Magna_Prime
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Thanks for the book I apprciate the story just one quick question will the mc go to the marvel dc dragon ball or naruto universe? Or even rhe dc universe that would be awesome, thanks again for the story.

MaxDeaf
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Is good .......................................................................................................................................

VoidHighLord
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Just seeing that there will be no f4cking "Harem" that destroys many good Fanfics, I will already classify with 5 stars. 🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴 🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴 🔴🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚫⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴🔴 🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴 🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴 🔴⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚪⚪⚪🔴 ⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪ ⚪⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚫⚫⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪ ⚪⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚫⚫⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪ ⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫ ⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚫⚫⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚪ ⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚫⚫⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚪ ⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪ 🔴⚪⚪⚪⚫⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪🔴 🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴 🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚫⚫⚫⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴 🔴🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚫⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴🔴 🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴 🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴⚪⚪⚪🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴🔴 / フフ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ム/// / )\⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀Y (⠀⠀| ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)⠀⠀⠀ ⌒(⠀ ノ (⠀ ノ⌒ Y ⌒ヽ-く ____/ | _⠀。ノ| ノ。 |/ (⠀ー '_人`ー ノ ⠀|\  ̄ _人'彡ノ ⠀ )\⠀⠀ 。⠀⠀ / ⠀⠀(\⠀ #⠀ / ⠀/⠀⠀⠀/ὣ========D- /⠀⠀⠀/⠀ \ \⠀⠀\ ( (⠀)⠀⠀⠀⠀ ) ).⠀) (⠀⠀)⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀( | / |⠀ /⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ | / [___] ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀[___]

Derpyst
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I mean there isn't really much to say, but i really love this fanfic. Would really love if it was dropped and hope it actually goes over 50 chapters atleast.

Zomfox
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Endless_Evolution
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well im not really can write English so i will simply to the point that i like this fanfiction and just don't droppe please , and where my will go next arc?

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