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YourYoungerSister
YourYoungerSisterLv46yr
2018-10-22 03:34

I appreciating the TL for translation quality and update stability at 5 star. I just don like all about story development and character design so i give 1 star to it. And world Background is slightly passable at 3 star. . If you ask why? Because i've read it until final chapter. Story so cliche and like copy-paste work from other novel, just. Don't expect any romance in this novel because romance only appear too late in 10 last chapter. Story about its heroin is repeating and repeating. Heroin always goes to high background/faction and waiting. When MC goes to meet her. She always separating to join higher faction. You know it is repeating atleast 5 times!!!! How boring!!! .. About character design, i just rate it lowest beyond lowest of all Xianxia Novel because of what? All enemy doesnt have brain.. All character close to MC doesnt have slightly bit gratitude and always expecting MC to help them but without any values. All of character always look down toward MC yeah so boring. Why do i read this boring novel to end? Maybe i have big dao heart and HAHAAHA OR MOST STUPID CN READER IN THIS WORLD. SO I CAN GIVE THIS HONEST REVIEW TO YOU ALL😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Lordtree
LordtreeLv5

100% true

Fenn
FennLv12

Cant agree more and i cant believe qidian pick this **** lmao

DragaoPikaDeMel
DragaoPikaDeMelLv4

My lost sister?? T-T

yeoc2
yeoc2Lv4

I can't agree with your rating for the character design. While what you said was not wrong exactly, whats what you should have expected from a Xianxia novel, and I think this one is actually better than most.

Sin_of_Lust
Sin_of_LustLv12

No romance? *delete from library

YourYoungerSister
YourYoungerSisterLv4

Yes sure.. It's just different opinion

yeoc2:I can't agree with your rating for the character design. While what you said was not wrong exactly, whats what you should have expected from a Xianxia novel, and I think this one is actually better than most.
YourYoungerSister
YourYoungerSisterLv4

Yes sure.. It's just different opinion

yeoc2:I can't agree with your rating for the character design. While what you said was not wrong exactly, whats what you should have expected from a Xianxia novel, and I think this one is actually better than most.
DearNightmare
DearNightmareLv12

Update stability.... 😂

lukifer1101
lukifer1101Lv14

I loved the whole series

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