My senior brother is invincible and steady
[Description 1: Many years later, Jiang Hongyu, who was known as Empress Gou, would stand in front of many enemies from all over the world. She would definitely remember the distant afternoon when her senior brother took her to see a dog.]
" Everyone calls me a genius of the Dao of Concealment, a peerless Empress. But who would have thought that the true Concealment would be my senior brother's Concealment that no one else knows about!"
"Everyone says that I'm temperamental and that I'm a one in ten thousand devil! But who knew that my senior brother's heart was like an onion, layer after layer. No matter how you peeled it, you couldn't see the end. You could only cry."
[Description 2: Chen Wen transmigrated to a cultivation world that would be destroyed by the Extraterrestrial Demons a thousand years later. He was determined to develop steadily and survive until the day the world was destroyed before leaving the mountain…]
However, it was only when his cheap master thought of something and went out that he brought back his amiable and cute little junior sister.
She had almost completely exposed his family background.
"Senior Brother, isn't this the legendary Immortal Slaying Sword Formation? Why do you have 16,400 sets here?"
"Senior Brother, why did the queen of the Vermilion Bird clan call you Senior Brother? Did you secretly accept a junior sister behind my back?"
Senior Brother, why did the people from the netherworld run away when they saw you and say that you were tattooed on the King of Hell's back?"
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Many years later, the otherworldly demons, who had already infiltrated the entire world and planned to overthrow it in one fell swoop, could not help but fall into deep thought when they saw the sudden appearance of tens of thousands of Primordial Chaos Zenith Heaven Golden Immortals in this world.
"Didn't you say that the strongest person in this world is only a Golden Immortal?"
I know the name of willows, and the leaves have no catkins
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making an OP character but you can't bring the atmosphere into your writing, making the story bland (the author likes it, the reader? never mind) also the most ridiculous thing is the author doesn't understand what merchant means, it seems like you don't do enough research. Take D.R. Stone's novel for example, at least use your brain to attract readers that's why you only get a few reviews. even though you've written more than 39 chapters.