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NoblePrime
NoblePrimeLv135yr
2019-08-30 03:35

It started out with a good few chapters. MC is made to become a chef because of his fake and overly harsh criticism of restaurants in his past life. New body is weakened because of underhanded backstabbing and has a daughter to take care of now. The system was quirky at first because it wanted the MC to become a chef with as little deviation in the MC’s journey until it was pigeon-holed into just being a machine that wants money. The daughter was cute, kind, and a little sassy in the beginning until that became her whole character. She will threaten anything and anyone about burning them alive and will give insulting nicknames to customer because she does not want to learn their names or because it has more than two syllables, she is never reprimanded because of nonsense about being too cute to punish or correct her behavior towards people and animals. A promising novel idea quite frankly ruined because there is no development in the character of short-cut taking MC or bratty daughter that will look for any excuse to burn someone alive.

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Anarchy
AnarchyLv5

Maybe it's just the way it was translated on qidian. Kitchen novels translation was more detailed in comparison I think. Even though I only compared 1 chapter from each, it was so obvious it was painful. The lack certain details may be what made her come off that way

Anarchy
AnarchyLv5

It was chapter 173 if anyone wants to do a quick check themselves

Anarchy:Maybe it's just the way it was translated on qidian. Kitchen novels translation was more detailed in comparison I think. Even though I only compared 1 chapter from each, it was so obvious it was painful. The lack certain details may be what made her come off that way
ExpertConnoisseur
ExpertConnoisseurLv5

you guys don't even realize that this is a ****ty fantasy version of "stay at home-dad" on babelnovels LMAOOOO. get with the times. webnovel is filled with garbage originals/pornos and there has been no addition in the past year worth reading. ********** went big and got the rights to "the second coming of gluttony" so they became relevant again. in the last few months, babelnovel has gotten the license to all the top notch modern life novels and I've found SO many gems, one of them being "stay at home dad". its high quality machine translation with editing, so the translation quality is not as good as **********. but the novels are FAR more interesting. I fucking hate babelnovel to death for locking all their top novels and requiring bricks/spirit stones, but right now it's 1. babelnovel 2. ********** 3. webnovel

AllornicGod
AllornicGodLv5

What is the second one

ExpertConnoisseur:you guys don't even realize that this is a ****ty fantasy version of "stay at home-dad" on babelnovels LMAOOOO. get with the times. webnovel is filled with garbage originals/pornos and there has been no addition in the past year worth reading. ********** went big and got the rights to "the second coming of gluttony" so they became relevant again. in the last few months, babelnovel has gotten the license to all the top notch modern life novels and I've found SO many gems, one of them being "stay at home dad". its high quality machine translation with editing, so the translation quality is not as good as **********. but the novels are FAR more interesting. I fucking hate babelnovel to death for locking all their top novels and requiring bricks/spirit stones, but right now it's 1. babelnovel 2. ********** 3. webnovel
UnPro
UnProLv3

W.u.x.i.a.w.o.r.l.d

AllornicGod:What is the second one
Oto
OtoLv14

You’ve done a great job summing up what I wanted to say. The system and the daughter ruined the novel. Even the author’s ignorant nationalism could be overlooked if the story was truly interesting but the tropes were like beating a dead horse. Author completely lost sight of the plot.

Ex_Edge_Lord_
Ex_Edge_Lord_Lv10

why did you write it like that?

UnPro:W.u.x.i.a.w.o.r.l.d
honeyseeto_03
honeyseeto_03Lv3

Pretty much summed up what I was thinking when I read this. The starting was really good but then the daughter just became annoying and throughout the plot, the conflicts just felt repetitive. The romance kinda fell short of expectations as well.

othergeorgebush
othergeorgebushLv14

I agree that the system and daughter's behavior is noteworthy but I don't think they are novel shortcomings. The system's greed made sense to me once I considered it was self aware and biased. The extra income of these side hustles allows the system to be more powerful than the design would normally allow. It found an exploit and spammed it like any sensible gamer would. Putting aside 'cute is justice', my initial reaction was spoiling her could create a monster. After some thought I realized not learning to use her power while closely supervised could lead to tragedy in a number of ways. Raising such a powerful daughter who liked to talk big and fight, but knew how to hold back based on her foes abilities is not a bad outcome.

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Cepheus_7439
Cepheus_7439Lv4

This book had great potential but it became more annoying by the time......the MC was given a system to force him to learn cooking because of his harsh reviews in his previous life and the system was quite witty and interesting but it soon became money-seeking system going to the point of selling kid’s toys,designs for clothes,bikes etc So MC starts a partnership with a chothing company in other world by giving them designs(bought from the system) for share of profits and also shares steam engine as well....the system should be preventing him from doing this as getting money from other venues will affect him from the restaurant..... The kid was absolutely adorable,she was timid,cautious and very easy to satisfy (less demanding in terms of toys,food etc) but just after getting good food and clothes and few people calling her cute she become very daring as well as demanding....she was happy with few copper coins to buy crude pancake but now she demands for desserts,clothes,toys etc....this might be good for a kid to a certain extent but the transformation was ways too fast and before she was more mature for her age but soon became bratty.... The kid is talented but her talent is very exaggerated(she can be called a powerhouse within one year after starting to learn magic) but no one suspects a thing. Everyone know that she is half-elf with white hair with similar personality as elf princess and also has great potential for magic and the MC does not change his name ....They are like ‘MC cannot be Mag Alex because Alex cannot cook and is supposed to be dead’...you can say that the whole world is as dense a harem protag in this situation...... Sometimes the system missions don’t have equal reward-penalty... the penalty is becoming a cripple who cannot leave the bed and reward is a recipe so the MC is forced to complete every mission the system gives him so it is more like system command rather than system mission..... MC tries to become a good parent and succedes in getting rid of her inferior mentality but fails in correcting her other mistake and ignores it saying that it is cute.....the child gives names which sometimes can be called cute but most times it is plain insulting and if the people scold her or don’t like it they become narrow-minded and if they don’t mind it than they are good people....and the MC never corrects her or becomes angry at her.....over one year the kid keeps on giving names where some side-characters laugh it off and people who don’t like it are face-slapped and she keeps on threatening others to set fire on them for various reasons....I think that MC should at least have educated her to call people properly as name calling insults would easily make people angry or hurt weak will people...... And finally the MC doesn’t have any ambitions except doting on his daughter...there is very less story development as MC only gives new recipes and restores his predecessors strength and the kid somehow become Op(becomes 6 or 7 th level out to ten levels) within a year where MC who is ‘restoring’ his previous strength with a cheat system can barely keep-up or surpass her.... There werw many interesting characters but they soon plunge in one directional characters...now I don’t see much difference character-wise in the waitresses who were vivid and ‘exotic’ when they first appeared... I am not going to comment on translation because you may have already read them in other comments...but anyway this is a typical face-slapping novel with a kid and food in the combo

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