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Daoist_Tardragon
Daoist_TardragonLv127yr
2017-09-27 05:33

i ll give it a full 5 stars for now. Wish there was sample chapter for these new books to see if it would catch my interest.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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GodAbyss
GodAbyssLv13

Wish the same like the first 10 chapters

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Lonelytree
LonelytreeLv6

That function is coming soon :)

GodAbyss:Wish the same like the first 10 chapters
GodAbyss
GodAbyssLv13

Aight nice can't wait for it 😊

Lonelytree:That function is coming soon :)
monkeyDroger
monkeyDrogerLv1

Cool

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Tashady
TashadyLv15

You can delete it out of your library if you don't like it. It's the same as downloading chapters for off-line reading.

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Daoist_Tardragon
Daoist_TardragonLv12

The books you vote on have not been released so u cant add too libary then delete.

Tashady:You can delete it out of your library if you don't like it. It's the same as downloading chapters for off-line reading.
Daoist_Tardragon
Daoist_TardragonLv12

Sounds Great

Lonelytree:That function is coming soon :)
Daoist_Tardragon
Daoist_TardragonLv12

I agree that would be even better

GodAbyss:Wish the same like the first 10 chapters
Onion_Eternal
Onion_EternalLv14

here a reply for you

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Daoist_Tardragon
Daoist_TardragonLv12

thanks

Onion_Eternal:here a reply for you
Zero0
Zero0Lv6

Its a great novel.Its a great novel.Its a great novel.

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Daoist_Tardragon
Daoist_TardragonLv12

thanks

Zero0:Its a great novel.Its a great novel.Its a great novel.
hola1829
hola1829Lv5

haha

hola1829
hola1829Lv5

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PocketSand
PocketSandLv5

280 chapters in. This novel desperately needs an editor. Disciples become discipline, males turn into females, tenses get mixed up a lot and sentence construction is often awkward. Typos happen to everyone but seeing multiple such cases in every chapter quickly becomes annoying. Overall story development and character design is very average. MC lacks both a real goal other than "get strong" and a real rival. So although the fights aren't exactly poorly written, they feel dull to read because there is absolutely no suspense. Similarly his growth doesn't feel special as there is no risk or struggle involved. MCs master seems to exist only to act surprised at his progress. I do appreciate that his romantic interest remains relevant throughout the story, however the way its presented could use some work. Telling me what kind of emojis his girlfriend uses in her texts is just a waste of space. Not to mention she doesn't have anything going for her other than looks, which brings us to the next issue. A lot of characters seem to serve no purpose other than cheering in tournaments. They bring neither drama nor comedy, they don't give insight into the world, they don't help develop MC. Especially the female characters - typically to the genre, they exist mostly for romance. For a novel set in past, this could be explained somewhat convincingly, however for one set in modern times? Can't say much negative about world building as its basically a clone of modern world with martial artists thrown into it. However it does lack exposition in this regard - surely the inner workings and rules of society should have changed to accommodate people with supernatural abilities, yet the novel seems to barely gloss over such issues. TL;DR Overall, its not the worst novel, especially if you can ignore its weak points and glaring lack of editing. However, would I put it on my recommended list? No.

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