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well as of chapter 13, there is not much to say, the idea of this novel is not bad and it has potential. The Authors research is probably lacking in detail since chochang and George and Fred both start school in the same year as mc. The introduction of ChoChang was btw. absolute garbage, she somehow some distance in knockturn alley and lost her way... mc just was there and helped her outside. Mcs Personality is somewhat strange it is a combination of faceslapping introvert. While it is said that he is 100+ it isn't very apparent in his personality and while this itself isn't strange, it is strange that he as a Person from the D&D Worldview is somewhat lacking in when to shut your mouth and when to talk, his conflict with Lucius Malfoy was because of this(btw extremely unrealistic, lucius should be a hobored guest of the goblins so no need to cut in line, neither would be go down to attack a new first year of hogwarts or talk back and forth with him) and his 'conflict' with snape too. btw. it was basically snape seeing mc reading in his class instead of listening, takes a look at the book and thinks he has stolen the book from the forbidden section? Damn that is his second day, author have some common sense. Mc then ridicules him, and mc is then asking the questions he asked Harry in the first movie to Mc instead(why? Those were specially made for Harry) and after Solving them, mc needs to brew the potion that he is teaching them, thinking mc is unable to brew it since how could they possibly brew it as a first year(? Why do you teach said potention then, besides isn't it meant to succeed the first time, maybe not a highly efficient one, but a low quality to Standard one shouldn't be a problem) then mc is asked to write an Essay and it is found out that he wrote said Essay on the side while brewing the potion, as for what the others did in this brewing process that lasts quite a long time? No Idea, maybe gawking at them? So overall it is decend, while there are quite a few problems it has potential and is worth a try, maybe it is your cup of tea?

It seems to have potential. I tick around because it's slow burn it will take time to brew. Can't wait for the next episode.💛💚💙🩵💛🧡🩷💛💛💚💙💙🩵🩵

I love your writing, it is very interesting, captivating and entertaining 🙃 the way you started was like a sip of fresh brew coffee ☕🤗💃 not to mention your dialogue were onpoint 😭😭😭