ishigami senku

making an OP character but you can't bring the atmosphere into your writing, making the story bland (the author likes it, the reader? never mind) also the most ridiculous thing is the author doesn't understand what merchant means, it seems like you don't do enough research. Take D.R. Stone's novel for example, at least use your brain to attract readers that's why you only get a few reviews. even though you've written more than 39 chapters.

Ang Creative ng author,mag ingat lang minsan sa grammar at sa mga maling spelling pero sa ngayon medyo tricky syang basahin,sa totoo lang maganda para syang Isekai, Keep it up Geran Ishigami. -rosibalasi

wonderful story, I like the powerful/ independent north type. the most underestimated and underdog rising to the top. His wish for senku's knowledge was the major reason it developed to thus point. Likes how the south was humbled and learned their lesson. the unity, that is how the show should have ended.

This fic was going well in Naruto world. there Mc has reason to kill, in reality, he was killing bulls of Hentai works and the ishigami – Ogino incident is also a good reason to kill. but openly killing police and soldiers indiscriminately, destroying Japan and provoking America is pure Chinese nonsense, who are happy seeing destroying Japan and America in their fantasies.