examples of point of view third person omniscient in novels

Charm point maxed out, inheriting game assets

Gaining weight while single, carless, houseless, 25-year-old Tang Song, could see no hope in life. After facing workplace bullying, the Attractive Man nurturing game he had played for three years suddenly descended into the real world, along with the massive wealth and elite talents he possessed in the game. This is a story about nurturing an Attractive Man.

Selective cutting · Urban

Mythical Card Supplier: Starting with Nezha, the Third Lotus Prince

In the world of card games, myths from China will be re-established! Mythical legends of Earth will also become myths in this world! In this world of cards, with cards as the medium, the birth of myths is welcomed! What does it matter if the body is weak? What if suffering from muscle weakness? In this world without character cards, only equipped with weapon cards and skill cards, I will create a new genre! Starting with the Summoning Card: Nezha, the Third Lotus Prince! Give the world a shock from China!

Dancing with the Rising Sun · Eastern

Once, I wanted to be a good person

Fang Ze transmigrated to a world filled with superpowers and became a police. Initially, he planned to carry out his duties diligently. However, by chance, he discovered that his true identity was actually a criminal who had been arrested. The police faked his identity and made him believe that he was one of them. Then, they utilized his remaining memories to solve the case and identify his accomplices. They had set up a huge operation and were ready to capture him and his accomplices at any time! Fortunately, he acquired a superpower called the Midnight Investigation Room. At midnight every day, he could conduct an investigation on a chosen target. During his investigation, not only could he hear the actual thoughts running through the head of his subject, he could also acquire different items based on the value of the information he collected. Some of the items he acquired included: a mushroom that could sustain its host’s beauty forever; a credit card that allowed its users to loan from the future unlimitedly; a loyal assassin troop that lurked in the shadow; a demon eye that allowed its user to pry into the other world; a kobold that could learn and train with double efficiency on behalf of its master; seeds that could be attached to enemies’ bodies to make them puppets; and tapes that could transform human bodies into rocks when applied. In order to resolve his crisis, he collected information and investigated the case while improving his ability and expanding his influence. Unfortunately, he uncovered an even bigger scheme after solving his case. This entire world turned out to be a scheme! Many years later, Fang Ze sat on the throne of the King of Darkness. Accumulated beneath his throne were the countless skulls of his enemies.

Endless World · Games

Post-Mythical Era: I don't want to die in the third reincarnation

In the first reincarnation of Earth, the immortals vanished. In the second reincarnation of Earth, the dragon race disappeared. In the third reincarnation of Earth, mankind faced despair. Living in the third reincarnation of Earth, Ding Huan does not want to die.

Goose Five · Eastern

Single Wish: Rise Of The Omniscient Paragon

If you had the opportunity to be granted one wish, what would your wish be? All humans on Planet New Earth were given such an opportunity. A translucent screen appeared in front of every human promising to grant any wish to the humans of new earth. You want to be a god?- Granted You want to be a devil?- Granted You want to have powers like Gojo or Naruto or Sasuke or Saitama or Goku?- Granted You want to be the richest man on the planet?- Granted You want the world to end?- Granted You want... Wait, what?!!! Granted?!!! Any wish a human wished for was granted to them!! And then it happened, the apocalypse!!! And our average MC, Corey Junior Zane, due to circumstances wished for wisdom, not just ordinary wisdom though. Unlimited Wisdom, Knowledge and Understanding. Would our MC be able to survive in such a dangerous world without having the ability to defend himself. Would he be able to survive in his school where the common enemies are Smileys? Read to find out! NOTE: There are some wishes that would not be granted like wishing everyone to die and some other things. Just read to find out more. You'll definitely enjoy it. *P.S: Cover Art was not made by me.* *ALSO, READ MY REVIEW BEFORE READING THE BOOK*

Anon22 · Fantasy

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_EmpressOfLight_

2025-04-06

I feel you need to change the type of writing point of view because you keep switching from third omniscient view to first person point of view. I couldn't make it past the first chapter because of that. Hopefully you'll take this correction and fix it because there are readers who don't like it. Thank you.

God of Death: Rise of the NPC Overlord

Bri_ght8491 · Games

298 Chs

bibiyenini

2020-11-03

A good and simple story with the right touch of light drama coming your way. Good points you have in the story: 1) You have an exemplary plotline that will make the readers trigger their butterflies in their stomach whenever they will read this. 2) You have this genuine idea about love that makes me wonder what if my boy crush and my world would collide in the future or maybe in the present time. Negative feedback (for me): 1) I want to suggest that make the point of view of the synopsis into one only. You tend to mix up with the character's mind and the omniscient point of view. If you use the third person limited, that means you only have to focus with the mind of your main character. If you the third person point of view on the omniscient, you have to describe the characteristic and thoughts of the deuteragonists and the extras on the story. I suggest to do the latter for the synopsis. 2) I've seen a few grammatical errors in the first chapters, but that's okay, we could fix it. (Please do not hate me. I have shared my thoughts and learnings from this career to you.) Good job and best of luck, author!

Till Our Worlds Collide

Wateristubeg · Fantasy

172 Chs

PillGrandCreator

2022-05-20

not bad, very passionate storytelling and nice world building, my biggest gripe with this novel is The change of point of view from third person to first person that happens constantly, as a reader it throws me off.

Novel Transmigration : Extra's Life

Sailfish · Fantasy

35 Chs

BIGO_NIGO

2020-11-08

its a good concept however the grammar is very lacking so I recommend using somthing like grammarly, also the way you narrate is kind of weird. You use first person (mc point of view) and third person (narrators point of view). I recommend you use more first person than third because that makes the reader feel more involved with the story. And when you write in third person dont write like you are the one who is speaking but a narrator who is in the universe and does not know about the fourth wall. For example dont say "the mc sat down" say "Lucas sat down"

POKEMON WISDOM

VEGETA_15505 · Anime & Comics

20 Chs

[The World of Female Primogenitor: Picked up by a beautiful girl at the beginning of the game.]

On a rainy night, she reached out her hand to the young man who had transmigrated. Everything started when she brought him home… Book Group: 675710611 Welcome to the author's final work: " She Comes From a Female World "

Empty Fantasy Realm

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I'm just a passing soul master

"What the hell?" Spirit Hall's Holy Son? Shrek Eight Monsters? Rebuilding Haotian's glory, is it our duty? There are so many planes in the same plane that I have to fix? It's so troublesome. I might as well destroy them all." Zeng Xiu felt a headache when he saw so many worlds that deviated from the storyline. He had never heard that there were so many planes in the world that needed to be fixed. You want me to work overtime? That was impossible! Only by slacking off could they survive. This was the story of a traveler who signed a contract with the Goddess and became a World Refiner, traveling through the myriad worlds. P.S. This book is unlimited, anime, novel, etc...

Abandoned the sect

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My days as a singer in the Peninsula

Manjiafen

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I came to the ninja realm with lightning in my arms

I crossed over to Naruto with Thunderbolt in my arms and became the brother-in-law of the fourth generation Naruto ~ This little brother of mine is a disciple of the third generation Fiery Shadow Ape Flying Sun Slash. Martial Nephew Watergate, from now on, I will call you Martial Nephew, and you call me Little Brother. Teacher Yuan Fei, the remnant party of the old era, don't come to the new era to point fingers! My dance is even better than Madara's! [PS: Naruto, Koba, Ninja Realm] The old book "The Core Player of Slam Dunk" has been completed, and the new book "Slam Dunk: My Studying Life in Xiangbei" is being serialized.

Beggar's Sect's Chief Disciple

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After her rebirth, the big boss is abusing scum again.

Before Feng Ming died, she saw her stepsister laughing on the shore. After rebirth, not only did I get a place to follow my heart. She even gave her fiancé with dual personalities a cheat. ** Young Master Yan,"You've schemed to get close to me time and time again. What do you want?" Feng Ming,"I'm innocent!" It wasn't close, it was just a chance encounter! Young Master Yan,"If you appear again, break your legs!" two months later Feng Ming: Why are you always so unlucky? Young Master Yan,"It's great to see you!" Fengming narrowed his eyes. Are you stalking me? Young Master Yan lowered his eyes and thought,"No, how is that possible?" ** In the early hours of the day of the engagement, Fengming was involved in a car accident. Young Master Yan stepped forward to save the beauty. In the end, he died while Fengming survived. hospital Young Master Yan was heartbroken. How could his brother die? How did he die? Fengming handed him a bronze mirror." He left this for you." ** Half a month later, she heard that Young Master Yan had gone crazy. Then, Young Master Yan committed suicide. He left a message: Goodbye! Phoenix Cry! ** Ending: Seeing the phoenix again, Young Master Yan said,"We have been together in our previous lives, and from this life onwards, we will be together forever."

I'll go forward

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