dressrosa characters

I would make it a real 5 stars if the chapter reach at least till the Dressrosa ARC. In other meaning i wanted you continue tilll there at the very least.

I'm surprised there isn't a villain ,antihero, megalomania, egoist, or something along those things tag, the MC is very forceful, and I'm wondering if the original author has a beef with Dressrosa with how they basically nuked the place,

This one's the one on wattpad right? It's pretty consistent and the grammar's not bad. Minor mistakes along the way but meh. I like the story as it goes past the Marineford war. It gets much better with the Dressrosa arc in my opinion. Hopefully this is the actual author and not some copy.

Surprisingly really good read. I am glad that I gave this fic a chance. I almost didn't because of some newest reviews which gave less than satisfactory stars. BUT HONESTLY, everyone has different taste in reading material, I guess. Kudos to you author, even tho this story is not perfect, it's still entertaining to read. I really like the friendship Enel's built. But seriously he needed to remember that the people in skypia are also vulnerable to WG attack. He didn't want to make base in Dressrosa in fear of consequences, but he made base in Skypia? Without consulting people in there to begin with. Hmf And the situation with Luffy. I am interested at how he would gather a fleet in this story as Dressrosa already saved and Doflamingo already killed. Would he still be allies with Law? Looking forward to the new alliances (and chaos) Enel make in the future. Cheers and have a good day!

Very good novel at the start interesting story, the chapters are a bit short, but the concept definitely deserves to be explored. The world-building is engaging, and you can really feel the effort to create something in the spirit of One Piece, with well-integrated characters and a solid sense of adventure. That said, I noticed a few inconsistencies not necessarily intentional, maybe just some misinterpretations or writing choices but the way they’re written can lead to confusion and create some clashes with the timeline of the original series. 1. Blackbeard introduced too early as a future Emperor Right from the first chapter, it's clear that Blackbeard is meant to become a Yonko (Emperor), which is fine in itself. The issue lies in how it’s presented it feels like his status as a future Emperor is already common knowledge, almost as if it’s publicly accepted within the story world. However, in One Piece, at this point in time, Blackbeard hasn't even killed Thatch or betrayed Whitebeard yet those events only happen around the Water Seven arc. He doesn’t rise to Yonko status until after the Marineford war. As written, it feels like his rise is being rushed, which disrupts the natural progression of his character. 2. Rosinante mentioned as still alive or active At one point, Rosinante (Corazon), Doflamingo's brother, is mentioned in a way that suggests he might still be alive or actively involved in current events. It might have been meant as a memory or reference, but the writing makes it sound like he's still present in the timeline. In canon, Rosinante died long before the main storyline, killed by Doflamingo in a flashback tied to Law's past. Referring to him as if he’s still around without clarifying the time frame can create serious confusion. 3. Dressrosa appears too early in the journey In the story, the crew reaches Dressrosa after only 2 or 3 months sailing on the Grand Line. The problem is that Dressrosa is located in the New World the second half of the Grand Line and is only accessible after crossing the Red Line again, passing through the Sabaody Archipelago, Fish-Man Island, and Punk Hazard. In One Piece, Dressrosa is reached well after the two-year time skip. Placing it so early in the voyage throws off the geographic and narrative logic of the world. 4. Fushia Village too well-known too soon Luffy’s hometown, Fushia Village, is mentioned multiple times and presented as already well-known, supposedly because it's the birthplace of the future Pirate King. But if we follow your story's apparent timeline, Luffy hasn’t even set out to sea yet. At that point, he wouldn’t be famous at all. Again, maybe it's just a matter of phrasing, but it gives the impression that his legend is already established before his journey even begins. These are small inconsistencies maybe just a matter of interpretation or writing choices but the way they’re presented can lead readers to misunderstand the timeline and context. In conclusion, it's a story worth following. Maybe consider correcting some of these inconsistencies in writing or chronology to improve the overall reading experience, but otherwise, it's a solid start. Keep it up!