sakura and shikamaru fanfic

there was a better way you could have written, you could recruit some of Naruto's friends like sasuke, sakura as a doctor or Shikamaru as crew members but you can't just poach people that's just forceful.

Woooow...it should be like shikamaru and that flute genjutsu girl fight ...first he'll be losing then he'll find that she's a genjutsu user...then he'll acts as if he's traped for her jutsu then he'll reverse it up the whole thing... beating Sakura with his kage style (think of any new forms coz since Naruto is power he spent many days training with shikaku and found new kage style )..tada! Shikamaru wins

The question that needs to be asked, is who is in the Harem? This will either take your Fanfic to the promise land... Or goes trait in the bin like the other Naruto fanfics that don't have Hinata but Sakura. Before people comment on this and say, But what about Naruto! IDGAF about the typical Protagonist, all he does is talk about Friendship with his stupid idea of solving peace without fighting! Pain and Madara plan forcing peace makes wayyy more sense. So for ranting, but I like everything your doing, just try quicken the story until he gets to being a Genin. Also never seen A shikamaru fanfic, man deserves his credit.

finally a good shikamaru fanfic!!! ;-; too bad it seems to be dropped T-T why must you drop this absolute gem!?? ;-; *saddness debuff gained - remaining time: 79 minutes*

I instantly give you a 5 star because of only one fact. Sakura is really the worthless shinobi in the hidden leaf. They maybe someone that may disagree but come on. With all the screentime of sakura and being original team seven she is just dead weight. At first she is a good power up for Naruto for 9 tail form but after Naruto master it she became worthless. Might Guy is 100000000000000000x stronger that her and he is not even seems that important.. She might have some ability but for her screentime and having only that amount of strenght come on.. shikamaru is much stronger than her..