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MerryPoppins
MerryPoppinsLv66yr
2018-11-23 15:24

Waste. Of. Time. F*ck this "ending". F*ck this "novel". F*ck this "author". F*ck all of this!

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Hoi
HoiLv4

oof

riverness
rivernessLv12

The ending utterly disappointed me too... I noticed only 10~ chapters remaining in the novel and I was like... No way this is going to resolve in the last 10 chapters, huh? *sigh* Waste of time..............

SilentMild
SilentMildLv6

webnovel.com/book/12961364405159105/The-Legendary-Demon-Hunter Hi MerryPoppins :D hoping to catch your attention. Pls try checking out my work-in-progress novel - THE LEGENDARY DEMON HUNTER. It has 7 chapters currently, pls be the first one to comment and share your suggestions for improvements.

CarrieDababi
CarrieDababiLv14

Yikesssss

BravoEchoVictor
BravoEchoVictorLv4

Fuck the last 5 chapters what the **** did the original author die and get replaced what the **** such garbage. FUCK!

Novel_Addict_98
Novel_Addict_98Lv14

The first useful comment I've found on here. Every other comment is just "Great novel, but I don't want to pay for it so I'm not going to read anymore..." Your comment at least lets me know if it will be worth it to start reading or not.

devils_line
devils_lineLv1

please explain is it a cliffhanger

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WisH
WisHLv6

From Chapter 1-96, The story starts off with MC which undergoes transmigration into a game world that MC had played and completed. Similar premise novels include dungeon defence and the amber sword so liking those means this novel is for you. Firstly, the story's directions seems just like any other transmigrated/reincarnation novel which is in a strange environment, try to survive as much as possible while knowing the future/overpowered methods. This is how the novels are structured and it is done really well following the adventuring/questing format. While reading ,I find myself interested as there is noticeable progress by the MC in becoming strong through getting overpowered skills and epic items but the lack of variety to the story may make this novel stale or typical if you are looking for something unique. Although, there is signs of kingdom building but it is not yet happening. Score is 3.5 for fast and welldone story. The Character is somewhat lacking as well with the MC's history not being properly explained and how he got into the world itself is unknown and the personality of MC can be supercold in ways like murdering people without much thoughts and although he was a gamer, he don't seem like one with his kind of intellectual mind and him threatening other characters so easily. Side characters are sadly not as focus in the novel so it is only focusing on MC. There are some items that shows the stats and ability but it unused 99% of the time. Got potential but its 3.3 score. World background is 3.9 as it starts off interesting with how there is multiple species and gods alongside different places to visit. The world is going to undergo a cataclysm and MC is trying to survive. The powersystem or class is normal like an rpg but the MC seems to break much of the rule and I always wonder if the world is real or not because the the characters is living and breathing but must adhere to certain game rules or restrictions. The update stability is 4.0, 2 chapter a day so 14 chapter a week which is not slow but it will take awhile to reach the completed 820 chapters. The translation quality is really praiseworthy and the one keeping me from reading because it is really ****** to understand and there is no grammar issues so I can read at one go without hesitation . However, there is a censorship in one of the chapters I read and many information is lost so I did not understand for awhile but it is not the translator nor the author faults. So 4.8 score. Good Job Translator. Overall score is 3.9, above average.

Sinfish
SinfishLv6
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