writing in future tense

I like the story! The plot is interesting and innovative and you did a great job with it. There's a few tense mistakes here and there (past-tense, future-tense, etc.) but otherwise the writing quality is good!

story plot seems decent so far, but i really hope the author get better at writing in later chapters as he keeps writing a mix of present and future tense.

This is a hard read, past tense used were future tense should be, the naming, sentence structure, the working in of exposition. I think the story could have a lot of potential, but it is in serious need of an editor.

Pretty decent novel overall ,but can get confusing as there are many changes in tense from present to future.Writing quality is decent and there is a good amount of updates,However after about 50ish chapters it can get quite boring.

The story itself, although somewhat predictable, is enjoyable. The one thing that bothered me the most was the quality of the writing. Although I do not expect perfect grammar or descriptions, the writing still, in my opinion, fell flat. The grammar was decent (sparse grammar mistakes), however the tenses shifted multiple times and I couldn’t help but notice the shifts. The story is told in past tense yet I would occasional notice that it had somehow shifted to present tense then back to past tense. The writing itself is somewhat bland. I would hope that there would be less repetition in future chapters and more vivid descriptions. This is just what I felt when reading this story. I am not at all saying that the writing is bad. It is quite far from it but could use some improvement. Perhaps it will improve in future chapters. This is just what I thought when reading the first few chapters.