Item: Prays X Human 1
Rating: 4.4
Author: Shiny_Shirogane

Shiny_ShiroganeLv34yr

2021-01-27 21:38

I found your novel very mysterious. You have a wild imagination which is portrayed in your novel. At first, I thought aren't the chapters too short for WN then on CH 5 and 6 I realized you were making them purposely short to make your novel mysterious. My advice to the author would be to put some time aside for editing as the novel has some punctuation and grammatical errors here and there.

Prays X Human 1

GenXPrays

4.8

16 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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GenXPraysAuthor

The story is inspired by the rules of structure of the slogan # 158, so we are going slowly and safely configuring the plot and the grammar editing among others comes later, for now to write recreating ... I feel happy to have friends writers who encourage, criticize and support the task. Thank you.

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Today I had a fruitful conversation with a real editor level writer (@FACE). The reason I write in Spanish this story. The first recommendation was to change the google translator (https://translate.google.com/?hl=es&sl=en&tl=es&op=translate) for DeepL (https://***.deepl.com/translator) To say that when you translate in google from Spanish to English, and you want to translate back from English to Spanish (I conceived an error by changing words and therefore in grammatical mistakes) With DeepL it is no longer like that. The second thing was to put pauses between paragraphs. The third thing was not to make the narrator's dialogues too long. If you help to improve, bring an idea for a change and it will be done. Hoy tuve una fructifica conversación con un verdadero escritor nivel editor (@FACE). La razón escribo en español esta historia. La primera recomendación fue cambiar el traductor de google (https://translate.google.com/?hl=es&sl=en&tl=es&op=translate) por DeepL (https://www.deepl.com/translator) Decir que cuando traduces en google de español a ingles, y quieres volver a traducir del ingles al español (concebía un error por cambio de palabras y por consiguiente en fallos gramaticales) Con DeepL ya no es así. Lo segundo fue colocar pausas entre párrafos. Lo tercero, no hacer muy extensos los diálogos del narrador. Si ayudas para mejorar, aporta una idea de cambio y se hará.

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