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The strongest supervillain of the world Asura, hailed as the evil lord of destruction, finally fell to the hero after getting betrayed by his subordinates. But an oracle of his resurrection emerged. To defy fate, he decided to transmigrate into a weak runt instead of resurrecting. The supervillain, taking on the name of his host Liam Leonard, now seeks to live his life, join the hero's party to kill the cultists trying to revive him, and then betray the hero at the end. ***** I do write and edit alone, so I'll try my best to keep up by doing some edits whenever a mistake appears. 100 Power stones= +1 chapter

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I’m an international, multiple award-winning author with a passion for the voices in my head. As a singer, songwriter, independent filmmaker and improv teacher and performer, my life has always been about creating and sharing what I create with others. Now that my dream to write for a living is a reality, with over a hundred titles in happy publication and no end in sight, I live in beautiful Prince Edward Island, Canada, with my giant cats, pug overlord and overlady and my Gypsy Vanner gelding, Fynn. ***WORLD'S BEST STORY2014*** Her mom's a witch. Her dad's a demon. And she just wants to be ordinary. I batted at the curl of smoke drifting off the tip of my candle and tried not to sneeze. My heavy velvet cloak fell in oppressive, suffocating folds in the closed space of the ceremony chamber, the cowl trapping the annoying bits of puff I missed. I hated the way my eyes burned and teared, an almost constant distraction. Not that I didn't welcome the distraction, to be honest. Anything to take my mind from what went on around me. Being part of a demon raising is way less exciting than it sounds. Sydlynn Hayle's teen life couldn't be more complicated. Trying to please her coven is all a fantasy while the adventure of starting over in a new town and fending off a bully cheerleader who hates her are just the beginning of her troubles. What to do when delicious football hero Brad Peters--boyfriend of her cheer nemesis--shows interest? If only the darkly yummy witch, Quaid Moromond, didn't make it so difficult for her to focus on fitting in with the normal kids despite her paranormal, witchcraft laced home life. Add to that her crazy grandmother's constant escapes driving her family to the brink and Syd's between a rock and a coven site. Forced to take on power she doesn't want to protect a coven who blames her for everything, only she can save her family's magic. If her family's distrust doesn't destroy her first.

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On a cold winter's night the only sound of a violin playing a very popular song. The servants knew that the Madam of the house is lonely again. It's Christmas and yet their master is having fun with his mistress... This will be the day you will regret everything, Louie Chen... You, your family, and my family will regret it... And when that day comes I'm no longer the person you have met... The documents have been signed and it is already on the nightstand table; the divorce papers; the agreement documents that he can't take anything from her whether it is a living or non-living thing. The only treasures that she has are her violin, flute, the necklace with an infinity pendant that her grandfather gave to her, and her sketchbooks. She doesn't want anything from him, and his family. She will leave everything that he bought for her..... From clothes, shoes to pieces of jewelry... She doesn't want any alimony. All the servants help her packed her things; even though she only got 2 bags. She gave them a simple gift from her as they become her family even though it is not blood-related. At exactly midnight Luna left the Chen Mansion... She hailed a taxi and went directly to a train station. She will be going to City F; from there she will start her new life. ----------- The cover page is not mine..... credits to the owner. This is my first time to write I hope for your kind considerations and this novel is purely fictional... Thank you, Ms. Clarrisa Gonzales, for the cover page

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What are the words to avoid in novels?
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2024-12-07 12:58
In novels, one should avoid using discriminatory words. This includes words that are racist, sexist, or homophobic. Such words not only are offensive but also create a negative atmosphere in the story. Additionally, words that are too on - the - nose or overly didactic can be a turn - off. Novels are a form of art and entertainment, not a lecture. So, words that directly tell the reader what to think or feel instead of showing through the story should be used sparingly.
What are the words to avoid using in novels?
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2024-11-19 19:09
Words that are too trendy or faddish should be avoided in novels. For instance, if you use a lot of the latest slang that might be popular at the moment but will quickly become dated. This can make your novel seem less timeless. Additionally, overly long and convoluted words just for the sake of sounding 'intellectual' can be a turn - off. Simple, clear language often works best. Words that are overly brand - specific can also be a problem, as it can make the story seem like a commercial for a particular product. For example, instead of saying 'I drank a Coke', you could say 'I drank a fizzy cola - type drink'.
How can one identify the words to avoid in novels?
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2024-12-07 16:17
Think about the purpose of each word in your sentence. If a word doesn't add meaning, create atmosphere, or move the story forward, it could be a candidate for removal. For instance, filler words like 'just' or 'really' often don't contribute much and can be cut. Also, if a word is too specific to a very small group or culture without proper introduction, it might be better to use a more general equivalent to make the story more accessible.
Why should we avoid certain words in novels?
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2024-11-19 19:23
We should avoid certain words in novels to keep the writing fresh and engaging. If we use the same common words all the time, like 'good' or 'bad', the story becomes less interesting. Different, more specific words can create a stronger image in the reader's mind. For example, instead of 'good', you could say 'excellent' or 'admirable'.
How to avoid using sexual words in adult novels?
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2024-11-04 01:52
One way is to focus on the emotions and relationships in the story rather than the physical aspects. For example, describe the characters' feelings for each other, like their love, admiration, or friendship. Another way is to use more euphemistic expressions. Instead of direct sexual words, you can use phrases that imply the situation in a more subtle way.
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