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Back to the Past to Become a Fishing King

In his previous life, the genius angler Zhang Yang was seen as a heartless spendthrift by his family and friends. Due to a momentary mistake, he made a grave error, and the death of his father became his lifelong regret. In this life, fate has given him a chance to start over. Zhang Yang decides to rely on his skills and knowledge to make something of himself! This is the story of a genius angler going back nine years, using his exceptional skills and foresight to reach the pinnacle of the professional fishing sport.

Ruler · Urban

Darling, Please Forgive Me

Before her rebirth, Song Zhizhi was a young lady of high society who had everything, be it education, knowledge, beauty or figure. However, she was tricked by a scumbag and ended up with a broken home and an unjust death. Fortunately, the heavens have eyes! She was reborn and became really strong! Hypocritical stepmother? Mean stepsister? Scumbag man? Haha! I will take back all that you owe me in my previous life, with interest! In addition, the whole world knee that she had a fiancé who was the heir to a large conglomerate. He was unbelievably handsome, his personality cold and domineering, but due to a car accident, he had an embarrassing medical condition. She had repeatedly called off the engagement... Wait a minute, wasn't everybody misunderstanding something? Her fiancé had amazing endurance! His romantic words were extremely sweet! His identity would make people tremble! She’s clinging to her fiancé and never letting go! But when she’s obviously having fun tormenting scumbags, her fiancé was actually more anxious than her, "To defeat the scumbags, you must start early, my lady!" In short, this novel is about the reborn Ms. Song getting her revenge and finding love. The couple will torment scumbags together while showing off their love for each other!

En's Cozy Haven · Urban

Past life sage: This life a dual cultivator

Heavenly emperors reigned supreme in the cultivation world but there were still existences beyond the power of the Heavenly emperors. They were revered as sages as they had mastered the laws of the mortal world. Prince of the Zhan dynasty once reached that epitome of the cultivation world. At the mere age of thirty, he had reached the Heavenly emperor realm. Next, he attained the legendary sage realm before turning fifty. His achievement was unprecedented and he was hailed as a never before seen genius in the cultivation world. While he was basking in the glory of his achievement, fate played a cruel joke on him. He got stabbed by his fiancée on his marriage day. Powerful enemies appeared out of now here and the Zhan dynasty got attacked from every direction. His father got killed Infront of his eyes, many of his relatives were slaughtered. He wanted to charge towards the battlefield but the injury given by his fiancée proved fatal for him. He perished despite his unwillingness. ---------- When he opened his eyes, he was already a seventeen year old young man who shared the same name with his previous life. With his previous memory as a sage and the inheritance of the Evil emperor as guide, he aimed to reach the peak again. Since then, the most cursed art of 'women enchantment' reappeared and an unprecedented genius appeared in the path of dual cultivation.

purple_mage · Eastern

I Have Countless Past-life Identities

Jixia wakes up again in this bizarre world of cultivation, carrying memories of two lives and a book called the 'Reincarnation Celestial Book'. [A single reincarnation is a brand new beginning.] [What... kind of life do you wish to choose anew?] With the help of the Reincarnation Celestial Book, he deduces past years and unlocks his [Past Identities]! Fifty years ago, he shook the northwest with his Half-Demon body, slaying countless demons and monsters in his lifetime, dubbed 'the number one in Fist Dao among the younger generation'; A hundred years ago, he founded the Demon Hunting Department, slashed Dragon Veins in the West Sea, achieving great merits, being the foremost of the seven Princes who founded Great Zhao, and once hailed by the Great Sage in warfare as 'an invincible star that never falls through the ages'; Eight hundred years ago, he was the 'Banished Immortal's Successor' in the Dao Lineage of Jiangnan, reputed as the 'Mortal Taoist' with the greatest hope of knocking on the celestial gate again from ancient times to the present, yet willingly chose rebirth and reincarnation for the sake of a red robe; A thousand, several thousand, ten thousand years... Just as Jixia was donning one 'illustrious and invincible' identity after another, returning to the present age. Suddenly looking back, he was shocked to discover ———— The Yunluan Fairy, whom he had tied the knot with in his first life, seeks the desolate grave where he is buried in Black Mountain, refusing to believe he died young; The Empress of Great Zhao, whom he supported throughout his second life, seeks a corner of his robe longingly, yet finds it impossible to see him again; The red-robed Gu Fairy of his third life, opened reincarnation for him, deducing traces of the Underworld, ultimately establishing the greatest forbidden area in the human world; And... As these causes from the past descend upon the present world, knocking on his door... Jixia finally understood, His 'ordeal' had just begun.

Dreams Throughout the Ages · Eastern

My Past is Just Prologue

Janet Longfellow finally understood that a loveless marriage couldn't last for long, so she asked for a divorce and left resolutely. Everyone was waiting to have a good laugh at her, and Nathaniel Webster was no exception. He believed Janet would come back to pray for his forgiveness sooner or later. However, he was slapped on the face every day after they got divorced. The heir of Longfellow Group? The mysterious genius of hacking? And she was even the well-known designer he wanted to work with! A popular best actor, a young racing driver, and an excellent rich single lined up to confess Janet. Nathaniel finally couldn't sit still. He knocked on Janet's door and confessed affectionately, "Honey, please forgive me. I love you, let's remarry." Janet responded, "Thank you, but I'm not interested. A loveless marriage can't last long!" The tables had turned.

Louisa Dillon · Urban

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The concept is interesting! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) To take some examples from the first chapter: "...relationships can affect how severe" (present-tense) "But this case looks" (present-tense) "This situation confused Aizen" (past-tense) "...now he hasn't remarried" (present-tense) "hard work paid off" (past-tense) "Aizen succeeded in creating" (past-tense) There are also some other grammatical issues, but the writing quality in this novel is still better than 90% of the other novels on this site. The writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.

Millennium Tension

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I like how the novel starts off with a lot of action! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense very often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) You can see this from all of the top novels in the power rankings, such as 'My Vampire System' and 'Supreme Magus' - they're written entirely in past-tense, without switching back and forth between present-tense and past-tense, unless it's in dialogue. Very few novels are written in present-tense. To take some examples from the first chapter: "A couple more wolves were taken Victim..." (past-tense) "At this rate, those victimized wolves are lucky if they die quick now." (present-tense) "The battle worked for Woldemir's favour..." (past-tense) "...but it's not over yet!" (present-tense) "Three wolves were taken victim..." (past-tense) "...but five more are still standing..." (present-tense) "Looking behind, he noticed..." (past-tense) "...that Eric is somehow..." (present-tense) Also, I've noticed that you tend to capitalize nouns even though they aren't proper nouns. Like with "encouraging his Horse to run faster" and "A Natural enemy," or "The Wagon behind Woldemir." You don't need to capitalize nouns unless they are name or a part of a title. For me personally, I can't read past one or two chapters without stopping, as it's just too distracting. I do think that fixing these two issues would increase the number of new and dedicated readers, though it would take a lot of work to go through everything. That being said, the writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.

ELECTUS - A tale of Peaceful Demons.

MisterE05 · Fantasy

510 Chs

igue

2019-06-27

This is very interesting apart from some miss spelling and the use of past tense instead of present tense this novel is cool💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

The Virgin Outcast Who Stole The Emperor's Heart

OJROMANCE · History

124 Chs

igue

2019-07-10

Thanks author this novel is interesting the only issue is the use of past tense in place of present tense and it's quite confusing 💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

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Half a year after her parents passed away, Jiang Wenwen obtained the farming space of the system. She slowly farmed in the space and sold the food she grew in the galactic store.

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The daughter of a favored general

"Your name is Chang Ning?" The young master in embroidered clothes smiled faintly like the sun in the clouds." Chang Ning can't compare to Chang Ning. How about I call you Chang Ning from now on?" The year she first met Jun Yihan, Yu Changning was only twelve years old. She was in the prime of her youth, and the gentle young master had bestowed her with a name that made her live half her life for him. The path she had walked in her life was too long and too full of twists and turns. It was impossible to describe the thousands of sails she had seen in a few short sentences. In her later memories, the past was too complicated, and some of them were even unclear. Other than that gentle young master who kept her by his side in the name of love, it seemed that there was only a young man in red who was always vivid and lively in her heart. She shook her head regretfully. Let love, hate, anger, and obsession go with the wind. This life was so sloppy and absurd. Don't miss it, don't think about it. Let's take advantage of the time to live in the present. Only then can we be free.

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Sweeping away the Black Calamity, signing in to become an emperor

He had transmigrated to the Ancient Chaos Era. Bound to the Heavenly Emperor check-in system. Killing dark creatures could continuously increase his cultivation. The Black Calamity suddenly appeared at the start of the game, and he wanted to follow the footsteps of the Huangtian Emperor and leap into the sky? Under High Heavens, Liang Zhong, who was just a step away from reaching, was a little confused. Fortunately, in this world, he could sign in anywhere to receive rewards. [You have signed in at the Kun Peng's nest and obtained the reward, the Kun Peng masterpiece technique!] He had signed in at the Void God Realm and obtained the reward,[True Phoenix masterpiece technique]! [You have signed in in the foreign land and received the reward,[Secret Technique of Immortality]!] He had signed in at the Three Lives Copper Coffin and received the reward,[Daluo Sword Embryo]! …… In order to ascend to High Heavens and fight alongside Huang Tiandi, Liang Zhong was extremely careful and treaded the entire world, signing for tens of millions of years! He swore that he would never come out unless he became an Immortal Emperor! It was not until tens of millions of years later that the Darkness Immortal Emperor was born. The dark creatures invaded on a large scale, and the Nine Heavens and Ten Lands were in danger! Because the Huang Tiandi had taken away many peerless experts before he left, the entire world fell into darkness. The various top-notch Immortal Kings were even killed in the Darkness Continent. Just as the world collapsed and the Great Dao wailed. Liang Zhong, who had the True Dragon masterpiece technique in his left hand and the True Phoenix masterpiece technique in his right hand, raised his hand and activated the Desolate Heavenly Emperor's Daluo Sword Embryo. He slashed out a peerless sword light and killed the Darkness Immortal Emperor in one move! At this point, he suddenly realized that he was invincible in the world…

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