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Freekbeast
FreekbeastLv56yr
2018-10-28 15:44

DO NOT READ THIS BOOK! The ending of this story is rushed/non-existent because it says he leaves to find a solution and multiple plots are left completely untouched including situation/background of his pet, allies, how the hell his bloodline affects the story and at the end one of the plots which was an obvious flag for an intense arc is suddenly cut out when the involved dude says, "Hey I've conquered 7/9 of what I said and even my clone is as strong as you so now obviously I'm going to stay right here and never appear in the story because there's like 5 more chapters to go and my intentions of doing what I did so far". In fact, there are too many things to criticise at the end. I LOVED THE WAY THE STORY WAS PROGRESSING but the ending will make you feel very disappointed and is a waste of time!

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JPNovelFan
JPNovelFanLv15

Wait, can you explain more about the ending? I’ve got 177 chapters left before I took a break but what happens at the end? Spoil it for me please

Kingzman19
Kingzman19Lv3

Wow. What a good story. But i feel bad too. 😅

Freekbeast
FreekbeastLv5

Time paused before the final decision was made and he walks off into another universe

JPNovelFan:Wait, can you explain more about the ending? I’ve got 177 chapters left before I took a break but what happens at the end? Spoil it for me please
yfred
yfredLv4

Basically the MC seal his world a.k.a the author just suddenly stop to care to continue his story and left some unfinished business.. stay unfinished..

JPNovelFan:Wait, can you explain more about the ending? I’ve got 177 chapters left before I took a break but what happens at the end? Spoil it for me please
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WisH
WisHLv6

From Chapter 1-96, The story starts off with MC which undergoes transmigration into a game world that MC had played and completed. Similar premise novels include dungeon defence and the amber sword so liking those means this novel is for you. Firstly, the story's directions seems just like any other transmigrated/reincarnation novel which is in a strange environment, try to survive as much as possible while knowing the future/overpowered methods. This is how the novels are structured and it is done really well following the adventuring/questing format. While reading ,I find myself interested as there is noticeable progress by the MC in becoming strong through getting overpowered skills and epic items but the lack of variety to the story may make this novel stale or typical if you are looking for something unique. Although, there is signs of kingdom building but it is not yet happening. Score is 3.5 for fast and welldone story. The Character is somewhat lacking as well with the MC's history not being properly explained and how he got into the world itself is unknown and the personality of MC can be supercold in ways like murdering people without much thoughts and although he was a gamer, he don't seem like one with his kind of intellectual mind and him threatening other characters so easily. Side characters are sadly not as focus in the novel so it is only focusing on MC. There are some items that shows the stats and ability but it unused 99% of the time. Got potential but its 3.3 score. World background is 3.9 as it starts off interesting with how there is multiple species and gods alongside different places to visit. The world is going to undergo a cataclysm and MC is trying to survive. The powersystem or class is normal like an rpg but the MC seems to break much of the rule and I always wonder if the world is real or not because the the characters is living and breathing but must adhere to certain game rules or restrictions. The update stability is 4.0, 2 chapter a day so 14 chapter a week which is not slow but it will take awhile to reach the completed 820 chapters. The translation quality is really praiseworthy and the one keeping me from reading because it is really ****** to understand and there is no grammar issues so I can read at one go without hesitation . However, there is a censorship in one of the chapters I read and many information is lost so I did not understand for awhile but it is not the translator nor the author faults. So 4.8 score. Good Job Translator. Overall score is 3.9, above average.

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