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2018-09-14 12:56

I dont really do reviews most of the time but to save people some time and effort of reading this trashy style of writing would be considered good karma. The way the author writes line after REPETITIVE line of information where a useless Side-character would start a sluggish monologue of "blahh" thoughts is basically torture!!!! Writing just to "fill" the pages and reach a number count quota... PATHETIC. i mean sure, it would be fine mentioning how a side character would hate and describing how low he thought the main Mc was... but to keep repeating that damn idea not just for a few sentences... not just a few paragraphs... but a few chapters??! The story progression of a few seconds actually took whole Chapters. It wasnt even an important story arc! If i could rate it lower than 1 star, i would.

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