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TruckkunJr
TruckkunJrLv134yr
2021-03-01 03:21

The question that needs to be asked, is who is in the Harem? This will either take your Fanfic to the promise land... Or goes trait in the bin like the other Naruto fanfics that don't have Hinata but Sakura. Before people comment on this and say, But what about Naruto! IDGAF about the typical Protagonist, all he does is talk about Friendship with his stupid idea of solving peace without fighting! Pain and Madara plan forcing peace makes wayyy more sense. So for ranting, but I like everything your doing, just try quicken the story until he gets to being a Genin. Also never seen A shikamaru fanfic, man deserves his credit.

Naruto: Shinobi System!

Raizeenn
4.5
143 Chs

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Raizeenn
RaizeennAuthor

HINATA WILL BE, EVERYTHING WILL BE NARUTO IS WRONG

4yr
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Ultimate_Ciel
Ultimate_CielLv4

bruh tell me which idiot is shipping the mc with sakura ......looks like i need you again my old friend

4yr
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Melshan
MelshanLv7

Add Hinata to the harém hehehe

Raizeenn:HINATA WILL BE, EVERYTHING WILL BE NARUTO IS WRONG
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Psan
PsanLv6

LOL what the hêll. This is broken english in 1 line lol.

Raizeenn:HINATA WILL BE, EVERYTHING WILL BE NARUTO IS WRONG
3yr
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rurik_Aunimoto
rurik_AunimotoLv4

sakura may be useless(only compared to main cast but that is my opinion not that anyone cares or asks) but she does get a sexy body. PS: Love how she is so hated that they don't even got good pictures of her lol my authenticity has gone down the drain.

Ultimate_Ciel:bruh tell me which idiot is shipping the mc with sakura ......looks like i need you again my old friend
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3yr
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Reistlan
ReistlanLv3

hey ppl there will be Haku

3yr
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sin_of_memes
sin_of_memesLv14

you serious??

Reistlan:hey ppl there will be Haku
3yr
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lil_ba_z
lil_ba_zLv4

What abt tsunade??

3yr
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Warlord30
Warlord30Lv4

I agree with but the probLem is that she is a part of the Main cast

rurik_Aunimoto:sakura may be useless(only compared to main cast but that is my opinion not that anyone cares or asks) but she does get a sexy body. PS: Love how she is so hated that they don't even got good pictures of her lol my authenticity has gone down the drain.
3yr
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rurik_Aunimoto
rurik_AunimotoLv4

one of the top 10 or so in her generation (top 5 if only konoha) that I can currently think of not including the movies as I have only watched a few. granted I'm counting her towards the end but I'm trying to defend her not make her seem useless.

Warlord30:I agree with but the probLem is that she is a part of the Main cast
3yr
Kono_phineas_da
Kono_phineas_daLv2

Pain and madara were just objectively right the shinobi world is stupid because they don’t realize naruto and sasuke became existences so powerful they basically did pains plan

2yr
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TheUnworthyOne
TheUnworthyOneLv3

Reistlan:hey ppl there will be Haku
1yr
Phoenix_King97
Phoenix_King97Lv3

they mean fem haku which is the only haku I accept the canon haku is only pretending to be male and I accept no other answer

TheUnworthyOne:
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Rk6T
Rk6TLv4

But Madara's plan to make peace did work though, although not as he envisioned it. After all, he gave the world a common enemy to unite against and understand each other during the struggle. Without a common enemy like Madara and black zetsu then naruto would just be another hashirama, his so called peace would only last as long as he lived, after he dies then that "peace" would end and wars would start again. So in essence Madara was the reason there was peace in the world after.

Kono_phineas_da:Pain and madara were just objectively right the shinobi world is stupid because they don’t realize naruto and sasuke became existences so powerful they basically did pains plan
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Josh1
Josh1Lv3

I have seen this on a russian website yet you havent given any credit to the original creator not to mention the fact that your not telling anybody that this has been translated care to explain

4yr

Demonic_Mori_Jin
Demonic_Mori_JinLv4

Will there be R-18 ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

3yr
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

The story is well written, but to me it is just another bloodline hoarding fic with the same bloodlines as always. I honestly hoped to see him do something cool as shikamaru, but basically hes doing everything to not be a version of Shikamaru... So yea, well written good story, but could do with a more original take on the gaming system thrope

4yr
Apocc
ApoccLv15

Author legit just translated this from somewhere and doesn’t fix the atrocious writing that comes with only translating something. I would recommend to not reading if you can speak gibberish

3yr
Tako_
Tako_Lv4

Harem in the Tag Approved..

4yr
JackBlank
JackBlankLv12

imma need the sauce of the cover for research purposes. yeah definitely research purposes.... ......................................................

2yr
starking
starkingLv7

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

4yr
Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4

I think your writing is good and the story makes sense. For my taste, there are too many thoughts about what he can buy from the system, be it techniques, bloodlines or information about quests. As I see it, 50% of the story is just him thinking about the system. That's kind of boring.

4yr
cable
cableLv13

never wite a novel in english ever again its literally unreadable. the quality of writing is the same as my 5 year old cousin filler filler

2yr
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