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dinchak
dinchakLv45yr
2019-07-22 12:23

Just 11 chapters? Are u kidding me? U got so much time waiting...... Wow....... ................... ... ... Wow....... Fucking 140.......... ...... .....

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Zzectus
ZzectusLv5

Stupid unnecessary review

dinchak
dinchakLv4

You replying to this stupid unnecessary review as u sais is even more stupid?

Zzectus:Stupid unnecessary review
Zzectus
ZzectusLv5

The ending of that sentence makes no sense, but I will just say yes; I did reply to a stupid unnecessary review.

dinchak:You replying to this stupid unnecessary review as u sais is even more stupid?
Yu_Hiro
Yu_HiroLv5

Calm down you two, Else I make a jojo reference.........Eh, why not? WRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRY!!!!!! JOTARO!!! Okay done.

JerDan09
JerDan09Lv10

Hahaha

Blabermouth
BlabermouthLv3

Why are you giving it just 1.5 stars? It’s because of people like you good novels get bad reviews. Useless bum.

NotDaoistYet
NotDaoistYetLv4

So True.

Blabermouth:Why are you giving it just 1.5 stars? It’s because of people like you good novels get bad reviews. Useless bum.
dinchak
dinchakLv4

I think your name suits you..... Good novel? For you may be... For me? It is too fucking slow... It takes 1 whole chapter for a random customer to decide to eat... I felt the update speed was too low and so is the plot... Who the f u c k are u to tell me how i should rate a novel? And are you the f u c k i n g author or translator? Created a new account to flame? If u are not both the s t fu... Ty

Blabermouth:Why are you giving it just 1.5 stars? It’s because of people like you good novels get bad reviews. Useless bum.
Pun1234
Pun1234Lv4

Why are you implying that only the Author/Translator can say that you're wrong? Also, this novel already has 173 chapters on another website. By the way, the rating is of the book it self. Don't convince others that the book is bad just because of Qidian's slow translation speed. Lastly, there's no need to use those expletives, speaking politely won't harm you.

dinchak:I think your name suits you..... Good novel? For you may be... For me? It is too fucking slow... It takes 1 whole chapter for a random customer to decide to eat... I felt the update speed was too low and so is the plot... Who the f u c k are u to tell me how i should rate a novel? And are you the f u c k i n g author or translator? Created a new account to flame? If u are not both the s t fu... Ty
dinchak
dinchakLv4

Explosive skeaking... Hahahaha... Who was the one who called others USELESS BUMM? Now u trying to act smart? :).... Also... I dont see those chapters in this website... If u read it in another website.... Dont come here... And i have every right to say if i dont like a novel... Thats what reviews are for... Or do u think reviews are all supposed to be buttering up the author or translator? If u are not the author or translator...and you even dont read the novel here... So y the f u c k are u here finding faults at ppl like a *****?.... Convince others u say? Idiot when did i ever do that... I said i dont like the initial no of updates... Is there anywhrere where i say.. Pls dont read this? Pls dont rub ur retardness on others... Pls...

Pun1234:Why are you implying that only the Author/Translator can say that you're wrong? Also, this novel already has 173 chapters on another website. By the way, the rating is of the book it self. Don't convince others that the book is bad just because of Qidian's slow translation speed. Lastly, there's no need to use those expletives, speaking politely won't harm you.
dinchak
dinchakLv4

Explosive skeaking... Hahahaha... Who was the one who called others USELESS BUMM? Now u trying to act smart? :).... Also... I dont see those chapters in this website... If u read it in another website.... Dont come here... And i have every right to say if i dont like a novel... Thats what reviews are for... Or do u think reviews are all supposed to be buttering up the author or translator? If u are not the author or translator...and you even dont read the novel here... So y the f u c k are u here finding faults at ppl like a *****?.... Convince others u say? Idiot when did i ever do that... I said i dont like the initial no of updates... Is there anywhrere where i say.. Pls dont read this? Pls dont rub ur retardness on others... Pls...

Pun1234:Why are you implying that only the Author/Translator can say that you're wrong? Also, this novel already has 173 chapters on another website. By the way, the rating is of the book it self. Don't convince others that the book is bad just because of Qidian's slow translation speed. Lastly, there's no need to use those expletives, speaking politely won't harm you.
Patriarch_reli
Patriarch_reliLv10

Reviews are actually meant to review the book there not for foolish fucks like you who rate a novel bad for its translation speed which has nothing to do with the novel also whats wrong with how you speak

dinchak:Explosive skeaking... Hahahaha... Who was the one who called others USELESS BUMM? Now u trying to act smart? :).... Also... I dont see those chapters in this website... If u read it in another website.... Dont come here... And i have every right to say if i dont like a novel... Thats what reviews are for... Or do u think reviews are all supposed to be buttering up the author or translator? If u are not the author or translator...and you even dont read the novel here... So y the f u c k are u here finding faults at ppl like a *****?.... Convince others u say? Idiot when did i ever do that... I said i dont like the initial no of updates... Is there anywhrere where i say.. Pls dont read this? Pls dont rub ur retardness on others... Pls...
kentaro88
kentaro88Lv11

the book is indeed bad that's all!

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Cepheus_7439
Cepheus_7439Lv4

This book had great potential but it became more annoying by the time......the MC was given a system to force him to learn cooking because of his harsh reviews in his previous life and the system was quite witty and interesting but it soon became money-seeking system going to the point of selling kid’s toys,designs for clothes,bikes etc So MC starts a partnership with a chothing company in other world by giving them designs(bought from the system) for share of profits and also shares steam engine as well....the system should be preventing him from doing this as getting money from other venues will affect him from the restaurant..... The kid was absolutely adorable,she was timid,cautious and very easy to satisfy (less demanding in terms of toys,food etc) but just after getting good food and clothes and few people calling her cute she become very daring as well as demanding....she was happy with few copper coins to buy crude pancake but now she demands for desserts,clothes,toys etc....this might be good for a kid to a certain extent but the transformation was ways too fast and before she was more mature for her age but soon became bratty.... The kid is talented but her talent is very exaggerated(she can be called a powerhouse within one year after starting to learn magic) but no one suspects a thing. Everyone know that she is half-elf with white hair with similar personality as elf princess and also has great potential for magic and the MC does not change his name ....They are like ‘MC cannot be Mag Alex because Alex cannot cook and is supposed to be dead’...you can say that the whole world is as dense a harem protag in this situation...... Sometimes the system missions don’t have equal reward-penalty... the penalty is becoming a cripple who cannot leave the bed and reward is a recipe so the MC is forced to complete every mission the system gives him so it is more like system command rather than system mission..... MC tries to become a good parent and succedes in getting rid of her inferior mentality but fails in correcting her other mistake and ignores it saying that it is cute.....the child gives names which sometimes can be called cute but most times it is plain insulting and if the people scold her or don’t like it they become narrow-minded and if they don’t mind it than they are good people....and the MC never corrects her or becomes angry at her.....over one year the kid keeps on giving names where some side-characters laugh it off and people who don’t like it are face-slapped and she keeps on threatening others to set fire on them for various reasons....I think that MC should at least have educated her to call people properly as name calling insults would easily make people angry or hurt weak will people...... And finally the MC doesn’t have any ambitions except doting on his daughter...there is very less story development as MC only gives new recipes and restores his predecessors strength and the kid somehow become Op(becomes 6 or 7 th level out to ten levels) within a year where MC who is ‘restoring’ his previous strength with a cheat system can barely keep-up or surpass her.... There werw many interesting characters but they soon plunge in one directional characters...now I don’t see much difference character-wise in the waitresses who were vivid and ‘exotic’ when they first appeared... I am not going to comment on translation because you may have already read them in other comments...but anyway this is a typical face-slapping novel with a kid and food in the combo

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