sabo first appearance dressrosa

the beginning of the story is very good but as for the relationship between luffy, Sabo and his cousin Ace, will he save Sabo from dying. I think we should let him die but he regains his memory thanks to a genjutsu or other.

U should add sabo to the army cause then it give u a good reason to go to the Marine fort war when the Marine kill ace. For now I think u should develop your army ** if sabo joins he should get the sunwokun fruit

Does robin end up with sabo?? Please tell me this before I continue 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

I would make it a real 5 stars if the chapter reach at least till the Dressrosa ARC. In other meaning i wanted you continue tilll there at the very least.

This is good, can't wait to see when Narmi met with Luffy, oh btw akainu has lost his df ability that means ace probably won't die right? Can you also make Sabo to become one of Narmi member Crew? And give Sabo a df with the same ability as Shirohige has, that will be great