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Theres a big difference between 1life/sec and 10 life/10sec recovery.

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Yup….. this episode made me drop the whole series now. Cringey chapter

He had 4 blocks, not 4 steals in the previous chapters. Better edit that while its early

Ooofff, first page grammar errors are tough to ignore.

This is the only novel ive read the first 6 chapters in (not even short chapters) and the story is still mysteriously shit. Dropping it

Good novel. The writers grammar and storytelling is great. He/she adds proper description of the scene to paint the image , and the main protagonist is like-able. Good job.

Yeah. The indian english sentence structure around those chapters bothered me so much.

I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."

Bad grammar and poor spelling errors. Tsk tsk tsk