pengertian majas sindiran

Kekasih Rahasia Sang Mafia

linthang

2019-07-13

😅😅😅😅😅😅 Fu jiu kena imbas terbesar kali ini, sifat menggodanya keterlaluan sih,. Mau bayar Qin mo 10juta, ternyata sekarang dijadikan sindiran, Kapan ketahuan ya??? Jiunya cewek....

Pangeran Sekolah Nasional Adalah Seorang Perempuan

Zhan Qishao · Teen

1782 Chs

nia_rahmah

2021-05-18

Benar benar keren banget sih novel ini. Mau kritik tapi udah bagus. Diksi yang dipakek tepat lalu terdapat majas juga. Dan konflik disampaikan dengan baik.

Catatan Cerita

ranyraissapalupi · Teen

297 Chs

JaLife_Media

2021-09-25

bagus sih kalo menurut aku.. ceritanya gak bertele tele.. gak terlalu banyak ungkapan ataupun majas di sini.. gak kayak novel lain yang jalan ceritanya serasa lambat gitu..

HEROES FANTASY : Game Start

Fadhilah_Ilmi · Games

9 Chs

yoi_ioy

2021-02-15

Sudah bagus, seperti penggunaan majas alegori "memohon melalui tatapan matanya", saranku lebih diperbanyak penggunaan majas alegori, agar menarik dimana membuat imajinasi pembaca menjadi lebih aktif, kayak seolah olah pembaca menyelam dalam membayangkan bola mata orang asia yang berwarna kecoklatan atau hitam dengan permukaan kasar didataran yang tidak rata di atas bumi. Kemudian diselipkan majas metonimia seperti "Kediaman mewah leo", itu sudah bagus dalam penempatannya sebagai bumbu bumbu dalam novel. Tapi hati-hati dalam jumlah menggunakan majas hiperbola seperti "Metatapku tajam, membuatku ingin memekik karena tatapannya terlalu menusuk jantungku", jika terlalu banyak di suatu chapter atau berturut-turut di suatu paragraf, maka akan membuat pudarnya makna keseriusan dari suatu chapter diparagraf-paragraf tertentu, seakan-akan terlupakan tindakan-tindakan keseriusan tokoh-tokoh pada waktu tertentu dan yang paling parah akibatnya menjadi terlalu lebay😄. Dalam chapter ini sudah pas jumlah majas hiperbolanya, bagus. Terakhir saran dari aku, munculkan tokoh yang bisa menyeimbangkan kedudukan dan kekuatan leo, kemudian buat konflik dimana clarisa bisa saja sangat mudah untuk didapatkan oleh tokoh tadi, akibatnya leo akan takut kehilangan clarisa tentu itu akan sangat romantis, dan juga dapat memunculkan sampai mana perjuangan leo untuk mempertahankan clarissa, ini saranku sih, tapi pasti akan dikembangkan? Ya. Hahaha terlalu banyak kayaknya saran bukan ahli😄. Pertanyaan terakhir, tau siapa pemilik akun Yoi-kun?😆

FAKE WIFE

Chuuby_Sugar · Urban

31 Chs

This prince is a little naughty

For sixteen years, Ye Feng, the son of South Zhenwang, carried an eagle and walked his dog during the day, and wandered around the brothel at night, living a life where he could drink for the present. One day, King Zhennan looked at his only son and asked, Feng 'er, do you have a dream?" Ye Feng licked his lips and replied innocently: " "Does squandering count?" …… The youth who grew up under his father's wings seemed to not understand the hardships of the world and the helplessness of life! They didn't know that in an environment where the Great Dao was as clear as the sky and mortals couldn't see it, the weak were as insignificant as ants. However, flowers bloom on both sides, and life is between Buddha and Demon. When he truly understood the darkness of this world. Only then did he understand that there was no place to settle down in the mortal world, and the secular dynasties would turn into ashes… PS: The speed of the car is fast, and it is not a veteran who accidentally entered *( ·· )*

Lucky Gangster Rabbit

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The salted fish female supporting role, she just wants to lie down

Su Miaoyu had liked to read novels since she was young. She was extremely envious of the plot in the novel. She was arrogant and fell in love with the fast-acting and face-slapping type of novels. She could not help but want to learn all kinds of skills. Su Miaoyu, who was not afraid of death, did all kinds of things that could transmigrate, but she did not get the system that could help her realize her wish of face-slapping. It was just that when she had already given up on the ward area and was ready to step into the nursing home to enjoy her old age with her old friends, she was taken away by the salted fish revival system that was decades late to carry out a mission. The dumbfounded Su Miaoyu refused to admit defeat and prepared to be a salted fish. However, reality did not cooperate. In addition to the various instigations of the system at the beginning, she finally managed to subdue the system as a little fan. However, the system's superior could not see her comfortable. Every time she transmigrated, there would be a problem with the plot or someone would cause trouble. Su Miaoyu, who was a salted fish, didn't want to make a comeback at all. Unfortunately, she owed the system a huge sum of money and could only think of ways to fulfill her dream of being a salted fish while paying off the debt. In the first world, she had finally fallen in love with a single mother, but she was stabbed by Mo Chengyuan, who was controlled by the world's consciousness. From then on, she had a shadow over men. In the second world, she even met Mo Chengyuan, who had the same name as her and looked the same as her. Her mission in this world was to survive from him, and Su Miaoyu, who had no plot hints, lived carefully… (I don't know if there will be a male protagonist in this novel. According to my initial expectations, there will be one, but it's hard to say for sure now. Everyone, be careful.)

Mu Xue's First Journey

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After becoming a poor daughter, her fiancé came to her door

The damsel in distress, the daughter of a noble family, A scholar from Xiaoliu Village. She was originally a phoenix flying in the sky, but one day, she was framed by others while everyone laughed at her. Her family was almost ruined. Even though she was in the golden nest, she was also mocked by the ugly faces of the others." Ah, how is she still the beautiful and charming Miss Jiaojiao who is piled up with brocade and gold beads? The Emperor is merciful. Her declining brothel is already a blessing to the ancestors!" Si Yinchen was a real phoenix born in a golden nest. When his family was defeated, he really fulfilled the saying," A phoenix that has fallen off the shelf is not as good as a chicken." When the tree fell, the monkeys scattered. Si Yinchen also thought that even if he did not lead a wandering life and did not touch the water of spring, his future would be difficult. Unexpectedly, one day, a handsome young scholar came to his door. He calmly took out the token in his arms." We were engaged when we were young. Now that you're of age, I'm here."

Pushing a boat across the water

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The Dragon Clan started to become a behind-the-scenes big shot from cultivating Lu Mingfei.

A different Lu Mingfei, a different Dragon Clan. There was less absurdity and more of the mortal world. No knife, no torture, the main daily sweet text -------------------------- [PS: Invincible Style, Cool Style, Prominent Style (Should be?)]

Looking at the Zhou Dynasty

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I'm training in the mysterious world

The vicious curses of the old gods, the ravings of the tortured souls. Depravity and decay were closely associated, kinship and love were intertwined. Loyalty was for betrayal, waiting for the right price, survival was for death and doomsday. Zhou Ke, who had transmigrated to the Mysterious World, thought,"Don't be afraid, I can add points without limit!"

Flooding the stream

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