once were warriors true story
"You don't belong here." "Perhaps to you I don't but I'm not going anywhere," I replied unwilling to let him scare me. A deep chuckle left his throat as he stepped closer, "I can do terrible things to you-" Damian, and his brothers, were a mysterious sort and every moment with them, I was begging for pleasure. ~~~ When Ivy Thorne got accepted to one of the best Universities for Agriculture, she refused to miss the opportunity. The only problem she never expected was the four men who lived in her father's home would gradually turn her world upside down. Dangerous things don't live just in the wild. Often, they lurked closer to home and if she wasn't careful, she would find herself the center of their hunger. Their own little red riding hood. This story is rated 18+ for explicit language and sexual content. And Then There Were Four is created by Lillith Carrie, an eGlobal Creative Publishing signed author.
My review for your story is 5 stars. It deserves it; you portray the characters well, and their reactions and interactions seem natural and logical. But I have a question: later in the story, Gerhard delves into biogenetics. Why would he be interested in having Gerhard create his own warriors? Furthermore, I'll give you a name: the Neos Warriors. They were much stronger than a Primaris Space Marine, but not as strong as a Custodian. To put it simply, half as strong as a Custodian. Recruitment targets: men and women between the ages of 18 and 40. This was made possible because Gerhard asked Lencillus to let him analyze it. The purpose of these warriors is to create a new generation of warriors stronger than a Primaris Space Marine. And yes, a reference: when the emperor created the true warriors, but knowing Gerhard, these warriors will be completely viable and won't end up like the thunder warriors.