churchill's secret warriors true story

“Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.” ― Winston S. Churchill “Men occasionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry off as if nothing had happened.” ― Winston S. Churchill

My review for your story is 5 stars. It deserves it; you portray the characters well, and their reactions and interactions seem natural and logical. But I have a question: later in the story, Gerhard delves into biogenetics. Why would he be interested in having Gerhard create his own warriors? Furthermore, I'll give you a name: the Neos Warriors. They were much stronger than a Primaris Space Marine, but not as strong as a Custodian. To put it simply, half as strong as a Custodian. Recruitment targets: men and women between the ages of 18 and 40. This was made possible because Gerhard asked Lencillus to let him analyze it. The purpose of these warriors is to create a new generation of warriors stronger than a Primaris Space Marine. And yes, a reference: when the emperor created the true warriors, but knowing Gerhard, these warriors will be completely viable and won't end up like the thunder warriors.

Everyone should read this story once, the way its world slowly unfolds. The way power has been shown in this, I have not seen it in any other story, it is unique. And there are still many questions which when solved in future will reveal the truth of the Land of Warriors.The truth of immortalityWho is Mahavir Mahendra and why did he betray the Land of Warriors? Who are Pankaj, Ayan and Rishabh? What is the secret of their power? Which country are they from?

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I like how you are doing but you need to add more world background to the story and maybe have some extras that are real people that are in on the secret of not necessarily the system just that he can build awesome structures or summon warriors or create awesome armour or weapons???