“I, Logan Carter, Alpha of the Crescent Moon Pack, reject you, Emma Parker of the Crescent Moon Pack.” I could feel my heart breaking. Leon was howling inside me, and I could feel his pain. She was looking right at me, and I could see the pain in her eyes, but she refused to show it. Most wolves fall to their knees from pain. I wanted to fall to my knees and claw at my chest. But she didn’t. She was standing there with her head held high. She took a deep breath and closed her wonderful eyes. “I, Emma Parker of the Crescent Moon Pack, accept your rejection.” When Emma turns 18, she is surprised that her mate is the Alpha of her pack. But her happiness about finding her mate didn't last long. Her mate rejected her for a stronger she-wolf. That she-wolf hates Emma and wants to get rid of her, but that isn't the only thing Emma has to deal with. Emma finds out that she is not an ordinary wolf and that there are people who want to use her. They are dangerous. They will do everything to get what they want. What will Emma do? Will her mate regret rejecting her? Will her mate save her from the people around them?
My review for your story is 5 stars. It deserves it; you portray the characters well, and their reactions and interactions seem natural and logical. But I have a question: later in the story, Gerhard delves into biogenetics. Why would he be interested in having Gerhard create his own warriors? Furthermore, I'll give you a name: the Neos Warriors. They were much stronger than a Primaris Space Marine, but not as strong as a Custodian. To put it simply, half as strong as a Custodian. Recruitment targets: men and women between the ages of 18 and 40. This was made possible because Gerhard asked Lencillus to let him analyze it. The purpose of these warriors is to create a new generation of warriors stronger than a Primaris Space Marine. And yes, a reference: when the emperor created the true warriors, but knowing Gerhard, these warriors will be completely viable and won't end up like the thunder warriors.