haruno sakura time travel fanfic

I like this kind of Sasuke. Compared to the Original one.

probs should name it i became useless in naruto also go search the haruno clan in fandom there u can make sakura op from their kekkai genkai they are seriously op

História muito engraçada, protagonista consistente, personagens consistentes com os da obra, gostei muito o autor está de parabéns, nunca pensei que iria gostar de um mc como Sakura haruno

A good fanfic where it is not only about an alpha male which makes trouble here and there and gets every girl between his legs As for the story itself there are some parts which needs polishing but in all it is OK As for the Idea of having Naruto travel back in Time which his Soul/consciousness is similar to TDG but it is great the best is that he directly goes after Hinata now and not for Sakura

It's really good, the transition from the first chapter to the second one is a little rough, in one you have the protagonist point of view and in the other the chat and the show it's already started, but then, then, the story goes to shit, I don't know if the translator uses ai or something, but it's just to difficult to understand those errors, like, when they refer to sunagakure, they put sunagaShiranui Kūre, like, I know the protagonist name is Shiranui something, but you don't have to put it, damn, even some names are just wrong, pakura was the one talking and I just realized just based on context clues, and Sakura didn't even have a proper name it said sashiranui Haruno, and it's just of Haruno that I know it's Sakura, so, scrap that part and do it right or just don't do it and abandon this