pengertian majas sinisme

Kekasih Rahasia Sang Mafia

nia_rahmah

2021-05-18

Benar benar keren banget sih novel ini. Mau kritik tapi udah bagus. Diksi yang dipakek tepat lalu terdapat majas juga. Dan konflik disampaikan dengan baik.

Catatan Cerita

ranyraissapalupi · Teen

297 Chs

JaLife_Media

2021-09-25

bagus sih kalo menurut aku.. ceritanya gak bertele tele.. gak terlalu banyak ungkapan ataupun majas di sini.. gak kayak novel lain yang jalan ceritanya serasa lambat gitu..

HEROES FANTASY : Game Start

Fadhilah_Ilmi · Games

9 Chs

yoi_ioy

2021-02-15

Sudah bagus, seperti penggunaan majas alegori "memohon melalui tatapan matanya", saranku lebih diperbanyak penggunaan majas alegori, agar menarik dimana membuat imajinasi pembaca menjadi lebih aktif, kayak seolah olah pembaca menyelam dalam membayangkan bola mata orang asia yang berwarna kecoklatan atau hitam dengan permukaan kasar didataran yang tidak rata di atas bumi. Kemudian diselipkan majas metonimia seperti "Kediaman mewah leo", itu sudah bagus dalam penempatannya sebagai bumbu bumbu dalam novel. Tapi hati-hati dalam jumlah menggunakan majas hiperbola seperti "Metatapku tajam, membuatku ingin memekik karena tatapannya terlalu menusuk jantungku", jika terlalu banyak di suatu chapter atau berturut-turut di suatu paragraf, maka akan membuat pudarnya makna keseriusan dari suatu chapter diparagraf-paragraf tertentu, seakan-akan terlupakan tindakan-tindakan keseriusan tokoh-tokoh pada waktu tertentu dan yang paling parah akibatnya menjadi terlalu lebay😄. Dalam chapter ini sudah pas jumlah majas hiperbolanya, bagus. Terakhir saran dari aku, munculkan tokoh yang bisa menyeimbangkan kedudukan dan kekuatan leo, kemudian buat konflik dimana clarisa bisa saja sangat mudah untuk didapatkan oleh tokoh tadi, akibatnya leo akan takut kehilangan clarisa tentu itu akan sangat romantis, dan juga dapat memunculkan sampai mana perjuangan leo untuk mempertahankan clarissa, ini saranku sih, tapi pasti akan dikembangkan? Ya. Hahaha terlalu banyak kayaknya saran bukan ahli😄. Pertanyaan terakhir, tau siapa pemilik akun Yoi-kun?😆

FAKE WIFE

Chuuby_Sugar · Urban

31 Chs

Nay_Asmiati

2021-01-18

Waktu baca judul, kukira ini cerita kisah cinta yang penuh adegan drama dengan kata-kata lembut, mendayu dan penuh majas. Elah, ternyata ini cerita malah banyak ngakaknya. Ide cerita menarik, aku suka 😆 Semangat, Thor 💪

CINTA DI UJUNG SENJA

MardiaJohana · Teen

211 Chs

I'm just a superman

I'm just an ordinary superman. Every morning, when the first ray of sunlight shines on the earth, I will appear under the sunlight on time. When the last ray of light in the evening disappeared, I disappeared again. Occasionally, I would see what kind of drama this dramatic world could play out for me. But why? I'm just a spectator, so why do you always want me to join in? Alright, since that's the case, here I come!

Winter Era

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The real daughter has made the cultivation world crazy

In order to turn the tide in the other world, Lan Zhi was proficient in alchemy, talismans, and arrays. He was familiar with technology and intelligence. He could write in the north and shock ghosts and gods with his sword. Once she returned home, she was still a pitiful little girl with a star vein that had been whipped. The fake daughter who had taken over the magpie's nest could easily decide her life and death. Lan Zhi sneered and jumped off the cliff in front of everyone. If a cripple's body can't handle it, find a Star Academy to hide in. However, the Star Academy was too down and out. She had to spend some effort to help the Star Academy regain its glory after advancing three levels in a row. For example, she had to set a small goal that she could achieve first: He would earn 10 billion first. For this reason, she created an instant messaging tool that was universal in the cultivation world, created an online trading platform that spread throughout the cultivation world, broke the monopoly of aristocratic families 'resources, realized the automatic production of pills, tools, and array talismans, and killed all the filthy beasts that attacked at night with a sword... He also became the richest man in the cultivation world. Everyone scrambled to learn from Lan Zhi. "I'm just familiar with it." Lan Zhi smiled humbly. His words caused the entire cultivation world to go crazy. The fake daughter who thought that she had gotten rid of Lan Zhi turned around and realized that she had lost everything unknowingly. She was both panicked and helpless." Where is the thing that belongs to me?" "I'm sorry, they were all eliminated," Lan Zhiyun said casually. - Lan Zhi was not lacking in wisdom, strategy, and tactics, but he lacked a little warmth. At some point, the Star Spirit God of All Things had quietly arrived by her side and pulled her into his embrace.

Feng Chongxiao

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Mountain Sea Familiar

My name is Lu Bixing. He had transmigrated to the beastmaster world. I just want to quietly nurture my own subdued beasts. Seeing the past and the future, writing a picture of a monster! Auspicious Beast. Shirasawa A fox that lives for two thousand years! Auspicious Beast. Cheng Huang It devoured all things and was extremely vicious! - Beasts. a mythical ferocious animal He didn't eat grains, but flames! - Beasts. Bi Fang bird ...... [This book will appear mutated beasts from the Classic of Mountains and Seas. There will be a small number of gods from variant human countries, but the mutated beasts will undergo a large number of demonic modifications. The same goes for variant human countries and gods. The background time is also not the Great Desolate…So... It's not the familiar that you're expecting to happen in the vast wilderness. It's more modern.]

Kuang Qi

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From the stone age onwards, we ruled the world

In front of them were tall mammoths, and behind them were ferocious saber-toothed tigers. When a famous biologist traveled to the Stone Age, where wild beasts ran amok and humans could only huddle in caves, there was a hint of sadness in addition to excitement... Fortunately, he had a good memory. With his photographic memory, he began to climb the technological tree from the Stone Age and led mankind to dominate the world!

Half a cup of tea

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The real man in the Divine College's Mighty Soldier Company

Hey, hello friends, I'm Hua Ye. Just now, a friend asked me what happened to Teacher Hua. He sent me a few screenshots. Let me take a look! Roar! It turned out that there were two young men yesterday. They were in their twenties. One was called Ge Xiaolun, and the other was called Lin Xiaofei. They said, hey…One of them said that my cervical vertebra was damaged from training on the surface of the star. Teacher Hua, can you teach me your black hole technique and treat it? I said yes. I told him that it wasn't good to train your death energy on the surface of a star, but he was not convinced. I say, little kid, you two can fire at me, but he won't budge. He said that it was useless. This is Black Hole Force. Traditional techniques are all about force. He insisted on trying it out with me, and I said yes. Sigh! As soon as I finished speaking, he stood up with a bang. Very quickly! Then, he used a Dragon Fist. Boom, a lightning strike. I blocked it all! I'm afraid I'll hurt them, so I'll withdraw my fist. I stopped fighting when I was withdrawing my fist. They suddenly attacked me. One threw a two-way foil at me, and the other hit me with a vitality bomb. I was careless and didn't dodge! He was beaten into a paper man by them. I say, young man, if you don't talk about martial arts, you won't understand. Ah, they immediately apologized, saying…they said they were just randomly shooting, but they weren't randomly shooting. A proper two-way foil and a terrifying vital energy bomb. Clearly, they came prepared. These two young people didn't care about martial arts and came to cheat! Sneak attack, my thirty thousand year old comrade. Is this good? This was not good! I advise! These two young people should reflect on themselves and not be so smart in the future. Uh…the universe should prioritize harmony and martial arts. Don't engage in internal strife.

Sunset

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