brene brown telling your story

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I loved this story and the way you developed Brene as a character. I liked the way the cast plays off each other to create this world you imagined. The payoff at the end was sweet. Your world building is something I'm striving for in my own writing. Every chapter had me hooked from start to finish making this one awesome read. Well done from one writer to another. The one thing I liked the most was your way of using the leylines to enhance the magic of your characters and as a power conduit for that crazy battle with the wraith. If I had one small suggestion, I would have made Ben and Kiarr semi corporeal when they were summoned in the story. It would've made things simpler for Brene but that's the writer in me seeing your incredible story playing like a movie in my mind. Other than that, no complaints. I enjoyed it and can't wait to reread it in the future.

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