Not really enjoying the way things seem to be developing with the latest chapters. So a break of sorts seems to be in order so I thought reviewing now would be as good a time as any. With the most recent chapter (66) I've finally decided to back off until more chapters amass to possibly update or review at a later date. This story like so many others of a similar type( system, opmc, si, universe hoping, and most recently things seem to be pushed towards a possible harem route) is best described as scatter brained. Rather than building up the characters or world the plot seems to randomly be jumping around with little direction other then the typical underlying goal of most stories which is getting stronger. The writing quality leaves quite a lot to be desired but the fact the author (I believe) isn't a native English speaker excuses some of the confusion in that regard. Chapter lengths are fairly short which is a plus if you only have a few minutes to read. The updates apart from the first month, amount to around 4 chapters a month, so loosely a chapter a week. Development of the story is slow to say the least. Things the MC wishes to protect are seemingly thrown to the way side. As a result their characters haven't really been developed other then occasional mentions as the focus of his aim to gain more power. The worlds that have been introduced so far are from Comics and Movies so a lot of the world building included is heavily drawn on knowledge outside of the story itself. Much like the characters the world isn't very descriptive or immersive. Overall the story can be an entertaining read if you can look past some of the chaotic choices of the author and MC.
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