aslan and the white witch fanfic

Damien is a hero penny aka little mouse is a strong 💪 and sharp. Getting into trouble without realizing it. She is a white witch. Her "mother" is rotten tomato

Aslan characters reminds me of Richard a bit. yeah, I don't like antagonist's character. I hate how she loves to manipulate Aslan. Love reading the story though somehow always feel sad seeing the development between Aslan and Athena so far.

Loving this fanfic but I want to know witch anime are in this fanfic and will there be new members joining the chat

A disappointing fanfic. The story is full of plot holes. At one moment they might say something, and in the very next chapter they forget it or it simply changes to something completely different. Aside from this, the MC has the power to travel to different worlds and you would think that, given the number of chapters, the story would be well-detailed, but that's not the case. Every time he arrives in a new world there is an endless amount of time skips and, basically, he spends most of his time just talking. A prime example of this is when he goes to Narnia: in simple terms, he arrives, the White Witch discovers him and takes him to her castle. He then spends months just sitting in her castle, and then there's a time skip to the battle against Aslan. But he doesn't even get involved. The White Witch just sends him away and that's literally all he did in Narnia. This pattern repeats itself constantly through most of the story. As for the romance, the protagonist is incredibly dense. He has Hermione and Pansy chasing after him, but he even makes Hermione cry before finally confirming their relationship after 300 chapters. On top of that, throughout almost the entire story, it is hinted that Pansy has a plan, but in the end, they completely forget about her. I could go on and on mentioning many other flaws, like Snape's unnecessary death in the final chapters, but this would go on for too long, so I will just say that, personally, I don't recommend it.

im very inspired especially by how the white witch managed to get where she end up being after a horrible incident. I also believe the first report is not the last reporr