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ShadowdraculLv55yr
2019-07-15 09:24

A good Novel, Some little mistakes in grammar but otherwise its good. Finally a novel that doesn’t have tragical start and no idiotic arrogant enemies yet. The students are behaving like they should a little arrogant but not vicious. Nice world background. Let’s see what happens in future.

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LANANKURASLv15

Well its better to read then machine translation. Quality can pick up. What matters is that translator is willing to have improvment. And grammer nazis. They have killed some good novels already.

Nourhan_RadwanLv2

I agreee

CoastguyLedaiLv14

Wish they finished his other novel first instead of dropping it. That was a good read as well

ShadowdraculLv5

Hahaha Yes They have. I also think the translation will get better.

LANANKURAS:Well its better to read then machine translation. Quality can pick up. What matters is that translator is willing to have improvment. And grammer nazis. They have killed some good novels already.
ShadowdraculLv5

Which novel are you talking about?

CoastguyLedai:Wish they finished his other novel first instead of dropping it. That was a good read as well
CoastguyLedaiLv14

Commanding Wind and Cloud

Shadowdracul:Which novel are you talking about?
ScottyForsytheLv6

Ah I remember that novel. I kind of forgot about it honestly

CoastguyLedai:Commanding Wind and Cloud
Legio9Lv10

Yup

Legio9Lv10

Yup

33147JimLv15

Ty

Autumn_HalderLv5

So true

angelkellyLv2

you're right.

_Felix_Lv13

I require the source of your profile picture

ShadowdraculLv5

Hahaha I have no idea, I have had it for years now, I think its from Beyblade, Only those dragons had this sharp wings

_Felix_:I require the source of your profile picture
Jinmori72kLv3

Any romance?

ShadowdraculLv5

Yup, And its quite good. Not a harem. I like the couple. 👍

Jinmori72k:Any romance?
Jinmori72kLv3

True but, this novel has soooo many mistakes and errors from the names to the numbers it's so consistent that it's unreadable for me by chapter 70,there isn't a cultivation list or anything and it just introduces characters like trash and you don't even see some of the side main characters for like a hundred chapters and it Introduced even more then guess what, you don't even see them again. It's a half-assed Harlem were the MC is a wimp, and we were introduced to his mysterious brother at like chapter 25(idk if that's right) we're he is some super genius, even more than the mc, even tho the main character has a training artifact from Atlantis that gives him a bunch of basically god like teachers for different fighting styles yet he still advances pretty slow, and let's see what else.... There is rasism, sexist(like a ton of it) now I'm gonna say it's a good read until around chapter 50 then it started to get annoying because of all the errors and the translator obviously doesn't give af.

LANANKURAS:Well its better to read then machine translation. Quality can pick up. What matters is that translator is willing to have improvment. And grammer nazis. They have killed some good novels already.
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