ivf first cycle success stories

From a IVF and sperm donation to challenges and Enemies to strong LOVE..Polished by challenges and trials still LOVE remain strong.LOve it.Thanks author.

Rocky start at first, then there are some interesting chapters, but for me, the mom being a surrogate(not IVF) and her wanting the Mc to be okay with it and with clients sleeping in their house was a bit much for me. I know different universe and all, but no, I'm not going there. you could say this is NRT from son POV.

I don't often give low rating but.... This story just become boring, at first and second cycle it's a great story. But begin on the forth cycle it use the same way as the second cycle, it's join with military. I read DD fanfic to search for some fantasy wuxia thing. Not some political bullshit. The most important note to fix was the story in main Timeline. The cycle was to often. Every 24Hrs is to often

cycle of repetitive and predictive plot, no surprises, he will be humiliated, get stronger, comeback to face slap his previous enemies. .. . only the first few chapters are worth reading, the rest is full of repitive cycle. No sect values

The synopsis and title are intriguing, and the story really is something completely different from all the stories in Webnovel. It has a fresh angle, something unexpected, and lots of drama. You can feel the struggles and emotions of the characters. The grammar, as Author said, needs work but it is far better than some novels out there. It is above average and one can understand clearly. In short, you can ignore it and it doesn't really affect your reading pleasure. Now, on with the negatives. Though it is a refreshing take on all the churned out tropes out there, there are a lot of plot holes that nag at me. Things like not wanting artificial insemination as it is too risky and MIL can find out. Heck, I would think as long as she CAN get pregnant, going for IVF is nothing. MIL should be happy enough she is pregnant. But no, MIL is apparently that unreasonable. It has to be a natural conception. Then, instead of IVF for sister, she wants her husband to sleep with her instead as that has higher chance of success? And MIL unlikely to find out? If MIL is that capable, finding out that the girl is barren would be easy, wouldn't it? Not to mention, having an identical twin walking / running about in the same town? Like, no one will figure it out, sooner or later?? Those are just some of the holes that are quite glaring to me. Author does try to explain some away (like the IVF part) but even the explanation is not convincing to me. If you can ignore the plot holes and logic of them, then this novel is worth a read. All the best Author. The story has great potential. P/S Sorry if the above is slightly harsh.