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One piece system in a cultivation world.

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อ่านนิยาย One piece system in a cultivation world. โดย ผู้เขียน Rugh13 ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.James died and was transmigrated to a cultivation world with a one piece system, with it he can get devil fruit, weapons and more, what will he do with all of that, tune in and find out.--------------...

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James died and was transmigrated to a cultivation world with a one piece system, with it he can get devil fruit, weapons and more, what will he do with all of that, tune in and find out. --------------------------------------- I will try doing daily uploads. I don't own anything from one piece. Picture is not mine, if it is yours and you want me to remove it tell me.

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[BL] Becoming the billionaire's kept man

#Completed Wen YanJun (a Kpop idol retiree due to his contract expiration) returns home to the news that his family members were giving him up to a powerful billionaire. He was determined to leave and start a business with his girlfriend but when his girlfriend betrays him by handing him over to the very man he was avoiding, his world felt destroyed. Lu Mingyu is not only handsome and rich but also a determined man who never lets anything he wants to slip off his finger and he wanted Wen YanJun. He knew the young handsome man from way back more than a decade ago but the young man had forgotten him. He hopes Wen YanJun remembers him but that did not mean he was willing to tell the young man who he was. A narration from his lips could be counted as a lie and he alone knew how much Wen YanJun meant to him and how far he was willing to go to keep him on his side even if it meant that he had to be the bad guy. This is a story about a love kindled a decade ago due to an unfortunate event that ends up becoming a wild uncontrollable fire. The fire of their blossomed love goes way beyond the hot physically intimate relationship to the warmth that spreads slowly from their heart and their desire to love and protect each other regardless of whatsoever. Warning; This starts with slight pain included. Presence of slight misunderstandings. Presence of Mr. Lu Mingyu's cute son. An angry relationship turns into a beautiful familial relationship. Trigger warning: Confinement. Slight Angst //^\\ Read and add to your library. Don't forget to share your thoughts with me. I will read all the comments. Have a nice reading time. And have a fun day too. Extra warning: You might notice some grammatical errors. Please try to be understanding.( ・ั﹏・ั) I am open to corrections which I will take seriously.(θ‿θ) Thanks.

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SBfanfiction
SBfanfictionLv4SBfanfiction

It's okay, a little stale on the story telling. A lot of rambling to himself. I guess it's a pass.

TheSpiritOfWater
TheSpiritOfWaterLv1TheSpiritOfWater

It is written very stupidly and causes a feeling of disgust when reading (10101010100101010100101010101010010101010101010100101010101010101010101010010101010101010101010101010101001010101)

Avengtank
AvengtankLv5Avengtank

very bad writing. Author puts chapters as author notes and also put immersion breaking narrations which kill the involvement of the reader. Also the idea of onepiece system is interesting but the execution of it is very bad and boaring. Example: the Author could take some other interesting Fruit which would make the reading much interesting. Also in a cultivation world the pace the MC is developing is very slow. Also mixing of onepiece system and cultivation makes is very uninteresting. The integrations between the characters is also not executed properly to keep the readers engaged. All the chapters feels very boring , lackluster and very short. I would like to see author improve and will edit this review later if it gets better.

GMC2_GAMING
GMC2_GAMINGLv4GMC2_GAMING

For now I Shall leave and come back after more chapter

Awriter
AwriterLv4Awriter

All hail the Gut feeling supreme!!!!!!!!

YoungMaster2411
YoungMaster2411Lv14YoungMaster2411

This is really good this has the potential to be one of the best fanfiction so this is good

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