first person narrative story

After chapter 40 they switch to first person instead of third person narrative .. Abandoning ... Why non-native speakers always do that ? Also this a very generic story ...

Good story. Writing's great as well. Love the first person narrative style too. 👌 Added to library

This first-person narrative is truly captivating, drawing the reader into the story and not allowing for any easy solutions for the protagonist to live a tranquil life. It is evident that the author will not be kind to his protagonist and instead construct him and force him to strive for power. I implore that this novel won't be discarded, as few novels on Webnovel have the first-person narrative.

This is an interesting story. So far, the characters are intriguing The writing needs work (the switching from the first person narrative to third person and back can be a bit confusing sometimes) but the story so far is worth reading. Welldone Author.

The punctuation and formatting are all over the place. You have a nonsensical narrative POV, going from the first person to the third person to sometimes the second person. It's d*mn confusing.