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Back to the Past to Become a Fishing King

In his previous life, the genius angler Zhang Yang was seen as a heartless spendthrift by his family and friends. Due to a momentary mistake, he made a grave error, and the death of his father became his lifelong regret. In this life, fate has given him a chance to start over. Zhang Yang decides to rely on his skills and knowledge to make something of himself! This is the story of a genius angler going back nine years, using his exceptional skills and foresight to reach the pinnacle of the professional fishing sport.

Ruler · Urban

Darling, Please Forgive Me

Before her rebirth, Song Zhizhi was a young lady of high society who had everything, be it education, knowledge, beauty or figure. However, she was tricked by a scumbag and ended up with a broken home and an unjust death. Fortunately, the heavens have eyes! She was reborn and became really strong! Hypocritical stepmother? Mean stepsister? Scumbag man? Haha! I will take back all that you owe me in my previous life, with interest! In addition, the whole world knee that she had a fiancé who was the heir to a large conglomerate. He was unbelievably handsome, his personality cold and domineering, but due to a car accident, he had an embarrassing medical condition. She had repeatedly called off the engagement... Wait a minute, wasn't everybody misunderstanding something? Her fiancé had amazing endurance! His romantic words were extremely sweet! His identity would make people tremble! She’s clinging to her fiancé and never letting go! But when she’s obviously having fun tormenting scumbags, her fiancé was actually more anxious than her, "To defeat the scumbags, you must start early, my lady!" In short, this novel is about the reborn Ms. Song getting her revenge and finding love. The couple will torment scumbags together while showing off their love for each other!

En's Cozy Haven · Urban

Past life sage: This life a dual cultivator

Heavenly emperors reigned supreme in the cultivation world but there were still existences beyond the power of the Heavenly emperors. They were revered as sages as they had mastered the laws of the mortal world. Prince of the Zhan dynasty once reached that epitome of the cultivation world. At the mere age of thirty, he had reached the Heavenly emperor realm. Next, he attained the legendary sage realm before turning fifty. His achievement was unprecedented and he was hailed as a never before seen genius in the cultivation world. While he was basking in the glory of his achievement, fate played a cruel joke on him. He got stabbed by his fiancée on his marriage day. Powerful enemies appeared out of now here and the Zhan dynasty got attacked from every direction. His father got killed Infront of his eyes, many of his relatives were slaughtered. He wanted to charge towards the battlefield but the injury given by his fiancée proved fatal for him. He perished despite his unwillingness. ---------- When he opened his eyes, he was already a seventeen year old young man who shared the same name with his previous life. With his previous memory as a sage and the inheritance of the Evil emperor as guide, he aimed to reach the peak again. Since then, the most cursed art of 'women enchantment' reappeared and an unprecedented genius appeared in the path of dual cultivation.

purple_mage · Eastern

I Have Countless Past-life Identities

Jixia wakes up again in this bizarre world of cultivation, carrying memories of two lives and a book called the 'Reincarnation Celestial Book'. [A single reincarnation is a brand new beginning.] [What... kind of life do you wish to choose anew?] With the help of the Reincarnation Celestial Book, he deduces past years and unlocks his [Past Identities]! Fifty years ago, he shook the northwest with his Half-Demon body, slaying countless demons and monsters in his lifetime, dubbed 'the number one in Fist Dao among the younger generation'; A hundred years ago, he founded the Demon Hunting Department, slashed Dragon Veins in the West Sea, achieving great merits, being the foremost of the seven Princes who founded Great Zhao, and once hailed by the Great Sage in warfare as 'an invincible star that never falls through the ages'; Eight hundred years ago, he was the 'Banished Immortal's Successor' in the Dao Lineage of Jiangnan, reputed as the 'Mortal Taoist' with the greatest hope of knocking on the celestial gate again from ancient times to the present, yet willingly chose rebirth and reincarnation for the sake of a red robe; A thousand, several thousand, ten thousand years... Just as Jixia was donning one 'illustrious and invincible' identity after another, returning to the present age. Suddenly looking back, he was shocked to discover ———— The Yunluan Fairy, whom he had tied the knot with in his first life, seeks the desolate grave where he is buried in Black Mountain, refusing to believe he died young; The Empress of Great Zhao, whom he supported throughout his second life, seeks a corner of his robe longingly, yet finds it impossible to see him again; The red-robed Gu Fairy of his third life, opened reincarnation for him, deducing traces of the Underworld, ultimately establishing the greatest forbidden area in the human world; And... As these causes from the past descend upon the present world, knocking on his door... Jixia finally understood, His 'ordeal' had just begun.

Dreams Throughout the Ages · Eastern

My Past is Just Prologue

Janet Longfellow finally understood that a loveless marriage couldn't last for long, so she asked for a divorce and left resolutely. Everyone was waiting to have a good laugh at her, and Nathaniel Webster was no exception. He believed Janet would come back to pray for his forgiveness sooner or later. However, he was slapped on the face every day after they got divorced. The heir of Longfellow Group? The mysterious genius of hacking? And she was even the well-known designer he wanted to work with! A popular best actor, a young racing driver, and an excellent rich single lined up to confess Janet. Nathaniel finally couldn't sit still. He knocked on Janet's door and confessed affectionately, "Honey, please forgive me. I love you, let's remarry." Janet responded, "Thank you, but I'm not interested. A loveless marriage can't last long!" The tables had turned.

Louisa Dillon · Urban

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The concept is interesting! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) To take some examples from the first chapter: "...relationships can affect how severe" (present-tense) "But this case looks" (present-tense) "This situation confused Aizen" (past-tense) "...now he hasn't remarried" (present-tense) "hard work paid off" (past-tense) "Aizen succeeded in creating" (past-tense) There are also some other grammatical issues, but the writing quality in this novel is still better than 90% of the other novels on this site. The writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.

Millennium Tension

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I like how the novel starts off with a lot of action! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense very often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) You can see this from all of the top novels in the power rankings, such as 'My Vampire System' and 'Supreme Magus' - they're written entirely in past-tense, without switching back and forth between present-tense and past-tense, unless it's in dialogue. Very few novels are written in present-tense. To take some examples from the first chapter: "A couple more wolves were taken Victim..." (past-tense) "At this rate, those victimized wolves are lucky if they die quick now." (present-tense) "The battle worked for Woldemir's favour..." (past-tense) "...but it's not over yet!" (present-tense) "Three wolves were taken victim..." (past-tense) "...but five more are still standing..." (present-tense) "Looking behind, he noticed..." (past-tense) "...that Eric is somehow..." (present-tense) Also, I've noticed that you tend to capitalize nouns even though they aren't proper nouns. Like with "encouraging his Horse to run faster" and "A Natural enemy," or "The Wagon behind Woldemir." You don't need to capitalize nouns unless they are name or a part of a title. For me personally, I can't read past one or two chapters without stopping, as it's just too distracting. I do think that fixing these two issues would increase the number of new and dedicated readers, though it would take a lot of work to go through everything. That being said, the writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.

ELECTUS - A tale of Peaceful Demons.

MisterE05 · Fantasy

510 Chs

igue

2019-06-27

This is very interesting apart from some miss spelling and the use of past tense instead of present tense this novel is cool💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

The Virgin Outcast Who Stole The Emperor's Heart

OJROMANCE · History

124 Chs

igue

2019-07-10

Thanks author this novel is interesting the only issue is the use of past tense in place of present tense and it's quite confusing 💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

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The Elf Starting From Zero

[Fine Grade Badge],[Riwan Badge]. The quality and quantity were guaranteed, and the old author had over ten thousand high reservations! …… He traveled through the elven world of a thousand years ago and became a farm owner. However, this world of elves seemed to be different from what he had imagined. It was dark and barbaric. The elves here were called magical beasts, and humans and magical beasts were full of battles. Let's see how Ivan uses modern elves to learn how to farm, make fertilizers, nurture elves, create elf balls, develop technology, and forge a new order! For many transmigrators, technology was the number one productive force, but here, the elves were the number one productive force! This was the story of an elven cultivator silently farming and establishing the elven alliance. [Also known as: Farming from the Elves, I established the Elf Alliance in the Ancient Elf World, and the Elf Breeder's Farming Journey] Keyword: Pokémon, Special

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The Quick Wear System is a little sweet

1v1 Double Cleaners. Jade Lake Golden Tail Carp Koi Carp x Dark Villain Green Lotus Immortal. The heavenly fire was overturned, and the koi became a system by chance. It entered the world of fast travel and guided the villains to learn truth, kindness, and beauty. The koi fish said,"You have to be a good person!" The villain was speechless. The koi fish said,"You have to learn to be true, kind, and beautiful!" The villain was speechless. Koi Fish: "You're a good villain!" The villain was speechless. The koi widened its round eyes."Did you hear that?" The villain laughed in anger."Little thing, are you still not awake?" The koi was speechless. This villain was not obedient at all! The villain lifted the koi's chin, and his handsome face came close to her cheek."Little koi, why don't you…teach me?" The koi fish said,"I'll teach you, I'll teach you. Why are you so close to me?!" Short clip: The koi fish said,"You've suffered too much. I'm here to pull you ashore!" The villain's eyes moved slightly and he laughed softly."Do you think I'm a fish like you? You still want to pull me ashore…" The koi glared at him."Do you want me to pull you?!" The villain looked at the koi and smiled."Yes ~"

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The beautiful ancestor is attracting bees and butterflies again

Eight hundred years ago, in the Fenghua Three Realms, the powerful Old Ancestor Ji of Jade Jade Mountain had passed away. For a time, countless male cultivators who had silently fallen in love with the ancestor were all in tears, wishing they could die with her. He was the only disciple of Old Ancestor Ji, and Immortal Lord Ci Bai had even said that he would be filial to his master for the rest of his life and would never mate again. Eight hundred years later, there was a female disciple on Biqiong Mountain. She had a sweet mouth and extraordinary talent. The male cultivators of various sects were very happy with this obedient and lovely little junior sister. Even the Demon Lord of the Demon World personally sent a letter of appointment, willing to pay the price of not going to war with the Immortal World for a thousand years just to marry this woman. But later, a male cultivator clearly saw that his usually gentle and polite junior sister had pushed Celestial Lord Ci Bai against the door with a devilish look on her face. She blew into the ear of the flirtatious Celestial Lord Chao, and the face of the usually cold and aloof Celestial Lord Ci Bai turned red! -- Bi Qiong's famous Venerable Ci Bai discovered a secret. Her disciple was her beloved little master, Old Ancestor Ji. In order to get close to his little master, Fei Cibai tried his best to hide his bloody self. He cared for his master, took care of his master, seduced his master, and did everything he could. Later on, she didn't know what went wrong with her little master, but she ran away with a wild man. Thus, he fell into depravity. When they met again, he used the Immortal Binding Rope to tie up his little master. -- The man had a peerless face. " Are you still running?" His eyes were dark and malicious, and his tone was slightly cold. She was his light, and he was only interested in her.

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