ash and delia married fanfic

sorry bro but I kinda feel this story was so much alike compared to kokujin Ntr imagine ash as hiroki , delia as kaede man if you want to have a harem be bold not do it behind ash's back it's not like he is going to oppose for his mother's happiness 😒

c'mon man, it's been a good story till now, but can you proofread it? the chapter 16 there is three or four times it was supposed to be twerp or brat but instead it says ash, and idk if it is the 15th chapter that he talks to Delia and serena mother instead of them saying hello this is Delia, or hello this is (whatever serena mother name is), no they say: hello this is ash's mother and hello this is Serena's mother, c'mon just proofread it a bit. aside from this i don't have more to complain as I'm still on chapter 17 or so, but this going to be tiring if it continues this way

This novel was fine until movie 3, the author promised too much and the only thing he did was to make "fate" prevent Ash from remembering the plot, that he cannot move at crucial moments and marry his mother Delia with a random guy justifying it and even killed the random guy's wife to marry him to Delia, It was pretty disappointing and probably a lot of people dropped out in that arc including me.

one thing that i wodul wasant to mentiuon is et the what if be these alternate realities timelines dimesnions universe so in obe rality dimesnion tiemliene univese delia ketchum is maried the father left on a journey in oen she wa raped i woudld persoanlly say that this is the case eas becasue he life was ruined by ggoodshow and giovanni oen or both of then raped her als kethcum can be a fake name to kepeep her self hidden she is still ash kechum biological mother however she isnt married seriously you dont need marriga e to have children one raltoiy alternate universe dimesion universe she isnt raped ash etchum is adopted she wowudl wasnt chidlren but ot give birth grnated th pain bond is whaat makes a mother and son relaitonship yeah the father can also ebe differnet in one alternate relaity timeline diemsnion unvierse gioavanni charles goodshow proffesor oak hmmm

...Ash is not that strong.. And the fanfic can be considered not realistic the moment sypnosis said MC admires Ash and wants to defeat him. What. I won't read it but I'll support it since every pokemon fanfic should be appreciated.