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Hi there! I hope you don't take this review too negatively or get offended... To be honest, there are lots of grammatical errors found in your narration, I like the idea you put into the story itself, but please do consider using your knowledge or at least research about past, present, and future tense. Try avoiding abrupt scene changes because readers won't get what is happening in your novel... be patient and try to give a bit of a cliffhanger in every chapter to keep readers on the hook. Add more action or sensual words in order for readers to imagine the scene properly. Please do avoid using "--scene change--" because you aren't making a skit or a script... its not really necessary to put that to let people know that the scene changes.

What in this world! Oh... Wait a minute. It's another world.

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One category of words to avoid is those that are overused in a particular genre. For example, in a romance novel, words like 'love' can become tiresome if used too often without adding new depth or meaning. Instead, you could explore different aspects of love like 'adoration' or 'infatuation'. Another aspect is avoiding words that break the flow of your narrative. Long, convoluted words that make the sentence hard to read should be used sparingly. Also, words with multiple meanings that can cause confusion in the context of your story are best left out.
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Words that are too trendy or faddish should be avoided in novels. For instance, if you use a lot of the latest slang that might be popular at the moment but will quickly become dated. This can make your novel seem less timeless. Additionally, overly long and convoluted words just for the sake of sounding 'intellectual' can be a turn - off. Simple, clear language often works best. Words that are overly brand - specific can also be a problem, as it can make the story seem like a commercial for a particular product. For example, instead of saying 'I drank a Coke', you could say 'I drank a fizzy cola - type drink'.
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To avoid using ill words in a Christmas story, focus on positive emotions and actions. Use words like 'love', 'joy', 'giving', and 'kindness' instead. For example, instead of saying a character is 'greedy', you can say they are learning about the value of sharing.
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