ash delia sex stories

sorry bro but I kinda feel this story was so much alike compared to kokujin Ntr imagine ash as hiroki , delia as kaede man if you want to have a harem be bold not do it behind ash's back it's not like he is going to oppose for his mother's happiness 😒

c'mon man, it's been a good story till now, but can you proofread it? the chapter 16 there is three or four times it was supposed to be twerp or brat but instead it says ash, and idk if it is the 15th chapter that he talks to Delia and serena mother instead of them saying hello this is Delia, or hello this is (whatever serena mother name is), no they say: hello this is ash's mother and hello this is Serena's mother, c'mon just proofread it a bit. aside from this i don't have more to complain as I'm still on chapter 17 or so, but this going to be tiring if it continues this way

This novel was fine until movie 3, the author promised too much and the only thing he did was to make "fate" prevent Ash from remembering the plot, that he cannot move at crucial moments and marry his mother Delia with a random guy justifying it and even killed the random guy's wife to marry him to Delia, It was pretty disappointing and probably a lot of people dropped out in that arc including me.

I have been reading Ash stories for some time now,and i can say they are very good stories. this is not an exception. Reading Ash stories has now become an addicted thing for me to do. I love you Ash😩💖💖💖

This is my third favourite book of ash...! First is YMDP and second heidi and the lord....three of them carries different stories and so much interesting and admirable...thanks for ash for giving us such stories