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wuxiaworld4life
wuxiaworld4lifeLv57yr
2018-01-12 07:36

petty main character who bows to and obeys his enemies. Strangely enough, mc tries to take advantage of the few people who seem friendly to him. especially the friendly ones who are in a desperate situation and have strong/rich background. the ones who could help his family's living situation in the real world. Instead he tries to scam these friendly rich people into buying water and jerky for tens of thousands of dollars. ALL OF THIS WHILE he discovered an OP cheat of a godstone that he keeps in his room that could enable him to make billions. someone tell me where i'm wrong please. also the conversation just feels extremely unnatural and choppy. definitely fed up with this ****ty story peace out boys

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human101
human101Lv6

huh, you're only at chapter 28

wuxiaworld4life
wuxiaworld4lifeLv5

yeah all that happens by the time chapter 28 comes along. it really triggered me that the first truly nice person this mc met ended up getting extorted - which goes against all protagonists in wuxia novels. treat me nice and i repay it tenfold. treat me poorly and i kill 9 generations etc. in this novel, the mc has the most insane luck but still decides to cower to enemies and harms friends. i read a lot of novels (nearly all of them.) and i would have to say that this story is prolly one of the worst. also doesn't help that the conversations are translated to be: oh. hello. you are weak. yes sorry goodbye. check novelupdates for more honest reviews :)

ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerLv5

no your not wrong i stomached it to the point where the girl send a message saying "if i dont see you here in x time then blah blah blah!!!!" from then i just removed this **** from listing i cant read a story about a MC with no ball or backbone

Bluefenex
BluefenexLv5

Fool is the one who believes he has read almost every novel. Sorry to mention that way but it's the same thing as saying that you've seen almost every anime. or almost all movies. his comment does not make much sense, his father was probably killed by the Starry Group, his mother is being strangled by the family, at first he needed 2 million, to pay the family sincerely do not know what reason, then need money for the rates. brother school and then needed +/- 20 million, to be able to give the best for sister. and that's not to mention that everything and everyone has turned up for him at the beginning because of a small mistake. he was hunting only black beetles. in his situation having to take care of the family. with the mother clearly afraid of something. I honestly do not think that the father's problem ended with his death. he had no one to back him into the first shrine of God. it literally ran up from scratch. so in his situation I think even you would do the same.

wuxiaworld4life:yeah all that happens by the time chapter 28 comes along. it really triggered me that the first truly nice person this mc met ended up getting extorted - which goes against all protagonists in wuxia novels. treat me nice and i repay it tenfold. treat me poorly and i kill 9 generations etc. in this novel, the mc has the most insane luck but still decides to cower to enemies and harms friends. i read a lot of novels (nearly all of them.) and i would have to say that this story is prolly one of the worst. also doesn't help that the conversations are translated to be: oh. hello. you are weak. yes sorry goodbye. check novelupdates for more honest reviews :)
wuxiaworld4life
wuxiaworld4lifeLv5

lmao dont be so butthurt i couldnt read your salty response bc i dont remember this **** novel at all anymore LOL have fun with it though you prolly enjoy poor literature

Bluefenex:Fool is the one who believes he has read almost every novel. Sorry to mention that way but it's the same thing as saying that you've seen almost every anime. or almost all movies. his comment does not make much sense, his father was probably killed by the Starry Group, his mother is being strangled by the family, at first he needed 2 million, to pay the family sincerely do not know what reason, then need money for the rates. brother school and then needed +/- 20 million, to be able to give the best for sister. and that's not to mention that everything and everyone has turned up for him at the beginning because of a small mistake. he was hunting only black beetles. in his situation having to take care of the family. with the mother clearly afraid of something. I honestly do not think that the father's problem ended with his death. he had no one to back him into the first shrine of God. it literally ran up from scratch. so in his situation I think even you would do the same.
wuxiaworld4life
wuxiaworld4lifeLv5

and i meant 'all' the novels on this site LOL

wuxiaworld4life:lmao dont be so butthurt i couldnt read your salty response bc i dont remember this **** novel at all anymore LOL have fun with it though you prolly enjoy poor literature
KermitGunner
KermitGunnerLv4

your name is **********4life. Qidian is wuxi's enemy. you are obviously biased. T_T

DankoLord
DankoLordLv4

In this world the stronger the better.Desperete time desperete need.Desperete money.In their world dog eat dog so ...

DreamzWork
DreamzWorkLv13

friend? lol you sure those are friendsss..?

John_Ben_1763
John_Ben_1763Lv1

Nice comments I wish to know you more you can text me on my hangout nikejohn124@gmail.co

Wusse05
Wusse05Lv10

so basically, an mc that acts more like a human being is bad? And the part about him cowering before enemies and extorting his friends is quite simply not true.

wuxiaworld4life:yeah all that happens by the time chapter 28 comes along. it really triggered me that the first truly nice person this mc met ended up getting extorted - which goes against all protagonists in wuxia novels. treat me nice and i repay it tenfold. treat me poorly and i kill 9 generations etc. in this novel, the mc has the most insane luck but still decides to cower to enemies and harms friends. i read a lot of novels (nearly all of them.) and i would have to say that this story is prolly one of the worst. also doesn't help that the conversations are translated to be: oh. hello. you are weak. yes sorry goodbye. check novelupdates for more honest reviews :)
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littlefrench
littlefrenchLv14

first thing : I enjoy this novel the reasons : - the MC s poised, he keeps his calm even when he is insulted, as he needs to protect his family, so far he's the only that's really done that in what I've read, at the same time he doesn't let weaker people step on him when it shouldn't happen - the MC is not a complete cheat like existence like it often happens, there is a system but everyone has access to it. so far there's only one time during which it can be said there's plot armor (the stone) - In the "cultivation world" there cannot be the intervention of someone overwhelmingly stronger as they go to other areas after becomming strong enough and they can't come back, I think it is great for the stability of the novel, and it enshures there won't be a ridiculous jump in strength coming from nowhere for the MC - the world building has started in the 70ish chapters, so don't worry about it, in any case the novel is likely to have more than 600 chapters (or so I think - in any case it does have a great potential in terms of number of chapters) the last point leads to me criticizing the haters : how THE HELL can you criticize a novel on its world building when you've only read as few as 10-20-30 chapters ???!? are you for real ?! I mean, seriously all the novels I've read on Qidian so far are bound to have hundreds if not more than a thousand chapters, just give the novels a chance to grow and set a foundation for the characters before the world, you are just being ridiculous otherwise, it's like relying on first impression to categorize people, it's nonsensical Thanks for reading me :)

WeebMonsieur
WeebMonsieurLv5

The world is advance where a slightly rich friend can have a personnel jet that can be land in front of people courtyard without any freaking rule to disallow that I mean what if the jet malfunction and hit the building , people can die from any random explosion just because the stupid decision human can make (at least explain that the jet is automatic or have set pattern of air highway since it's the future ) the author don't even describe how futuristic the world is like how the gadget and tool efficiency .Now the current story is just a forced Xianxia in a Sci-fi world which is F*cking terrible with no story development about how normal civilian is given right to even go to the *mysterious space called God’s Sanctuary, where lived numerous unknown creatures. Here, humans will make the greatest leap in their evolution to create the most glorious epoch in history* quote from the synopsis , IT'S JUST A NEW DIMENSION OR A POCKET REALM ,THE STORY DON'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW DO THEY EVEN KNOW IT'S A SPACE AND NOT TELEPORT SOMEWHERE ELSE. THERE ARE NO SCIENTIST AT ALL JUST FORCED XIANXIA IN THE FUTURE WHERE TECHNOLOGY IS USELESS INSIDE THE SPACE AND SUDDENLY ALL PEOPLE DON'T CARE ABOUT OTHER DYING BECAUSE OF STRONG MONSTER AS IF IT'S A GAME .OH WAIT IT IS HALF A GAME BECAUSE THE UNWORKING TECHNOLOGY SUDDENLY BECAME A SYSTEM THAT CAN MEASURE EVERY UNIT OF GENE AS STAT THAT IMPROVE YOUR MARTIAL ART'S POWER (GENE DON'T WORK LIKE THAT AND GENE DOESN'T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH SOUL SO THAT MIRACLE LIKE A BEAST SLAIN SUDDENLY CAN GIVE YOU ARMOR WITHOUT EXPENDING ANY ENERGY FROM ANYWHERE JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE LUCKY ARE STUPID!) The character literally don't have fear in this world as if everyone just got out of world war 7 and don't care people died by them or to be precised just next to them ,until the author find it convenient to make them scared or traumatised(oh my just like it's normal to see someone dies in battle again'st raid boss note:RPG) there are no real true professional for hire that can be find here like mercenary , assassin/bounty hunter , SOLDIEEEEERRRRR that is send there to investigate but college people who just learn a little bit of martial art is send there as if every government want it's people to live past 500 years for no cost and everyone can teleport in and out within a convenient room for everyone each , the teleport room have no cost and tax doesn't exist in this world. I'M DONE

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