first person or third person short story

The story is really good but thre grammer, first person, and third person dialogues are really terrible. Besides that the plot and story is really good.

Can you write in first person please? I'm tired of third person.................................................................................................................

Just narrating your work?? What the? ? Use third person rather than first person .. 😟😟😟😟😟😟😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕

The storytelling is good. I love the description of each scene which seems compact, understandable, and alive. It made me feel like I'm sucked into the story. Yet, the problem is the way each chapter is quite short, and how sometimes the author mistakenly uses first-person pronouns although the story is the third person. Overall, it's a good story.

Translation is not good enough. In chapter 1, the third person sometimes change into the first person that's strange ……….………%gggggghhggggvcxdfjjvxASDFGGGGGVV