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Back to the Past to Become a Fishing King

In his previous life, the genius angler Zhang Yang was seen as a heartless spendthrift by his family and friends. Due to a momentary mistake, he made a grave error, and the death of his father became his lifelong regret. In this life, fate has given him a chance to start over. Zhang Yang decides to rely on his skills and knowledge to make something of himself! This is the story of a genius angler going back nine years, using his exceptional skills and foresight to reach the pinnacle of the professional fishing sport.

Ruler · Urban

Her Food Livestream Broke the Galaxy

Jiang Qiuqiu, a 21st-century food blogger, transmigrates to the interstellar era, completely broke and with nothing to her name. To make a living, a food streamer named Jiang Jiujiu burst onto the scene in the Federation's food livestreaming section, attracting countless bigwigs and hundreds of millions of Federation fans! #Shocking! The fan ranking of a certain streamer in the food section is practically a Federation Central TV press conference!!!# Number one on the list is the Imperial Blade, Admiral Mo Si! Number two is the Head of the Cabinet, Lord Jones! Numbers three to twenty are filled by the Federation's 18 war-faring generals! Everyone: !!!??? * Jiang Qiuqiu originally just wanted to cook to make a living, but she never expected to accidentally become famous, enlist in the army, save a legion, and pick up a husband. One day, a short video blew up the Federation's network. In the video, the Federation's hottest internet celebrity, Jiang Jiujiu, was directing the tall, handsome, and imposing Imperial Blade, Admiral Mo Si—with the very hands that had detonated the Insect Queen—to hold a kitchen knife and chop radishes! She also stated: "She has finally found a man who will cook for her." Countless people sobbed over this beautiful love story! -[Gentle and Sweet Food Blogger x The Great Admiral Who Personally Cooks for the Gentle and Sweet Food Blogger]

Xiang Weixun · Sci-fi

Past life sage: This life a dual cultivator

Heavenly emperors reigned supreme in the cultivation world but there were still existences beyond the power of the Heavenly emperors. They were revered as sages as they had mastered the laws of the mortal world. Prince of the Zhan dynasty once reached that epitome of the cultivation world. At the mere age of thirty, he had reached the Heavenly emperor realm. Next, he attained the legendary sage realm before turning fifty. His achievement was unprecedented and he was hailed as a never before seen genius in the cultivation world. While he was basking in the glory of his achievement, fate played a cruel joke on him. He got stabbed by his fiancée on his marriage day. Powerful enemies appeared out of now here and the Zhan dynasty got attacked from every direction. His father got killed Infront of his eyes, many of his relatives were slaughtered. He wanted to charge towards the battlefield but the injury given by his fiancée proved fatal for him. He perished despite his unwillingness. ---------- When he opened his eyes, he was already a seventeen year old young man who shared the same name with his previous life. With his previous memory as a sage and the inheritance of the Evil emperor as guide, he aimed to reach the peak again. Since then, the most cursed art of 'women enchantment' reappeared and an unprecedented genius appeared in the path of dual cultivation.

purple_mage · Eastern

I Have Countless Past-life Identities

Jixia wakes up again in this bizarre world of cultivation, carrying memories of two lives and a book called the 'Reincarnation Celestial Book'. [A single reincarnation is a brand new beginning.] [What... kind of life do you wish to choose anew?] With the help of the Reincarnation Celestial Book, he deduces past years and unlocks his [Past Identities]! Fifty years ago, he shook the northwest with his Half-Demon body, slaying countless demons and monsters in his lifetime, dubbed 'the number one in Fist Dao among the younger generation'; A hundred years ago, he founded the Demon Hunting Department, slashed Dragon Veins in the West Sea, achieving great merits, being the foremost of the seven Princes who founded Great Zhao, and once hailed by the Great Sage in warfare as 'an invincible star that never falls through the ages'; Eight hundred years ago, he was the 'Banished Immortal's Successor' in the Dao Lineage of Jiangnan, reputed as the 'Mortal Taoist' with the greatest hope of knocking on the celestial gate again from ancient times to the present, yet willingly chose rebirth and reincarnation for the sake of a red robe; A thousand, several thousand, ten thousand years... Just as Jixia was donning one 'illustrious and invincible' identity after another, returning to the present age. Suddenly looking back, he was shocked to discover ———— The Yunluan Fairy, whom he had tied the knot with in his first life, seeks the desolate grave where he is buried in Black Mountain, refusing to believe he died young; The Empress of Great Zhao, whom he supported throughout his second life, seeks a corner of his robe longingly, yet finds it impossible to see him again; The red-robed Gu Fairy of his third life, opened reincarnation for him, deducing traces of the Underworld, ultimately establishing the greatest forbidden area in the human world; And... As these causes from the past descend upon the present world, knocking on his door... Jixia finally understood, His 'ordeal' had just begun.

Dreams Throughout the Ages · Eastern

Why Are You Crying? Because I Married Your Mom After You Broke up with Me?

Xu Wenping was forced into a blind date by his mother with a stunning CEO, Su Yurou, who was ten years older than him but still had a breathtaking figure and appearance. The two quickly fell in love, and everything seemed to be going well until they ended up in bed together. That was when Xu Wenping saw a photo of two women in Su Yurou's room—one was Su Yurou and the other was his ex-girlfriend from college! Xu Wenping asked, "Dear, who is this woman?" Su Yurou replied, "She is my daughter... oh wait, our daughter!" Xu Wenping was speechless. When the three of them met, Xu Wenping said with righteousness, "So what? You broke up with me, and now I'm marrying your mother. Why are you crying?"

A Small Purple Umbrella · Urban

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Sen_Tan

2025-03-04

PAST TENSE OR PRESENT TENSE. PLEASE CHOOSE ONE AND STICK WITH IT

I Have A Cultivation World

Pure Nine Lotus Lamp · Eastern

2986 Chs

Evergreen_Autumn

2020-10-19

The concept is interesting! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) To take some examples from the first chapter: "...relationships can affect how severe" (present-tense) "But this case looks" (present-tense) "This situation confused Aizen" (past-tense) "...now he hasn't remarried" (present-tense) "hard work paid off" (past-tense) "Aizen succeeded in creating" (past-tense) There are also some other grammatical issues, but the writing quality in this novel is still better than 90% of the other novels on this site. The writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.

Millennium Tension

YuuZu · Sci-fi

223 Chs

Evergreen_Autumn

2020-10-18

I like how the novel starts off with a lot of action! As an English teacher, I have some advice if you don't mind me sharing though: I've noticed that you tend to switch back and forth between present-tense and past-tense very often. This can be distracting when trying to immerse yourself, and it can interrupt the flow when you're trying to form a mental image of what's happening. Likewise, the vast majority of published novels are written entirely in past-tense, as past-tense words have stronger undertones in the reader's mind when forming mental images. (The only exception to this past-tense restriction is dialogue.) You can see this from all of the top novels in the power rankings, such as 'My Vampire System' and 'Supreme Magus' - they're written entirely in past-tense, without switching back and forth between present-tense and past-tense, unless it's in dialogue. Very few novels are written in present-tense. To take some examples from the first chapter: "A couple more wolves were taken Victim..." (past-tense) "At this rate, those victimized wolves are lucky if they die quick now." (present-tense) "The battle worked for Woldemir's favour..." (past-tense) "...but it's not over yet!" (present-tense) "Three wolves were taken victim..." (past-tense) "...but five more are still standing..." (present-tense) "Looking behind, he noticed..." (past-tense) "...that Eric is somehow..." (present-tense) Also, I've noticed that you tend to capitalize nouns even though they aren't proper nouns. Like with "encouraging his Horse to run faster" and "A Natural enemy," or "The Wagon behind Woldemir." You don't need to capitalize nouns unless they are name or a part of a title. For me personally, I can't read past one or two chapters without stopping, as it's just too distracting. I do think that fixing these two issues would increase the number of new and dedicated readers, though it would take a lot of work to go through everything. That being said, the writing has a lot of potential, so I'm giving it a 5-star rating anyways.

ELECTUS - A tale of Peaceful Demons.

MisterE05 · Fantasy

510 Chs

igue

2019-06-28

This is very interesting apart from some miss spelling and the use of past tense instead of present tense this novel is cool💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

The Virgin Outcast Who Stole The Emperor's Heart

OJROMANCE · History

124 Chs

igue

2019-07-11

Thanks author this novel is interesting the only issue is the use of past tense in place of present tense and it's quite confusing 💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟

Mr. Tycoon Wanted: PERFECT WIFE!

lostlaura · General

67 Chs

Help, I'm dressed like an interstellar big shot.

Crossing the galaxy, a scumbag brought a mistress to his door. He thought that he was a good-for-nothing, but in the end, the Host's alternate identities came one by one. She even forced herself to marry a husband? Scene 1:" Actually, I'm not your sister." After saying that, he looked at his sister seriously. Her sister gave her a hard slap on the head. Third Brother smacked her head. Her father gave her a heads-up. Her mother smacked her on the head. Big Brother wants her to produce evidence Scene 2: Let Go amp;amp;amp;quot; She hugged a man's thigh and said," I won't let go, I won't let go. I don't want to. If you dare to despise me, hmph, I'll call you molestation." amp;amp;amp;quot; &" Go to the doctor and wake up." amp;amp;amp;quot; &" Let me tell you, I'm very sober. You're not allowed to leave until you register your marriage with me today." amp;amp;amp;quot; The System said,[Host, wake up. We still have to brave the world and the sea of stars. Men will affect the speed at which you draw your sword. Wake up. We can raise fish, but don't let them take you away.]

Don't want to hear the snow

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Longevity begins with a servant

Li Mo had transmigrated to another world and finally found this place… The Daoists occupied the Immortal Abode, and the Saints and Buddhas built the Indestructible Heaven. Demons ran rampant in the country, and it was not a rumor that ghosts destroyed the world. The true body of the Martial Immortal suppressed the hundred regions, and the sea demons surged into the sky. Plant monsters ran on the ground, who was a great medicine? True immortals were ethereal, and all living beings were fighting to cross over. Li Mo cultivated step by step and finally became an immortal, forever staying in the world. (This book will not ascend to the immortal cultivation world, nor will it follow the traditional practice of Qi, Foundation Establishment, and Jindan. After putting on the shelf, I gradually entered a good state. Please enjoy it. New book, please collect, please recommend, please support.)

I'm not a piece of wood

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The whole entertainment industry is waiting for me and the bamboo horse official announcement

On the first day of returning to China, her relationship was exposed as " The Movie Queen's mysterious pick-up boyfriend!!!" Ling Chuwan looked at her mysterious boyfriend who was throwing a tantrum and sighed. " I don't have a boyfriend." Ling Chuwan smiled at the emcee's deliberate question at the first award ceremony of the movie queen's return. "Who was the man who picked me up that day?" The host was a little disappointed. Ling Chuwan looked at a spot in the front row where only the big shots were seated. Then, she winked at the camera and said," That's my husband!" The mysterious boyfriend who had been speculated about thousands of times was exposed at a banquet. In the photo, Ling Chuwan was pressed against the car door and kissed by the business tycoon Bo Tingchen, who was good at both black and white. Rumors spread everywhere. That night, Bo Tingchen, who hadn't posted on Weibo for ten thousand years, popped up. "Mrs. Bo, happy 20th anniversary." There were two accompanying pictures. One was of a nine-year-old Bo Tingchen playing the piano and a four-year-old Ling Chuwan dancing beside him in a princess dress. The second photo was of Bo Tingchen playing the piano a few days ago, and Ling Chuwan was circling the dog beside him. Whether it was the Bo Tingchen when he was young or the Bo Tingchen now, he would always look at Ling Chuwan with gentle eyes.

sixteen immortal

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Becoming a superstar, starting from trainees

Some of them needed a little help! " Cosmetics " had transmigrated to become an idol trainee and awakened the " powder becoming strong " system. She had been " muddling through " all the way but was unfortunately forced to become a top student. "Li Baichong, the few accounts that have been slandering you the most are your own accounts. Do you admit it?" I didn't! Don't spout nonsense! It didn't exist! I'm a professional. How could I let anyone find out? " Yesterday at the charity event, you gained 200,000 fans after announcing your total donation amount. Someone took a photo of you crying in a corner. May I ask why? Was it because you were touched?" I don't dare to move. If I move, I'll gain more fans. Once I gain more fans, the system will punish me and donate money. I don't have a single cent now! I just want to lose fans! "Today, a few experts and professors called you shallow and ignorant on the Internet and called for everyone to boycott you. What do you want to say?" Listen to me, thank you! Because of you, the four seasons are warm! Please increase your strength. I need everyone's help! Thank you! Please increase your strength, I need help!

Little Madeleine

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Soft boss, she broke her character profile again

As the role model of the Space-time Race, Yuan One had always been conscientious in helping each of his hosts successfully clear all the planes. When she first met Yan Chumiao, the little girl had a pair of round almond-shaped eyes, clear and translucent, and a tender little face, which was very delicate. Yuan One thought to himself. This was a delicate, adorable, and weak host. Less than a minute later, he apologized for disturbing her. His face really hurt! - Rumor had it that the Yue Family's Di Young Lady was born delicate and beautiful, and was the true flower of wealth in the mortal world. It was just a pity that this body was really a little weak. Everyone was filled with regret. Yuan One, who had witnessed his host sitting firmly in the position of the evil female supporting character, thought, This is clearly a true savage flower in the mortal world! - Jing Rong had always thought that the little girl he liked was weak and needed his protection at all times. Until one day, at the entrance of an alley. The delicate little girl formed a sharp contrast with the tragic scene on the ground. The little girl looked sideways and swept her gaze over. Her round almond-shaped eyes still had traces of hostility that had not dissipated. Her danger level was off the charts. The little girl raised her eyebrows." What are you waiting for? Hurry up and pack up." - In the end, someone asked a soul-piercing question. How did you two end up together? The male lead touched his face and thought to himself,"I should be the one who's good-looking." Yan Chumiao thought,'Maybe…I need someone to clean up the scene. After all…I'm a bit of a clean freak.' Yuan One: The tool man was really hammered. Yan Chumiao #said the most delicate and soft words, backhanded and stabbed the fiercest and cruelest knife #Everything depends on the mood #Love? Impossible!# Jing Rong: [You're so love-minded. I'll be wherever Jiaojiao is.] " Quickly put on 1v1. The female lead is the female goose. The male lead? He should have picked it up at the door, right? In fact, the author has forgotten the details." The author's introduction is useless. For details, look at the main text.

I've been reading it for a long time, and it has become a song.

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