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idkwastaken
idkwastakenLv13yr
2021-04-27 10:39

I'm writing this review on April 26, 2021. This book finished today. It's honestly been such a long time since I first started reading this book 3 years ago, and I wanted to write a review to help commemorate that period of time. Now, before I start my official review, I want to say this: This book is by no means a good book. It has a sleuth of issues, but it holds a special place in my heart as it introduced me to this genre, and although my life has changed so much over these 3 years, this book has been a constant I can always go back to. Now that that's out of the way, let me tell you about this book. The translation quality is admirable, although over the entire *2918* chapters, there are several issues. However, on a smaller level, the quality of translation can be considered excellent. 4 stars. The stability of updates is also excellent, with 3 chapters being released per day. HOWEVER, there was this period of time during which not a single chapter was uploaded for 6 months, which is why this Stability of Updates gets 4 stars. Story Development: During the first few "arcs," this was excellent. However, as the story went on the author would just introduce a million different things, and no sane human being could keep up with everything that had happened. The main concept of this book and the development is quite amazing, but the author eventually introduces too many things, and it just becomes the MC finding new things and then beating up people with it every few chapters. 3 stars. Character Design: Remember how I said that the author would introduce a million different things? Well he did the same thing with the characters. At the beginning, there was a smaller range of characters and they were all developed, but as the story progressed, the Author just kept on introducing characters to keep the story going, not the other way around. These characters would often just be punching bags for the MC or just people to "look in awe" at the MC, and would often lack any depth what so ever. The author also outright retconned several characters from the story on several different occasions when he eventually forgot about them. 2 stars. World Background: The idea itself and the scale of the world is amazing, but as I said earlier, the author just introduces too many things which both he and the reader forget about. 3 stars. Now I just wanted to add one more thing before I let you go on with your day. The ending is extremely rushed, and I feel like the author was just trying to get away from the book. Would anyone be kind enough to tell me if they feel the same way? Overall Rating: 3 stars. Had so much more potential, but went in the wrong direction. Still holds a special place in my heart though :)

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SpaceForRent
SpaceForRentLv14

Yeah it is rushed. Abyssal Blade got forgotten as with a lot of things

aditya_sadhyan
aditya_sadhyanLv12

exactly, mostly it's the opposite that the mc gets through the initial 'level's faster and takes some time for the last ones. here though he took more tha 2500 chapters to get to t4 and then went to the the top is such an expressway that everyone else got left behind

amen_heidan
amen_heidanLv1

Icr, the memories with this novel and the legendary mechanic has been my most memorable we novel🤩🤩💪

Morgonpisset
MorgonpissetLv12

legendary mechanic left such a void in me and that's why I'm here. it helped a lot reading this book, countless sleepless nights of my giggity self just reading this and forgetting about everything else was amazing. i don't feel as sad after reading this compared to legendary mechanich. That's why I kinda feel thankful that the character development was trash and the ending was rushed because this book didn't rip out my heart crush it into a million pieces put it back and say "deal it with". but I'm still sad it ended. this book took up half my waking hours the past 46 days so for it to abruptly end because of the rushed ending kinda hurts.

amen_heidan:Icr, the memories with this novel and the legendary mechanic has been my most memorable we novel🤩🤩💪
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I have read up to Chapter 100 at this point of this review. This review is about the negatives of the story til Chapter 100. 1. MC is Lvl 6 as of then. However, the issue is that MC has past knowledge of game-changing events and takes advantage of this. Making him really OP. He has way way above average attibutes. He also obtains the Silvermoon Set Equipment - said to be the best for players below Lvl 10. He has a Magic Weapon and a Secret Silver Weapon. He also has a Forging Exp Bonus too. With his current stats, he is able to defeat Monsters with at least 5 Lvls above him, when other Veteran Elites cannot due to the stat/equipment difference. He also completes Uniques Quests, obtaining him huge amounts of Exp, thus others can nvr get these Quests again. This would lead you to think that MC is the only player to hit Lvl 6. However, it is not the fact. So how then, did the other Lvl 6 players, who neither have the knowledge of the game as MC, nor do they have the Stats or Equipment as MC, even obtain enough Exp to hit Lvl 6? MC can deal 100+ Damage to high-levelled Monsters as compared to an Elite Party who can only deal single digit damage to such Monsters. MC farming rate is obvs way higher than the others....but somehow they still manage to catch up with the MC. Ridiculous! 2. Blackie and co has 8 Lvl 2-3 Bronze Equipment on each of them after grinding at an undisclosed and uncompeted high-levelled area as advised by MC. After meeting up with him for the Team Dungeon, they swap into Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment which the MC obtained during his various Unique Quests alone. At the Team Dungeon, somehow Gentle Snow and her Party have already obtained Myst-Iron aset Equipment and she has a Secret Silver Weapon. This was just after they only had Bronze Equipment approximately a few hours before they left MC during one of his harder Unique Quests - To obtain the Titan's Heart. How then, did they obtain Myst-Iron Set Equipment, if they did not have such a premium location as Blackie and co? They do not have a Forger who can forge Myst-Iron Equipment nor can they complete Quests of MC's lvl due to their lack of game knowldge and skill stats. It is like the Set Equipment miraculously appeared in their Inventory. Plus it was her whole Party not her alone! Flabbergasted! 3. The average Elite has Bronze Equipment of Lvl 2-3, since they can neither obtain Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment due to not having MC's prowess in defeating high-lvl Monsters. Yet they say that Blackie and co's Lvl 5 Bronze Equipment is low-lvled....Umm what?! Do they have Lvl 10 Bronze Equipment? Outrageous! 4. Females in this novel is mostly portrayed as wanting to go and warm the beds with anyonr who is deemed stronger than them, apart from Gentle Snow and Violet Storm. The author has some serious issues regarding females. If this puts you off, but want to read, you better brace yourself as in the past 100 chapters there have been 4-5 occassions... and I bet there will be more in the later chapters. Disgusting! 5. Equipment Rarity ranges from Trash, Common, Bronze, Myst-Iron, Secret-Silver, Fine-Gold, Dark-Gold, and Epic. At least Magic Weapons are introduced with a backstory. However, suddenly there is a Legendary tier which is not even introduced before. And it is mentioned quite often without any backstory. Puzzling! Overall, what I cant stand about this novel so far is the lack of consistency in some areas. The author probably did not want the MC and his Party to be so OP, but forgot about the difference in MC and the others - His expertise of the game due to his reincarnation. And this led to plot holes in the story.

yasensn
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Not a bad story but profoundly stupid. Writing/translation/editing are good and its easy and enjoyable to read but the author has crammed every cliche in the story. MC is a scrawny nobody hat even flies wouldnt **** on but his 1337 gaming skills make him the terminator in real life. Men LITERALLY faint in fear when they see how awesome he is and women are so wet they need a diaper to go in public. On top of that I doubt the author played a single MMO in his life. MC is a melee fighter with no healing ability yet he constantly soloes high level elites. How? He never gets hit during battles since he put a few points in agility. He is a reincarnator who developed a major guild and knew a lot of great players. Does he develop a great team and do dungeons with them? No, only invites his old friend to join him and then we dont hear from that old friend in the next 80 chapters. Then we have the game economy. Its retarded. Guilds are giving millions irl to recruit players but their ingame worth is only a gold coin or two. Yet when MC sells a bunch of gold coins for real money he can only afford to buy some food before running out of money. MC knows where a bunch of valuable chests and locations are but does he go around collecting amazing stuff? No, he spends his gametime in the city zone leveling his crafting. Don't get me wrong. The story is enjoyable to read. But its so, so, SO damn stupid at times that couldn't help noticing and had to write a few words about it. Look at "The thief who roamed the world" for how to do this properly. Or Zhan Long is also quite good.

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