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2021-04-27 08:06

I've been reading this on and off for a few years now. This was one of my guilty pleasures. To be completely honest, the story was a mess. The author would forget about things that were said to be very important, all of the antagonists where the same, and there was practically no character development. There was also that last chapter. There is too much to comment on when it comes to the last chapter. It was incredibly rushed. I mean, the biggest, baddest antagonist was defeated in one hit? There were also drastic time-skips at the end to excuse the power scaling that was going on. I forget because it's been so long, but how many chapters did the first month of the game take up? Another thing is the whole explanation of God's Domain. Creating additions three dimensional spaces? If there's going to be a sequel I can understand why there would be such an explanation and why they started another whole journey. If there is not going to be a sequel, I could have really done without it. It really just got me curious. I'd say my favorite part of the story, and the reason I stuck with it for so long even though it was a mess, would be the world and system. I really don't understand how the world and power system can be so well thought out when the plot is such a mess. There is so much to talk about when it comes to the power system. The levels are complemented by tiers, which come along with their own intricacies. There are skills that are divided by tier along with combat techniques divided by rarity. The equipment system is also very well thought out with the different rarities and level limits. I found the city/NPC systems interesting too. As a word of warning, I don't think I could binge read this because it's so repetitive. It mostly maintained my interest because I was caught up with it, so I had a break after reading a few chapters. TLDR: The plot is a predictable mess, but because of all the interesting stuff that gets brought out, it's still a fun read.

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Raex
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