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This is the only novel ive read the first 6 chapters in (not even short chapters) and the story is still mysteriously shit. Dropping it
Good novel. The writers grammar and storytelling is great. He/she adds proper description of the scene to paint the image , and the main protagonist is like-able. Good job.
I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."