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Short Stories Corner
Author: Mandy_CAHAYAA
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This book is a collection of poignant short stories that explore the complexities of human emotions, the beauty of unexpected connections, and the resilience of the human spirit. Each story invites readers into a world where love, loss, hope, and transformation intertwine to create unforgettable journeys. These stories, along with others in the collection, weave together themes of love, resilience, and the universal quest for belonging. “Short Stories Corner” promises to captivate readers with its heartfelt narratives, leaving them inspired by the transformative power of human connection and the enduring hope found in every heartbeat.

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Billionaire's First Doting Marriage

Xia Yangyang receives her 20th birthday present by witnessing her boyfriend and her best friend in bed. The next moment, she ends up marrying the most eligible and wealthiest bachelor in the city, Gu Qichen. From then on, she levels up and becomes invincible. Xia Yangyang’s jerk ex-boyfriend tries to win her back, while her scheming friend plots against her. Mr Gu comes to her rescue and seeks revenge on her behalf. She has a vicious half-sister and a stepmother who makes things difficult for her. Mr Gu retaliates and teaches them a lesson. Everyone knows that Mr Gu is ruthless and cold-blooded. But no one has ever seen how he pampers and dotes on his wife…

Feng Family's Seventh Child · Urban

Address Me With Your Name

[The pampering story has ended] For a hundred million, he bought her. "From today onward, you're mine, in body and soul." The man held her, declaring dominantly like an emperor. ... ... Lucas Walker: Xiaoye, you are the rib that God took out of me. Xiaoye: I spit, it is you who is the rib, your whole family is the rib. Baby A: Mommy, is a rib the same as a spare rib? Baby B: I like sweet and sour flavor.

Young Master Ru Xue · General

Divine Physician, Overbearing Wife: State Preceptor, Your Wife Has Fled Again!

Feng Ruqing was a spoiled princess with a hideous countenance in Liu Yun Kingdom. She used to ride roughshod over anyone who stood in her way, backed by her father the emperor who loved her with all his heart. Not only did she force the chancellor's son to marry her by breaking the existing loving couple up, but her mother-in-law had also passed out from rage because of her. In the end, she took her own life after the heartbreak and humiliation of being dumped. When she opened her eyes again, she was no longer the bratty princess who was a good-for-nothing. * * * Rumor has it that spirit beasts have become servants in princess’ manor and the princess is devouring precious spirit herb dishes every day. Rumor has it that the chancellor’s son who pleaded for reconciliation after divorcing the princess was thrown out of the princess’s manor. Rumor has it that some good-looking young masters went to the princess’s manor in hope of being her servants were nearly killed by the state preceptor. Rumor has it that the charming state preceptor was looking for the princess eagerly as he wanted to hold her responsible for sleeping with him.

Xiao Qiye · Fantasy

Please Receive Your Order Of One Cute Baby

[The End of the Main Body] She's a distressed heiress with nowhere to go; he's a high-up business tycoon. In the dark, he coldly says, "You're nothing but a tool to me." Yet, her figure haunts his dreams night after night. Five years later, a cute child falls from heaven. Abducted by a mischievous child, she wakes up to find her small bun turned into an enlarged version of the domineering CEO. A certain man shamelessly says, "An Ziqi, you must take responsibility for me." A certain woman calmly replies, "Sorry, but your warranty has expired. I bear no responsibility." Small bun says, "Dad, I've successfully captured mom. Free shipping!" No abuse in this doting story, the male and female leads are pure in mind and body!

Rainless Clouds · General

Secretly Adorable In Your Heart

He is the most powerful man in the Imperial City, the master of the empire's rise and fall. Displease him, and your fate can be summarized in two words - Destruction! But this arrogant woman does not regard him in the slightest! Two years after marriage, she was all about clinging to him, and he was all about divorcing her; she tried innumerable times yet failed, but he successfully divorced. Who would have guessed that on the first night following their divorce, she carefully strategizes and finally succeeds? Ming Mei: "What crime have I committed?" Kang Chen sat high on the judgment seat, "Theft!" Ming Mei: "What have I stolen from you?" "Heir!"

Early October · General
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Editing Your First Person Short Story: Tips and Tricks
1 answer
2024-11-29 07:46
First, read through your story carefully. Look for any grammar or spelling mistakes. This is a basic but crucial step. Then, focus on the voice. Since it's a first - person story, make sure the narrator's voice is consistent throughout. For example, if the narrator is supposed to be a young child, the language should be simple and naive. Also, check the flow of the story. Are the events in a logical order? If not, you may need to rearrange some parts.
What Are the Common Mistakes to Avoid When Editing Your First Person Short Story?
2 answers
2024-11-29 08:47
A big mistake is not establishing the narrator's personality clearly enough. The reader should have a good sense of who the narrator is from the start. Also, not paying attention to the pacing. If the story moves too quickly or too slowly, it can lose the reader's interest. And don't forget about the setting. In a first - person story, the narrator's perception of the setting is important, so describe it in a way that fits the character. For example, a detective might notice details that an ordinary person would miss.
What are the key steps in editing a short story?
2 answers
2024-11-21 09:24
Well, when editing a short story, one of the crucial things is to focus on the pacing. If it's too slow, the reader might lose interest. Another aspect is the dialogue. It should sound natural and help to reveal the characters' personalities. And don't forget about the overall tone. It has to be consistent throughout the story.
Short videos editing tutorial
1 answer
2025-01-18 06:09
There were many excellent Short videos editing lessons to learn. You could find some great video editing courses on Bilibili. These courses were easy to understand, the lecturers were humorous, and the videos were filled with a large number of emojis to make the learning process more interesting. In addition, there were other editing software and tutorial options, such as SonyVegas, Movie Cut, Foxitclip, and Final Cut Pro. These courses covered the introduction of editing software, the basic editing process, color matching, transition, mask and other techniques, suitable for students of different levels. In addition, there were also some tutorial on editing techniques and the entire process of Short videos production for reference. In short, there were many resources that could help you learn Short videos editing by yourself. Choosing a suitable tutorial and software was a good way to learn while doing it.
Editing first draft short story: Tips and Tricks
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2024-12-13 19:41
Trim the excess. First drafts often have a lot of unnecessary words or descriptions. If a paragraph can be summed up in a few sentences without losing the essence, do it. This makes the story more concise and engaging.
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