contoh majas

Kekasih Rahasia Sang Mafia

saka_qinarya

2020-01-07

Orang tua yang menasehati dan memberi contoh baik kepada anaknya , terkadang hasilnya belum sesuai harapan apalagibyang memberikan contoh kurang baik wow ...

Perkawinan Paling Indah dalam Sejarah : Istri Manja Tuan Mu

Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin · Urban

2152 Chs

nia_rahmah

2021-05-18

Benar benar keren banget sih novel ini. Mau kritik tapi udah bagus. Diksi yang dipakek tepat lalu terdapat majas juga. Dan konflik disampaikan dengan baik.

Catatan Cerita

ranyraissapalupi · Teen

297 Chs

JaLife_Media

2021-09-25

bagus sih kalo menurut aku.. ceritanya gak bertele tele.. gak terlalu banyak ungkapan ataupun majas di sini.. gak kayak novel lain yang jalan ceritanya serasa lambat gitu..

HEROES FANTASY : Game Start

Fadhilah_Ilmi · Games

9 Chs

yoi_ioy

2021-02-15

Sudah bagus, seperti penggunaan majas alegori "memohon melalui tatapan matanya", saranku lebih diperbanyak penggunaan majas alegori, agar menarik dimana membuat imajinasi pembaca menjadi lebih aktif, kayak seolah olah pembaca menyelam dalam membayangkan bola mata orang asia yang berwarna kecoklatan atau hitam dengan permukaan kasar didataran yang tidak rata di atas bumi. Kemudian diselipkan majas metonimia seperti "Kediaman mewah leo", itu sudah bagus dalam penempatannya sebagai bumbu bumbu dalam novel. Tapi hati-hati dalam jumlah menggunakan majas hiperbola seperti "Metatapku tajam, membuatku ingin memekik karena tatapannya terlalu menusuk jantungku", jika terlalu banyak di suatu chapter atau berturut-turut di suatu paragraf, maka akan membuat pudarnya makna keseriusan dari suatu chapter diparagraf-paragraf tertentu, seakan-akan terlupakan tindakan-tindakan keseriusan tokoh-tokoh pada waktu tertentu dan yang paling parah akibatnya menjadi terlalu lebay😄. Dalam chapter ini sudah pas jumlah majas hiperbolanya, bagus. Terakhir saran dari aku, munculkan tokoh yang bisa menyeimbangkan kedudukan dan kekuatan leo, kemudian buat konflik dimana clarisa bisa saja sangat mudah untuk didapatkan oleh tokoh tadi, akibatnya leo akan takut kehilangan clarisa tentu itu akan sangat romantis, dan juga dapat memunculkan sampai mana perjuangan leo untuk mempertahankan clarissa, ini saranku sih, tapi pasti akan dikembangkan? Ya. Hahaha terlalu banyak kayaknya saran bukan ahli😄. Pertanyaan terakhir, tau siapa pemilik akun Yoi-kun?😆

FAKE WIFE

Chuuby_Sugar · Urban

31 Chs

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