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In the DC World with a System

Author: Darthnorther
อะนิเมะ&มังงะ
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A soul reincarnated in the son of an Arms Dealer with a popularity System, from which one can get many things from lottery like Tony Stark intelligence, vibranium, Phoenix force, and even nanomites of rise of cobra, etc. He will be famous, anti-hero multi-billionaire Playboy trying to survive in this dangerous world. †***************** I don't own this art. If the owner wants me to remove it, it will be removed. I don't own DC or DC comics or the right to use the characters. This is only fiction. If there is any problem it can be removed should there be any problem to the creator.

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Saadido_
Saadido_Lv3

Keep in mind I only got to ch.20. Really f'n boring. The beginning was promising 'like woo a system story, this will be a fun little op trot through the dc comics.' Nah, the author is kinda not that smart. To give perspective, he thinks humans use less than 10% of their brains type of not smart. The author time skips the whole training arc! Any character growth, story progression, attachment to the characters, everything absolutely crucial to story telling is thrown right down the toilet. And the worst part is there's zero scenes where the mc works for any of his advantages, so the character is instantly unlikable. Then suddenly There's a ten chapter paint drying extravaganza of a skirmish in which the Mc doesn't even participate only characters introduced during the chapters. It;s clear to everyone reading that this author thinks writing works like a movie where flashing lights and beautiful girls can carry the team like a diamond 3 boasting silvers, but nah m8. Flashing lights aren't impressive as dry letters on a page. Don't get me started on the dialogue. That thing is written by a 1990's AI attempting human speech while running on a toaster. Bad. This is actually kinda sad. The good parts are the premise and the grammar is passable. That's about it. How to fix this mess is easy. First you have to realize that the reader can't see the cool bits and bobbles happening in your head. The cool stuff your mc does should be written down the mistakes that have an effect on him should be written down. The same goes for all important characters. Sex appeal is a crutch you can lean on pretty easily. The first arc is meant to sell your reader the characters and premise you created. Keep it simple. Less is more in this case. Characters should be as human as you can possibly make them. Even the epic heroes of the past still have fatal flaws and personality. Keep reading good books. Last but not least don't stop writing any skill is impossible to perfect the first hundreds of hours you spend on it, but that's the toll you pay to maybe become the next J.R.R. Martin or Tolkien. Maybe even Rowling but try not to go too insane like that one. Hope this gave you some much needed criticism author.

Nuns
NunsLv4

Not really enjoying the way things seem to be developing with the latest chapters. So a break of sorts seems to be in order so I thought reviewing now would be as good a time as any. With the most recent chapter (66) I've finally decided to back off until more chapters amass to possibly update or review at a later date. This story like so many others of a similar type( system, opmc, si, universe hoping, and most recently things seem to be pushed towards a possible harem route) is best described as scatter brained. Rather than building up the characters or world the plot seems to randomly be jumping around with little direction other then the typical underlying goal of most stories which is getting stronger. The writing quality leaves quite a lot to be desired but the fact the author (I believe) isn't a native English speaker excuses some of the confusion in that regard. Chapter lengths are fairly short which is a plus if you only have a few minutes to read. The updates apart from the first month, amount to around 4 chapters a month, so loosely a chapter a week. Development of the story is slow to say the least. Things the MC wishes to protect are seemingly thrown to the way side. As a result their characters haven't really been developed other then occasional mentions as the focus of his aim to gain more power. The worlds that have been introduced so far are from Comics and Movies so a lot of the world building included is heavily drawn on knowledge outside of the story itself. Much like the characters the world isn't very descriptive or immersive. Overall the story can be an entertaining read if you can look past some of the chaotic choices of the author and MC.

SaikoYonebayashi
SaikoYonebayashiLv11
Chaos112115
Chaos112115Lv4

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